Longing for you.

[Boonzeet]

First poem I've wrote :

All my life I feel I've needed you,
I never ever want to let you go
Chasing after love, will it be true?
I don't want to go with the flow...

Sometimes I wonder if you care,
You never really notice that I am here,
Is talking to me only of a dare,
When I talk all I feel is fear

Now the time has come to see it's light,
I don't know if I am up to it tonight,
Us two standing alone in the moonlight,
Can this love happen, I don't know it might...

[WarezKid]

Bloody good, and lovely xo

[Boonzeet]

Thanks :) I spent ages on it and wanted to think, my friend wants his band to make a song on it :)

[Implosion]

Last verse spoils it as it broke the repetition in the rhymming
8/10