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JoeComins
21-10-2006, 12:12 PM
This is a live Preview:
http://primaldesigns.co.uk/117-LIVE%20PREVIEW/

This means its an image on the background.

I just put the text on there as if it was Primal Designs, although its for a completly different site.

Opinions and Critques

Thanks

RNelson
21-10-2006, 12:14 PM
I really love that i don't have any improvements well maybe change font in the banner thing!

YouFail
21-10-2006, 12:16 PM
That is a very good design Joe.

Just one point.

I don't like the copyright at the bottom due to the colour and how it looks cluttered with the links underneath it

Apart from that it is a very nice design and it is also very acesssible.

JoeComins
21-10-2006, 12:18 PM
Thanks - The Primal Designs font is awful, but the text I wanted to use is around £25 and I can't find a similar one.

I was trying to fill the space with the logo and the image - And everything else. I had no other text to put there :S

RNelson
21-10-2006, 12:19 PM
Maybe try a nice clean 1 like amerika sans it's a nice font =]
Thanks - The Primal Designs font is awful, but the text I wanted to use is around £25 and I can't find a similar one.

I was trying to fill the space with the logo and the image - And everything else. I had no other text to put there :S

Liberation
21-10-2006, 12:24 PM
Hey.

I really like that. Like the colours and design of it all. Can't think of anything wrong with it. But i really like it.

Jargit
21-10-2006, 12:25 PM
I think banner slightly bigger.

And align the " about us, bit with " PRimal>About>designers> "

JoeComins
21-10-2006, 12:30 PM
EDITED - Changed the font, and dropped the Content Header down 2px

Huddle
21-10-2006, 12:39 PM
Great but copyright sucks. Take it off.

DuHast
21-10-2006, 01:04 PM
I know you liked Constructive Criticism Joe so here is sone.

The header is awesome as it is just a logo and not cluttered but I think it could intergrate within the layout a bit instead of just transparency within the background.

You have gone for that mainstream navigation it seems where it is set as 100% width and I just don't like it, and the 100% width with that gradient makes it look awful on that background but thats just my opinion the a:hover on onMouseOver whichever you will use looks nice for the rollover.

The content section looks out of place and I just don't know why, perhaps because there is a lack of text followed by a large image with a somewhat obtrusive border for that setting but some some re-designing and adding some design principles it could look brilliant, try some filter text before re-designing though.

Everyone seems to have an issue with the copyright I think it's ok as it gives out the relevent information and intergrates within the layout very nicely, but you are missing a sitemap which isn't the best for SEO practices.

Hope you improve it some more.

JoeComins
21-10-2006, 01:06 PM
A Sitestamp? This is just a layout that I made for the sake of it :)

Thanks Dan - Always love your critism

DuHast
21-10-2006, 01:10 PM
A Sitestamp? This is just a layout that I made for the sake of it :)

Thanks Dan - Always love your critism

A Sitemap.. Like Google sitemaps =]]

JoeComins
21-10-2006, 01:11 PM
Ah Sorry - Im not reading - Its only an image anyway - Did it for practise, so it doesnt matter too much!

Misdameanor
21-10-2006, 01:12 PM
It's really great, Joe.
Keep it up.

+ rep. :)

AlexxTurner
21-10-2006, 02:15 PM
It doesn't work for me:s

JoeComins
21-10-2006, 02:22 PM
It loads for me ''/

Jargit
21-10-2006, 02:23 PM
It dont work for me either...

Did earlier

AlexxTurner
21-10-2006, 02:24 PM
Tried it in firefox and it worked.
That is a NICE layout Joe.

additional
21-10-2006, 05:29 PM
great layout like usual. 9/10. Keep up the good work.

Always-Think
21-10-2006, 05:34 PM
don't particularly like the colours, but never the less good design. may i ask who you made this for?

RNelson
21-10-2006, 05:38 PM
Ermmm banner gives it away?
don't particularly like the colours, but never the less good design. may i ask who you made this for?

Always-Think
21-10-2006, 05:40 PM
don't act smart


I just put the text on there as if it was Primal Designs, although its for a completly different site.

get your facts right. :rolleyes:

RNelson
21-10-2006, 05:43 PM
Don't act smart your a noob?
don't act smart



get your facts right. :rolleyes:

Always-Think
21-10-2006, 05:46 PM
oh great come back, i don't want to get any more infractions so meh.

(on topic: would you recommend any tutorials or tutorials site etc?)

JoeComins
21-10-2006, 06:02 PM
Your right - It sucks

Im making a one right now for DanServ which I shal put up later

Mentor
21-10-2006, 08:21 PM
not so sure about the logo in the bottom corner "/

Recursion
21-10-2006, 08:28 PM
:o Love it!

---MAD---
21-10-2006, 08:29 PM
love it however the bottom is too..different might be the word. I think you should make it look the same as the top :).

adm
21-10-2006, 08:29 PM
Not your best by any means.

---MAD---
21-10-2006, 08:31 PM
Not your best by any means.
I agree :).

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