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    My latest story!

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    It was approximately 8:45pm, I was on the bus all on my own and my thoughts were somewhere else. About half an hour ago, I had packed my bags and left my home, for good. I was thinking about my parents mostly, how they were feeling; but they'd probably be too bothered about winning their latest argument to be worried about me. I hoped they realised how awful they'd treated me.
    I looked at my watch, 8:50pm. I'd be getting on the train soon. I looked up to the end of the bus, some boys were setting the back seat alight, idiots.
    Anyway, my name's Jenna, I'm 15, and I can bet I have alot more problems than you do. The last few weeks I'd been tormented because of the actions between my parents. Dear God, I wish they'd just sort things out, I've got my exams to worry about and I manage to contain myself.

    The bus stopped, I got off and thanked the driver. It was a rainy night, there was a storm ahead. I walked gingerly to the train station entrance and entered. There was a café right in my eye-line. I digged into my pocket for money, I had £18.50, I needed to buy a train ticket, so that left me with around £11. I After I bought my ticket, the time was 9:20pm. I went to the café and bought a sandwich, I swallowed it in two voluminous gulps. Satisfied, I went to where the train would be arriving at and sat myself on a chair. It was now 9:35pm, the train was coming to a halt. I got out of my seat and went to the train doors closest to me. I entered and got a seat by the window.

    I was very tired but I had to stay cautious so know one I knew recognized me. It was a foolish idea, one of my friends being on the same train as me, but anyway, I might as well be safe than sorry. I kept looking around me to see anyone who might of suspected something but nobody looked that bothered. I was tired beyond words now and decided it compulsory to have a nap. So I pulled out my jacket from my bag and covered myself in it, I put my left hand against the window and layed my head on it. " There we go " I said to myself, and drifted off.

    I woke up instantly and checked my watch, I had only slept for a few hours. It was 1:05am the next morning and I was sure that my parents had figured out that something was up, that worried me as well as it making me happy. " Good, they should be scared, after all the Hell they've put me through, I can't think of a good reason why I shouldn't of done this. " I buried myself beneath my jacket again, ready to fall asleep, when suddenly, a beefy tone shouted at me and a large hand clasped on my shoulder. "Gotcha!" cried the voice, victoriously.

    To be continued!
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    I wanna hear the rest"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Whats happens.

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    Wow... wicked story with a great cliff-hanger.

    How old are you?... if your younger than 16-17 are you planning on taking up english at A level?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Blacky04
    Wow... wicked story with a great cliff-hanger.

    How old are you?... if your younger than 16-17 are you planning on taking up english at A level?

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    Ty for the rep...

    And no I'm only 12. I'm not sure about taking up A-Level English.

    I might do so though.
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    Quote Originally Posted by KevSays
    Ty for the rep...

    And no I'm only 12. I'm not sure about taking up A-Level English.

    I might do so though.
    I thought you had to take A Level English :S
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    Question Starting a thread.

    This may seem a bit dumb but I am new and don`t know how to start a thread :s any nice habbo going to help thanks!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by lukeisok
    I thought you had to take A Level English :S
    No .. you have to take GCSE english. Then after that ( when you go to college) you can choose , i think , 4 subjects to do an A-level in.

    Im currently doing GCSE english and im almost certain that ill take it up at A-level.
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    Ty for the comments guys, all of you..

    If anyone would like to know, my second part of this story is also up..

    Why not take a look?
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