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JT-Fan
29-04-2005, 01:41 PM
You,
Are like,
My best friend,
My mother,
My father,
But now you’re gone,
You wont come back,
Please come,
Please come.
You,
Are like,
My best friend,
There when I need you,
Even when I treated you wrong,
But now you’re gone,
You wont come back,
Please come,
Please come.
You,
Are like,
My father,
My mother,
But I miss you,
And no one can replace you,
No one,
You wont come back,
Please come,
Please come.
Written for my mum
Who died 05/01/05/
Changed For The People That Didnt Understand The Date!
Yayse
29-04-2005, 02:55 PM
:( thats simply beautiful
rep added
Mr.Comedian
29-04-2005, 02:58 PM
Aww Thats Nice, +rep
JT-Fan
29-04-2005, 03:09 PM
Thanks Guys.
on the 1/05/05 :s
Its a very good poem with strong emotions and feelings that affect the reader too, which isn't as easy as many people think.
--Saiyan--
29-04-2005, 07:56 PM
That was touching
boardslide
29-04-2005, 08:12 PM
May your mother R.I.P
God bless you.
Beautiful Poem. <3.
Racoon
29-04-2005, 08:16 PM
But.. 1/05/05 I fought tht that hasnt even come yet?
Michael.
29-04-2005, 08:43 PM
It hasn't :s
Nice poem though.
Seacat
29-04-2005, 08:48 PM
I think by the 1/5/05 he means the 5th of January 2005
Thats a very touchful and emotional poem, and as :Jin: said it isn't as easy as some people may think to show your emotions.
+ Rep Added :)
Painiac
30-04-2005, 09:23 AM
That's beautiful. I don't know how I could survive if any of my family died. God Bless you and may your mum RIP.
JT-Fan
30-04-2005, 10:01 AM
Thank You,Everyone
.Amberz.
30-04-2005, 10:07 AM
That's so beautiful! :eusa_whis
That poem was lovely, you took great care in writing it...
May your mum Rest In Peace... :eusa_pray
JT-Fan
30-04-2005, 10:12 AM
Thanks You. I Write Down Alot Of My Thoughs And Feelings,Its The Only "Person" I Can Talk Too
:.bEx.:
30-04-2005, 10:16 AM
aww great poem, yeah i find sometimes writing stuff down is the best way to get things out when u feel u can tlk 2 no1 else, your realli brave getting threw this as well as you've done, rip 2 your mum and gd luck 2 yourself in the future ;)
JT-Fan
30-04-2005, 10:18 AM
:D Thanks,I Feel Really Confident Sharing It Now
.Amberz.
30-04-2005, 10:24 AM
;) Yeah, I also find writing things down helps bring out my problems and feelings in my life. Thats why its a fab idea to keep a diary. :eusa_danc
JT-Fan
30-04-2005, 10:25 AM
Yeh Coz My Pen is Ma Best Mate
.Amberz.
30-04-2005, 10:47 AM
Lol :eusa_clap
JT-Fan
30-04-2005, 01:26 PM
Its The Truth
.Amberz.
30-04-2005, 03:56 PM
Yeah, I believe you, I mean, you could become a Famous Poet one day, the way that you express your feelings etc in these poems!
Krypsis
30-04-2005, 04:27 PM
vry touching poem.
RIP. To your mum
Rep added
JT-Fan
30-04-2005, 06:18 PM
Thanks,Thanks EEveryone
BlueTails
30-04-2005, 07:46 PM
May Your Mother Rest In Peace, Great Poem, You Show Your Love For Your Mother Alot.
Rep Added, Nice Poem, A Rep Wont Do Much To Bring Your Mother Back, But It's The Best I Can Do Online
:eusa_booh dats a nice poem rep added
JT-Fan
01-05-2005, 10:41 AM
Thanks 2 U aLL
x!x.Emily.x!x
01-05-2005, 12:19 PM
;( Im really Sorry about you Mum. That is a very touching poem rep added.
JT-Fan
01-05-2005, 09:18 PM
Thanks Everyone,If U Wanna Rep Me,Bad Rep Me,I Didnt Always Be Nice 2 Ma Mam,Now Shes Gone,I Regret It
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