My heart was destroyed along time ago
should i tell you
but you will never know
the pain in my heart
and found me the light to fart
and i found out the word tart
but the anger i cannot forget
and something i will never regret
breaking bones
killing miss moans
and then the tradgic tale
when i got my 1st email
Lol
Please rate i think the last bit was the best i liked that one did eney of you like it because i really liked it i reckon 7 or 8/10
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This is a poem made by bloodkanekiller please rate out of 10
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19-04-2005, 06:47 PM #2
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Wow U Spam this Forum More Than I Do
!! 6/10.. im not a huge Poetry Fan.. Get Enuff of it at Skool 
You french fried when you should have pizza'd. If you french fry when you should pizza, you're gonna have a bad time....
GREAT BANTER
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19-04-2005, 06:50 PM #3xox.Hayley.xox Guest
Ya I'm not a big poetry fan either but here's my vote 7/10
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19-04-2005, 06:52 PM #4xox.Hayley.xox Guest
i'm leaving bye bye bye bye bye lol
Edited by Jacko2kn3: Please do NOT double post, and please try to post ON topicLast edited by Jacko2kn3; 20-04-2005 at 04:08 PM.
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thx for tht guys
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7/10 ;D hh
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Ugh...
0I Am Your Time Killer
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you a swot or somet? lol joking. quit good... 8 outa 10
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