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Bloodkanekiller
23-04-2005, 11:42 PM
I came home that day
strokeing my cat
and then i lied on the mat
no sofa to sit on
and nits in my hair
my father and mother comes to care
kiss on the cheek all i need
i love them because they teached me to read
walk
And talk
i never went to school
learned at home
wanted to go see the pope in rome
but i did and i went home
so i went back home the age of nineteen
my mum said where have you been
i smiled
i stopped
i glared
i hugged her
i never went off again
but you think i am lieing
but i am really trying
to make my mum happy
and i did
got her a card
on her birthday
which is good
i made her happy
i loved her :)

Edited by Butcher11 (Forum Moderator)- Moved from Anything not do with Habbo(x). Please post in correct forum.

lauralol
23-04-2005, 11:45 PM
Rofl it's hilarious 10/10 great entertainment!

Matty
23-04-2005, 11:48 PM
I came home that day
strokeing my cat
and then i lied on the mat
no sofa to sit on
and nits in my hair
my father and mother comes to care
kiss on the cheek all i need
i love them because they teached me to read
walk
And talk
i never went to school
learned at home
wanted to go see the pope in rome
but i did and i went home
so i went back home the age of nineteen
my mum said where have you been
i smiled
i stopped
i glared
i hugged her
i never went off again
but you think i am lieing
but i am really trying
to make my mum happy
and i did
got her a card
on her birthday
which is good
i made her happy
i loved her :)

Rofl, Man 10/10! made me laugh :D

Bloodkanekiller
23-04-2005, 11:49 PM
Thank you people :)
my new poem tommoz

lauralol
23-04-2005, 11:54 PM
I can't wait till tomorrow!!!

Seacat
24-04-2005, 12:32 AM
lmao I love it, can't wait for the next :p

Matty
24-04-2005, 01:30 AM
I can't wait till tomorrow!!!
Same here. oh man help me.

?-Doc-?
24-04-2005, 01:50 AM
Koolies =] i dont get it but its good .
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i would post my own poems but im scared people will steal it =[

Steph
24-04-2005, 02:30 PM
Its taught, not teached...

Painiac
25-04-2005, 09:11 PM
They may have "teached" you to read but they obviously haven't taught you to spell? -10/10

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