Second Alt - Desk Idea!

[FAIRYS0FT]

Hey,

As I am just starting with this alting "thang", I would appreciate any critisism or advice that you could give.

Thankyou for looking!

[samuel]

School boy desk ;D
10/10
Good job

[Infrontation]

Nice Job,Something about it that makes it not look so habboish But 8.25/10 :eusa_danc

[FAIRYS0FT]

Thanks guys,

I was thinking it didn't look habboish for some reason aswell, but maybe we think that for different reasons, the reasons I think it isn't are because;

The shading of the open book looks "TOO" 3d?
There is not grain or texture on the wood, *It's meant to be like a beech style* not quite sure how to do it, I don't want it to be too detailed?

What do you guys think? What makes you think it's not habbo-ey

Thankyou!

Fairy ~

[Soyers]

Its beautiful it looks a little unhabboy (wow we make up some odd words) because there is -so- much detail, but please dont change it! 10/10

[Scriptermone]

10/10 Keep it up , next make a giant pencil

[FAIRYS0FT]

Hehe, a giant pencil?

I'm a bit weird actually I'm making a picnic basket...It's pretty hard but i'll post it a bit later, i've got to add some bread and *stuff* lol

Thanks for the great ratings!

[Bef]

Try giving it a black outline. If you look at habbo furni it always has a black outline
Something like this


It is absoloutly amazing though. You said your just starting out. WOW! You have an amazing talant! Your work already looks soo professional.

[Luayminator]

Do not give it a black line, that is un profesional, Black lines go for dark drawings only.

[Mr.Kylee]

That's not true you can keep black line or not.

Choosing what type of outlines to use is basically when you decide on the style you are aiming for. Black outlines usually give your scenes a cartoonish feel.