Second Alt - Desk Idea!

[FAIRYS0FT]

Hey,

As I am just starting with this alting "thang", I would appreciate any critisism or advice that you could give.

Thankyou for looking!


http://img238.exs.cx/img238/3849/desk7ez.png

[samuel]

School boy desk ;D
10/10
Good job

[Infrontation]

:) Nice Job,Something about it that makes it not look so habboish :) But 8.25/10 :eusa_danc

[FAIRYS0FT]

Thanks guys,

I was thinking it didn't look habboish for some reason aswell, but maybe we think that for different reasons, the reasons I think it isn't are because;

The shading of the open book looks "TOO" 3d?
There is not grain or texture on the wood, *It's meant to be like a beech style* not quite sure how to do it, I don't want it to be too detailed?

What do you guys think? What makes you think it's not habbo-ey :)

Thankyou!

Fairy ~

[Soyers]

Its beautiful :D it looks a little unhabboy (wow we make up some odd words) because there is -so- much detail, but please dont change it! 10/10

[Scriptermone]

10/10 Keep it up , next make a giant pencil :D

[FAIRYS0FT]

Hehe, a giant pencil?

I'm a bit weird actually I'm making a picnic basket...It's pretty hard but i'll post it a bit later, i've got to add some bread and *stuff* lol

Thanks for the great ratings!

[Bef]

Try giving it a black outline. If you look at habbo furni it always has a black outline
Something like this
http://img246.echo.cx/img246/3285/fairysdesk7as.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

It is absoloutly amazing though. You said your just starting out. WOW! You have an amazing talant! Your work already looks soo professional.

[Luayminator]

Do not give it a black line, that is un profesional, Black lines go for dark drawings only.

[Mr.Kylee]

That's not true you can keep black line or not.

Choosing what type of outlines to use is basically when you decide on the style you are aiming for. Black outlines usually give your scenes a cartoonish feel.

[Taea]

Oh that looks so good 10/10 :D

[Punky]

Wow that is really cute, I used to have a desk like that when I was little, only mine had paint stains all over it lol. 10/10 + rep

[.:SweetHeart:.]

Awesomeses 10/10 The black outline makes it look more habboy

[-=rooty987=-]

10/10 Keep it up , next make a giant pencil :D

Done it already :P

well i did!

[Syco]

Thanks guys,

I was thinking it didn't look habboish for some reason aswell, but maybe we think that for different reasons, the reasons I think it isn't are because;

The shading of the open book looks "TOO" 3d?
There is not grain or texture on the wood, *It's meant to be like a beech style* not quite sure how to do it, I don't want it to be too detailed?

What do you guys think? What makes you think it's not habbo-ey :)

Thankyou!

Fairy ~

It dosent look like habbo because...
Its 2 dam gd for habbo
Shadings amazing
10/10 + rep nice job

[Alfrayer]

That's not true you can keep black line or not.

Choosing what type of outlines to use is basically when you decide on the style you are aiming for. Black outlines usually give your scenes a cartoonish feel.

Hmmm, the *out* line should be black no matter what but thats only the line of the box (or shape) out side, the lines in the middle should be a lighter or darker (depnding on angkle and possisioning) the the base coulor of the desk.

For instants the line that comes out of the drawing from the cuboards should be s dark browish, bagish colour.

[Mr.Kylee]

I know I was talking about the black outline read the post before I posted :) and I didn't said 10/10 it's really nice alt with good shading and details.

[Alfrayer]

Me neither =p, 10/10, a splendid peice of art =)

[OxfordScholar]

Great second alt! :D
I can see the effort you put into that - 9.5/10 :D

[Cheeseboy76]

nice but not very useful on habbo lol :p 9/10

[Davisman]

Cool, nice, carry on with alts!!!!! :D

[Bef]

Yeee it is amazing thou! Top job fairy. I duno y but habbo always use black outlines. I reckon the desk looks better without the black outline but the outline makes it look more Habboey. You should design habbo furniture not Sulake. Id love this style. Its the best!

[~Hilton~]

Wow thats awesome, for a 2nd alt. Not too habboey though. Rep added nonetheless.

[RandyMatt1992]

Pretty cool ! I like it... It seems too skinny though

[Noble]

Black line or no blackline, it still rocks. 10/10.