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Decode
28-12-2006, 10:28 AM
Its My 3rd Alt.
Dous Anyone Know How I Can Improve?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p102/habbtalk/Sofa1.png

Browney
28-12-2006, 11:06 AM
Red Sofa:
- The Edges of the sofa are too sharp. You need to round them off like the Hc Sofa.
- There is too much shading on the 3 lines in the centre. Light shading is better than lots of shading. Again, see Hc Sofa.
- The line on the edge of the seat is almost invisible. You need to make it easier to see.
- The "legs" of the sofa have no outline.
- Some lines are not isometrical. Isometrical means the line is at the value, 2:1.

eg. http://i12.tinypic.com/2w6utz7.png

Well done, good third attempt.

6/10

scubadiva
28-12-2006, 11:17 AM
It is obvious that you have copied this image from the internet and tried to make a Habbo version of it. There's nothing wrong with that, you just have to tidy it up a little. Start off by making all the outlines isometric (as said in the above post), then use the dropper tool to identify a main colour, use that as the base, then continue to use the dropper to add shading. If what I've just said makes absolutely no sense whatsoever, just PM me :P

Decode
28-12-2006, 11:21 AM
It is obvious that you have copied this image from the internet and tried to make a Habbo version of it. There's nothing wrong with that, you just have to tidy it up a little. Start off by making all the outlines isometric (as said in the above post), then use the dropper tool to identify a main colour, use that as the base, then continue to use the dropper to add shading. If what I've just said makes absolutely no sense whatsoever, just PM me :P

:o
I Didnt Coppy It From The Internet, Thanks For The Advice Tho

Bryan84
28-12-2006, 11:23 AM
=P You are improving dude! :D

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