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Diablo10
27-07-2006, 08:25 PM
Here it is sorry for the quality its my photo hosting who does it cause its to big here it is rate out of 10 and c+c plz http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y229/daytona901/viper2ndlayout.jpg

Recursion
27-07-2006, 08:26 PM
nice try but it isnt very good. FOnts are wrong, writing too big, the habbo on the banner is stretched to much horizontaly and not enough color

Diablo10
27-07-2006, 08:29 PM
k thanks for the comments

Flauvo
27-07-2006, 08:30 PM
*Flauvo waits for Joe's analogy*

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Slixor
27-07-2006, 08:31 PM
1 word.

rubbish

SimplyTech
27-07-2006, 08:31 PM
ill get him 1 sec

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gosling
27-07-2006, 08:33 PM
1 word.

rubbish4 letters stfu :o

err..the colours are a bit dark and plain and the bloke on the banners a bit wide and if you're going to be using the black font against the dull, teal, bg it will be a bit illegible? :S

JoeComins
27-07-2006, 08:37 PM
You can wait for my analoge a little longer!

Cons:
Saved as a poor file type, making it look even worse.
The banner has no border.
The banner has nothing to do with habbo.
Blue and Green are horrible.
The headers for the boxes are too big, and so it then text.
All of the text is way too big and ugly.
There is no boundaries.

Pros:
You have a nice structer, just ruinted by the cons above.
These some nice ideas, just poorly executed.

Help:
Try looking at an exsisting site, take a screenshot, and use some of the colours, as if they are on a good site, they will constrast well together.

Remember:
Dont make it too big and ugly.
Use colours that compliment each other.
Less is more

alexxxxx
27-07-2006, 08:40 PM
Colours arn't too great, why not use brighter ones.
The banner is too complicated/nothing todo with habbo
Fonts/Text are too plain, wrong fonts.

I agree with Joe on the Pros.

ColyTom
27-07-2006, 09:16 PM
I don't like it very much, no offence

ClubTime
27-07-2006, 09:41 PM
Font is too big, dont like banner and colors are horrible. Nice try.

Diablo10
27-07-2006, 09:43 PM
thanks to everyone :) i hope i become better as i make more layouts

Matteeeeee
27-07-2006, 09:45 PM
You can wait for my analoge a little longer!

Cons:
Saved as a poor file type, making it look even worse.
The banner has no border.
The banner has nothing to do with habbo.
Blue and Green are horrible.
The headers for the boxes are too big, and so it then text.
All of the text is way too big and ugly.
There is no boundaries.

Pros:
You have a nice structer, just ruinted by the cons above.
These some nice ideas, just poorly executed.

Help:
Try looking at an exsisting site, take a screenshot, and use some of the colours, as if they are on a good site, they will constrast well together.

Remember:
Dont make it too big and ugly.
Use colours that compliment each other.
Less is more

Why does he get C&C and i didint? :@

JoeComins
27-07-2006, 09:47 PM
Wheres your thread dude?

Matteeeeee
27-07-2006, 09:49 PM
within the top 3. in this forum :)

Diablo10
27-07-2006, 09:49 PM
lmao anyone interested on buying shoutcast server?

Evasion
27-07-2006, 09:53 PM
I like the stucture, but the fonts are wrong, the background of the banner is wrong, and the colours are wrong. And you can't spell "copywrighted". Any way it's ok.

Matteeeeee
27-07-2006, 09:54 PM
just needs abit more shading and colours, on paint double click the colour tray and prt screen type of colours you like ie blues that way you have alot to choose from :)

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