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    Default Red Sofa

    Its My 3rd Alt.
    Dous Anyone Know How I Can Improve?

    Last edited by Decode; 28-12-2006 at 10:29 AM.
    Lets set the stage on fire, and hollywood will be jealous.

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    Red Sofa:
    - The Edges of the sofa are too sharp. You need to round them off like the Hc Sofa.
    - There is too much shading on the 3 lines in the centre. Light shading is better than lots of shading. Again, see Hc Sofa.
    - The line on the edge of the seat is almost invisible. You need to make it easier to see.
    - The "legs" of the sofa have no outline.
    - Some lines are not isometrical. Isometrical means the line is at the value, 2:1.

    eg.

    Well done, good third attempt.

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    It is obvious that you have copied this image from the internet and tried to make a Habbo version of it. There's nothing wrong with that, you just have to tidy it up a little. Start off by making all the outlines isometric (as said in the above post), then use the dropper tool to identify a main colour, use that as the base, then continue to use the dropper to add shading. If what I've just said makes absolutely no sense whatsoever, just PM me

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    Quote Originally Posted by scubadiva View Post
    It is obvious that you have copied this image from the internet and tried to make a Habbo version of it. There's nothing wrong with that, you just have to tidy it up a little. Start off by making all the outlines isometric (as said in the above post), then use the dropper tool to identify a main colour, use that as the base, then continue to use the dropper to add shading. If what I've just said makes absolutely no sense whatsoever, just PM me

    I Didnt Coppy It From The Internet, Thanks For The Advice Tho
    Last edited by Decode; 28-12-2006 at 11:24 AM.
    Lets set the stage on fire, and hollywood will be jealous.

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    =P You are improving dude!
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