UPDATE + splash page.

[[Oli]]

edits:
The shades above the navigation.
Borders.
Maybe some other stuff i cant think of at the moment.


On splash page i am gonna change the text a little bit that sais "welcome...."


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[Kieran]

Love the splash page. On the layout i like the header but not the things down the side. They remind me of elephant legs :P
Apart from that, nice 9/10

[[Oli]]

Love the splash page. On the layout i like the header but not the things down the side. They remind me of elephant legs :P
Apart from that, nice 9/10

Hehe, thank you.
I quite like the side parts (@the one guy) they are less 'blocky'.
and tbh, i like it that its one on top & bottom instead of one big bar.

[Xen]

Much better, love the splash page, love the borders now, and, it's great.

[JoeComins]

Love the splash, but the bottom half of the layout just isnt the nicest

[[Oli]]

Much better, love the splash page, love the borders now, and, it's great.


Love the splash, but the bottom half of the layout just isnt the nicest


@Xen: Thank You ;)

@Joe: yeh, befor i posted i was already thinking of possible changes to the bottom.

[Xen]

;2128067']@Xen: Thank You ;)

@Joe: yeh, befor i posted i was already thinking of possible changes to the bottom.
Maybe lower the opacity or spread of the green glow...

[Recursion]

would the red ringed bit expand so that the layout would be 100% height?:

http://www.****************/uploads/63bf1c5e51.png (http://www.****************)

[[Oli]]

I do not know much php or div using, but if i use tables i could get it expandeble yes.
(i think)

[Hitman]

I like the layout, it is very nice and a lot of things happening. Probably not something i'd choose for my site, but I like it.

The splash page is awesome, I really like that. 9/10 on the splash page, I'm not sure what scan lines would look like in the background... thats something that might make it even nicer.

Over all 8/10 (for layout). Great work!

[Recursion]

it would be very very good if expandable to 100% height. 9/10 +REP ;D

[ADAM:]

Would you be able to write a tutorial on how you did your splash page?

I really like it and its something i would buy :)

[[Oli]]

UPDATE

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[Y!]

That layout is amazing and the splash page looks great!!

[Xen]

Yup, that officially rocks.

+Rep Oli.

[Alterate]

I like the splash but it seem's bare with the plain black background, maybe you could use the green 'glow =l' on the bottom of the template.

[Xen]

I like the splash but it seem's bare with the plain black background, maybe you could use the green 'glow =l' on the bottom of the template.
Isn't a splash page ment to be just an image to enter the main site?

[[Oli]]

Isn't a splash page ment to be just an image to enter the main site?

well it is isnt it.
the one i just posted (last one)
is the template, splash one is on page before.

[Xen]

;2128696']well it is isnt it.
the one i just posted (last one)
is the template, splash one is on page before.
Post it on neowin.net and deviant art and see what kind of a response you get.

[Alterate]

Isn't a splash page ment to be just an image to enter the main site?

Doesnt stop him from adding abit more to the image.. By adding a green glow on the underneath

[[Oli]]

Yeh maybe, but not sure if that would look good the green shade.

OFF Topic: since 20 minutes (00:20 here) i am now 16 years old
woooo

[Alterate]

;2128803']Yeh maybe, but not sure if that would look good the green shade.

OFF Topic: since 20 minutes (00:20 here) i am now 16 years old
woooo

Only one way to find out. And happy birthday

[Sygon.]

Man i love how your improving rapidly, keep at it your very creative.

[Oracle:]

From the first on-whole expression it's WOW. I think your technical drawing skills are improving at a great speed. Although I am guessing English isn't your first language I think the navigation should spell 'Affiliates' which is easily corrected.

Where is says Oliver in the top I don't like the idea of a pixel font on a heavy layout with immense technical drawings around it. The logo is well set out, although a bit overused in a few places it looks good with the P and I would definately keep that.

On the rollover on the navigation I think you should look the outerglow or whatever you put on the text as it stands out ugly for me, but I have a really good lookout for things like that, as most people wouldn't care.

The content box is amazing and I have no criticism for that on the individual term, but on the whole I think the logo is too repetative as you use it four times, lose it in the background which is rather hidden due to opacity lowered.

The green glow coming out of the sidebars are brilliant and I would love to know how long it took you to make them look quite so realistic for a web template design, as you would normally see things looking that realistic in 3D work so well done on that.

Overall I would say there is still some room for improvement on your skills and keep practicing. I give it a 8.99/10 and some REP if I can.

[Xen]

Doesnt stop him from adding abit more to the image.. By adding a green glow on the underneath
Even then it'd still be an image :rolleyes:

[[Oli]]

From the first on-whole expression it's WOW. I think your technical drawing skills are improving at a great speed. Although I am guessing English isn't your first language I think the navigation should spell 'Affiliates' which is easily corrected.

Where is says Oliver in the top I don't like the idea of a pixel font on a heavy layout with immense technical drawings around it. The logo is well set out, although a bit overused in a few places it looks good with the P and I would definately keep that.

On the rollover on the navigation I think you should look the outerglow or whatever you put on the text as it stands out ugly for me, but I have a really good lookout for things like that, as most people wouldn't care.

The content box is amazing and I have no criticism for that on the individual term, but on the whole I think the logo is too repetative as you use it four times, lose it in the background which is rather hidden due to opacity lowered.

The green glow coming out of the sidebars are brilliant and I would love to know how long it took you to make them look quite so realistic for a web template design, as you would normally see things looking that realistic in 3D work so well done on that.

Overall I would say there is still some room for improvement on your skills and keep practicing. I give it a 8.99/10 and some REP if I can.

Thank you.
- And yes, i thought the pixel font in the top banner didnt look good to.
But nobody mentioned it so... il have a look at how to change that.

- After relooking at the template, i have to admit, i now see i indeed 'overused' my logo. (for those who didnt see, its an O with an P in it > Olivier Pauwels)

- Room for improvements is always there, nothings "perfect".

- I started last not yesterday but day befor at 23:00 untill 01:00
then i had done the banner.
Yesterday i worked on it, like half of the day i think.

;)

EDIT: im gonna try and code it now.

[[Oli]]

sorry for 2x post but I WAS EDITTING my post, but when i clicked save it came up as 15 mins have passed etc. :(

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Small update:
- outer glow on text of buttons lowerd.
- Font in top banner changed.

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http://www.****************/uploads/ca6d146c9f.png

EDIT: 1 or 2 logo's are getting removed to, to prevent overuse. The one on the background of the text. And then am not sure if i should remove another one

[Josh-H]

That fab ;) Much improvement over previous

[[Oli]]

That fab ;) Much improvement over previous

Thank You,
And also, if i get it coded, il show it here.
;)

[Alterate]

Even then it'd still be an image :rolleyes:

What? I'm not trying to make him make it anythink but a image.. I'm just telling him to try out a green glow underneath to see if it look's good as it look's abit dull as it is.