This is a live Preview:
http://primaldesigns.co.uk/117-LIVE%20PREVIEW/
This means its an image on the background.
I just put the text on there as if it was Primal Designs, although its for a completly different site.
Opinions and Critques
Thanks

This is a live Preview:
http://primaldesigns.co.uk/117-LIVE%20PREVIEW/
This means its an image on the background.
I just put the text on there as if it was Primal Designs, although its for a completly different site.
Opinions and Critques
Thanks
I really love that i don't have any improvements well maybe change font in the banner thing!
Last edited by RNelson; 21-10-2006 at 12:15 PM.
Thanks - The Primal Designs font is awful, but the text I wanted to use is around £25 and I can't find a similar one.
I was trying to fill the space with the logo and the image - And everything else. I had no other text to put there :S
Maybe try a nice clean 1 like amerika sans it's a nice font =]
Hey.
I really like that. Like the colours and design of it all. Can't think of anything wrong with it. But i really like it.
I think banner slightly bigger.
And align the " about us, bit with " PRimal>About>designers> "
EDITED - Changed the font, and dropped the Content Header down 2px
I know you liked Constructive Criticism Joe so here is sone.
The header is awesome as it is just a logo and not cluttered but I think it could intergrate within the layout a bit instead of just transparency within the background.
You have gone for that mainstream navigation it seems where it is set as 100% width and I just don't like it, and the 100% width with that gradient makes it look awful on that background but thats just my opinion the a:hover on onMouseOver whichever you will use looks nice for the rollover.
The content section looks out of place and I just don't know why, perhaps because there is a lack of text followed by a large image with a somewhat obtrusive border for that setting but some some re-designing and adding some design principles it could look brilliant, try some filter text before re-designing though.
Everyone seems to have an issue with the copyright I think it's ok as it gives out the relevent information and intergrates within the layout very nicely, but you are missing a sitemap which isn't the best for SEO practices.
Hope you improve it some more.
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