Mum I Miss You.

[JT-Fan]

You,
Are like,
My best friend,
My mother,
My father,
But now you’re gone,
You wont come back,
Please come,
Please come.

You,
Are like,
My best friend,
There when I need you,
Even when I treated you wrong,
But now you’re gone,
You wont come back,
Please come,
Please come.

You,
Are like,
My father,
My mother,
But I miss you,
And no one can replace you,
No one,
You wont come back,
Please come,
Please come.

Written for my mum
Who died 05/01/05/
Changed For The People That Didnt Understand The Date!

[Yayse]

thats simply beautiful

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[Mr.Comedian]

Aww Thats Nice, +rep

[JT-Fan]

Thanks Guys.

[Jin]

on the 1/05/05 :s

Its a very good poem with strong emotions and feelings that affect the reader too, which isn't as easy as many people think.

[--Saiyan--]

That was touching

[boardslide]

May your mother R.I.P

God bless you.

Beautiful Poem. .

[Racoon]

But.. 1/05/05 I fought tht that hasnt even come yet?

[Michael.]

It hasn't :s

Nice poem though.

[Seacat]

I think by the 1/5/05 he means the 5th of January 2005

Thats a very touchful and emotional poem, and as :Jin: said it isn't as easy as some people may think to show your emotions.

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