new rare style bookshelf! made from scatch!!

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This is kind of a morocan rare feel to a bookshelf, enjoy

PLEASE rate 1-10

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Hope u like it :eusa_pray :eusa_pray :eusa_pray

[gregzilla]

7/10 it looks a bit chinese/japenese but the bottom isn't right, it looks a bit weird and the sides are made up of tub master pipes i think
try harder, i don't like it

[Mr.Mity]

Extremely original
Originality: 10/10

But the overall appearance is not that great, make it more isometic, although u did use other pieces of furni and put them together well, you need to get the basic shape of the shelf down in the right way.

Look: 6/10

Overall: 7/10

Keep it up, I used to be horrible at alts and now i think I am doing pretty well with em :p It just takes a while

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i thought from scratch it was ok but it is my 1st alt but im improving it so it will be on in 5 mins, check bak

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I dont know if this is better. please rate

[gregzilla]

its not symetrical at the bottom and top, it goes--__
not -_

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I know, could u help me correct it

[Mr.Mity]

Ok this new shelf is better, although it is not great u r gettin better... I suggest you look at some tutorials and those will help you with your lines and your angles and will show you how habbo furni is angled!

I wanted to help you so I altered your pic and I made it so the lines and angles are correct, except for a few like the shelfs themselves.

Keep in mind I only filled in the color to make it look finished and i did not spend much time on it, because this is for you too look off of.

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Yes thats alot better, but remember im only a beginner lol a newb as u say, but thanks 4 your advice n all i will keep it in mind 4 my next one. This was my 1st alt and thought it turned out ok concidering some of the not so good 1st ones that some people produce. lol