Tiuhdur
27-11-2006, 09:24 PM
a story im working on for school (background) first few bits
The moon cast great shadows over the pathway's of Botheron, a dark silence swept through empty alleys until a faint patting of horseshoes echoed down the road. Clop, Clop, Clop getting faster and faster the pacing of horses galloping through the night. Mumbles filled the town as a lonely rider leapt from his horse onto the cobblestones.
There was a sharp, high pitched sound as he withdrew his sword from his leather satchel. Then an eary silence as he crept into a small brick house...
Crash! plates hurled around the room as the peasant squirmed round the room trying to find sanctuary from the rider. Then talking...
"What do you want with me! I have done nothing wrong!"
"You betrayed Lord Isington you fool our lord and master so you fled to this village!"
"but but but..."
"Lord has orderd for your arrest so i am here to silence you"
Then a scream as the rider stabbed his sword into the chest of the peasant. The rider swiftly ran out of the house, onto his horse and rode into the distance
The peasant clambered out of his door seeping blood on the floor, gasping for air he grabbed the cross around his neck and as he slowly died he whispered.
"Please forgive me all mighty one"
thats it for now coz I wana be a habbox writer I thought id start posting some things im doing. I love writing slories and such:)
rate and c&c
The moon cast great shadows over the pathway's of Botheron, a dark silence swept through empty alleys until a faint patting of horseshoes echoed down the road. Clop, Clop, Clop getting faster and faster the pacing of horses galloping through the night. Mumbles filled the town as a lonely rider leapt from his horse onto the cobblestones.
There was a sharp, high pitched sound as he withdrew his sword from his leather satchel. Then an eary silence as he crept into a small brick house...
Crash! plates hurled around the room as the peasant squirmed round the room trying to find sanctuary from the rider. Then talking...
"What do you want with me! I have done nothing wrong!"
"You betrayed Lord Isington you fool our lord and master so you fled to this village!"
"but but but..."
"Lord has orderd for your arrest so i am here to silence you"
Then a scream as the rider stabbed his sword into the chest of the peasant. The rider swiftly ran out of the house, onto his horse and rode into the distance
The peasant clambered out of his door seeping blood on the floor, gasping for air he grabbed the cross around his neck and as he slowly died he whispered.
"Please forgive me all mighty one"
thats it for now coz I wana be a habbox writer I thought id start posting some things im doing. I love writing slories and such:)
rate and c&c