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top.hat
12-03-2005, 01:03 AM
This is kind of a morocan rare feel to a bookshelf, enjoy :D

PLEASE rate 1-10

top.hat
12-03-2005, 01:04 AM
Hope u like it :eusa_pray :eusa_pray :eusa_pray

gregzilla
12-03-2005, 01:06 AM
7/10 it looks a bit chinese/japenese but the bottom isn't right, it looks a bit weird and the sides are made up of tub master pipes i think
try harder, i don't like it :(

Mr.Mity
12-03-2005, 01:14 AM
Extremely original
Originality: 10/10

But the overall appearance is not that great, make it more isometic, although u did use other pieces of furni and put them together well, you need to get the basic shape of the shelf down in the right way.

Look: 6/10

Overall: 7/10

Keep it up, I used to be horrible at alts and now i think I am doing pretty well with em :p It just takes a while :D

top.hat
12-03-2005, 01:17 AM
i thought from scratch it was ok but it is my 1st alt but im improving it so it will be on in 5 mins, check bak

top.hat
12-03-2005, 01:25 AM
I dont know if this is better. please rate

gregzilla
12-03-2005, 01:51 AM
its not symetrical at the bottom and top, it goes--__
not -_

top.hat
12-03-2005, 01:54 AM
I know, could u help me correct it

Mr.Mity
12-03-2005, 02:04 AM
Ok this new shelf is better, although it is not great u r gettin better... I suggest you look at some tutorials and those will help you with your lines and your angles and will show you how habbo furni is angled! :)

I wanted to help you so I altered your pic and I made it so the lines and angles are correct, except for a few like the shelfs themselves.

Keep in mind I only filled in the color to make it look finished and i did not spend much time on it, because this is for you too look off of.

http://tinypic.com/235hyb

top.hat
12-03-2005, 02:07 AM
Yes thats alot better, but remember im only a beginner :P lol a newb as u say, but thanks 4 your advice n all i will keep it in mind 4 my next one. This was my 1st alt and thought it turned out ok concidering some of the not so good 1st ones that some people produce. lol

:-Mystical.Dave-
12-03-2005, 02:26 AM
It looks kinda weird.....
:s

Liberal Rob
12-03-2005, 03:01 AM
It looks kinda weird.....
:s

Its different, i like it 9 from me :)

Matty
12-03-2005, 03:02 AM
7/10 for me, maybe u cud put some legs on.

:-Mystical.Dave-
12-03-2005, 03:11 AM
The like ends of the bookcase are made from throne sofa thingies, and the sides made of tubmaster things!

micky.blue.eyes
12-03-2005, 09:34 AM
It's original but I don't want it in my rooms. It doesn't go with anything. You should make more furni in that style.

8.41/10 for the alt.

top.hat
12-03-2005, 03:21 PM
I 'll try harder next time guys, tanks 4 the criticisim. keep it coming :D

Mined
12-03-2005, 03:30 PM
:o Very good, good shading and some Fab colours

Cypher-
12-03-2005, 03:34 PM
I love this 8/10 great job

---MAD---
12-03-2005, 05:35 PM
Wow, not bad.

Originalty: 10/10
Style: 10/10
Effort: 10/10

I think that it doesnt look 3d, looks flat lol, somthing wrong with shading in the interior bit.
Over all very good
9/10
Bottom looks VERY strange!

dj-ally
12-03-2005, 05:36 PM
Its smexy. i like it

top.hat
12-03-2005, 09:39 PM
thanks guys, rep if u like it :D

top.hat
12-03-2005, 10:01 PM
lol scary?, how is it scary

Scriptermone
12-03-2005, 10:02 PM
Move it to elites man 10/10!!

top.hat
12-03-2005, 10:03 PM
Elites? wots that?

top.hat
12-03-2005, 10:04 PM
lol this is like marmite u either like it or hate it

joshuar
12-03-2005, 10:14 PM
Very nice! However, I can't see it going into habbo :(
9/10 for great effort!

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