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Bloodkanekiller
19-04-2005, 06:26 PM
My heart was destroyed along time ago
should i tell you
but you will never know
the pain in my heart
and found me the light to fart
and i found out the word tart
but the anger i cannot forget
and something i will never regret
breaking bones
killing miss moans
and then the tradgic tale
when i got my 1st email
Lol


Please rate i think the last bit was the best i liked that one did eney of you like it because i really liked it i reckon 7 or 8/10 :)

Smiddy
19-04-2005, 06:47 PM
Wow U Spam this Forum More Than I Do :o!! 6/10.. im not a huge Poetry Fan.. Get Enuff of it at Skool :(

xox.Hayley.xox
19-04-2005, 06:50 PM
Ya I'm not a big poetry fan either but here's my vote 7/10

xox.Hayley.xox
19-04-2005, 06:52 PM
i'm leaving bye bye bye bye bye lol :(

Edited by Jacko2kn3: Please do NOT double post, and please try to post ON topic

Bloodkanekiller
19-04-2005, 07:08 PM
thx for tht guys :)

Matty
19-04-2005, 10:49 PM
7/10 ;D hh

Briarleaf
21-04-2005, 05:33 AM
Ugh...

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Pilgrim-Soul
21-04-2005, 06:35 PM
you a swot or somet? lol joking. quit good... 8 outa 10

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