KevSays
07-05-2005, 01:39 PM
My latest story!
Enjoy!
It was approximately 8:45pm, I was on the bus all on my own and my thoughts were somewhere else. About half an hour ago, I had packed my bags and left my home, for good. I was thinking about my parents mostly, how they were feeling; but they'd probably be too bothered about winning their latest argument to be worried about me. I hoped they realised how awful they'd treated me.
I looked at my watch, 8:50pm. I'd be getting on the train soon. I looked up to the end of the bus, some boys were setting the back seat alight, idiots.
Anyway, my name's Jenna, I'm 15, and I can bet I have alot more problems than you do. The last few weeks I'd been tormented because of the actions between my parents. Dear God, I wish they'd just sort things out, I've got my exams to worry about and I manage to contain myself.
The bus stopped, I got off and thanked the driver. It was a rainy night, there was a storm ahead. I walked gingerly to the train station entrance and entered. There was a café right in my eye-line. I digged into my pocket for money, I had £18.50, I needed to buy a train ticket, so that left me with around £11. I After I bought my ticket, the time was 9:20pm. I went to the café and bought a sandwich, I swallowed it in two voluminous gulps. Satisfied, I went to where the train would be arriving at and sat myself on a chair. It was now 9:35pm, the train was coming to a halt. I got out of my seat and went to the train doors closest to me. I entered and got a seat by the window.
I was very tired but I had to stay cautious so know one I knew recognized me. It was a foolish idea, one of my friends being on the same train as me, but anyway, I might as well be safe than sorry. I kept looking around me to see anyone who might of suspected something but nobody looked that bothered. I was tired beyond words now and decided it compulsory to have a nap. So I pulled out my jacket from my bag and covered myself in it, I put my left hand against the window and layed my head on it. " There we go " I said to myself, and drifted off.
I woke up instantly and checked my watch, I had only slept for a few hours. It was 1:05am the next morning and I was sure that my parents had figured out that something was up, that worried me as well as it making me happy. " Good, they should be scared, after all the Hell they've put me through, I can't think of a good reason why I shouldn't of done this. " I buried myself beneath my jacket again, ready to fall asleep, when suddenly, a beefy tone shouted at me and a large hand clasped on my shoulder. "Gotcha!" cried the voice, victoriously.
To be continued!
Enjoy!
It was approximately 8:45pm, I was on the bus all on my own and my thoughts were somewhere else. About half an hour ago, I had packed my bags and left my home, for good. I was thinking about my parents mostly, how they were feeling; but they'd probably be too bothered about winning their latest argument to be worried about me. I hoped they realised how awful they'd treated me.
I looked at my watch, 8:50pm. I'd be getting on the train soon. I looked up to the end of the bus, some boys were setting the back seat alight, idiots.
Anyway, my name's Jenna, I'm 15, and I can bet I have alot more problems than you do. The last few weeks I'd been tormented because of the actions between my parents. Dear God, I wish they'd just sort things out, I've got my exams to worry about and I manage to contain myself.
The bus stopped, I got off and thanked the driver. It was a rainy night, there was a storm ahead. I walked gingerly to the train station entrance and entered. There was a café right in my eye-line. I digged into my pocket for money, I had £18.50, I needed to buy a train ticket, so that left me with around £11. I After I bought my ticket, the time was 9:20pm. I went to the café and bought a sandwich, I swallowed it in two voluminous gulps. Satisfied, I went to where the train would be arriving at and sat myself on a chair. It was now 9:35pm, the train was coming to a halt. I got out of my seat and went to the train doors closest to me. I entered and got a seat by the window.
I was very tired but I had to stay cautious so know one I knew recognized me. It was a foolish idea, one of my friends being on the same train as me, but anyway, I might as well be safe than sorry. I kept looking around me to see anyone who might of suspected something but nobody looked that bothered. I was tired beyond words now and decided it compulsory to have a nap. So I pulled out my jacket from my bag and covered myself in it, I put my left hand against the window and layed my head on it. " There we go " I said to myself, and drifted off.
I woke up instantly and checked my watch, I had only slept for a few hours. It was 1:05am the next morning and I was sure that my parents had figured out that something was up, that worried me as well as it making me happy. " Good, they should be scared, after all the Hell they've put me through, I can't think of a good reason why I shouldn't of done this. " I buried myself beneath my jacket again, ready to fall asleep, when suddenly, a beefy tone shouted at me and a large hand clasped on my shoulder. "Gotcha!" cried the voice, victoriously.
To be continued!