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    Default Another funny bloodkane poem read here rate out of 10

    I came home that day
    strokeing my cat
    and then i lied on the mat
    no sofa to sit on
    and nits in my hair
    my father and mother comes to care
    kiss on the cheek all i need
    i love them because they teached me to read
    walk
    And talk
    i never went to school
    learned at home
    wanted to go see the pope in rome
    but i did and i went home
    so i went back home the age of nineteen
    my mum said where have you been
    i smiled
    i stopped
    i glared
    i hugged her
    i never went off again
    but you think i am lieing
    but i am really trying
    to make my mum happy
    and i did
    got her a card
    on her birthday
    which is good
    i made her happy
    i loved her

    Edited by Butcher11 (Forum Moderator)- Moved from Anything not do with Habbo(x). Please post in correct forum.
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    Rofl it's hilarious 10/10 great entertainment!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bloodkanekiller
    I came home that day
    strokeing my cat
    and then i lied on the mat
    no sofa to sit on
    and nits in my hair
    my father and mother comes to care
    kiss on the cheek all i need
    i love them because they teached me to read
    walk
    And talk
    i never went to school
    learned at home
    wanted to go see the pope in rome
    but i did and i went home
    so i went back home the age of nineteen
    my mum said where have you been
    i smiled
    i stopped
    i glared
    i hugged her
    i never went off again
    but you think i am lieing
    but i am really trying
    to make my mum happy
    and i did
    got her a card
    on her birthday
    which is good
    i made her happy
    i loved her
    Rofl, Man 10/10! made me laugh

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    Thank you people
    my new poem tommoz

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    I can't wait till tomorrow!!!

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    lmao I love it, can't wait for the next :p
    Hello

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    Quote Originally Posted by lauralol
    I can't wait till tomorrow!!!
    Same here. oh man help me.

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    Koolies =] i dont get it but its good .
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    i would post my own poems but im scared people will steal it =[
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    Its taught, not teached...

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    They may have "teached" you to read but they obviously haven't taught you to spell? -10/10
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