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Mrs.McCall
27-03-2008, 04:42 PM
:O you could take my job..

*stabs*

LMAO xD

Some good idea but do they align with mine? ;) Only time will tell!

But yes: I am confirming there will be a third series of Teenage Lives :D

CALLUMisbanned
27-03-2008, 04:46 PM
Bit unbelieveable Alexis surviving when she has got stabbed and no one's going to find her any time soon. His mum "Danny finds the magic key in his pocket as it started to glow and let his mum out" doesn't do it for me. Rick - no one is around, again, passerby, i don't think so. Don't care about stracy or chad.

Pyroka
27-03-2008, 05:13 PM
:O you could take my job..

*stabs*

LMAO xD

Some good idea but do they align with mine? ;) Only time will tell!

But yes: I am confirming there will be a third series of Teenage Lives :D

WOOO YAY FIRST SERIES. :P see, i'm good at idea writing and i didnt even know it. Bwahaha! dont stab me boi, or else I'll do a chad on you *throws down to the flo'*


Bit unbelieveable Alexis surviving when she has got stabbed and no one's going to find her any time soon. His mum "Danny finds the magic key in his pocket as it started to glow and let his mum out" doesn't do it for me. Rick - no one is around, again, passerby, i don't think so. Don't care about stracy or chad.

chad will survive, but will be arrested. stacy will be alive like michaela did... oidk, i dont think alexis will survive personally. it'd be a shame to kill off such a nice girl thats all. i think it'll be stacy undo'ing the door once grabbing a key out of an unconcious chad's pocket. rick, i think he will since someone will notice. brain damage might...

Mrs.McCall
27-03-2008, 05:13 PM
Bit unbelieveable Alexis surviving when she has got stabbed and no one's going to find her any time soon. His mum "Danny finds the magic key in his pocket as it started to glow and let his mum out" doesn't do it for me. Rick - no one is around, again, passerby, i don't think so. Don't care about stracy or chad.

Well, Rick is in a hospital let us not forget so there are plenty of people around.

I haven't decided just yet exactly who survives but expect a few SHOCKS! :P

Pyroka
27-03-2008, 05:37 PM
Well, Rick is in a hospital let us not forget so there are plenty of people around.

I haven't decided just yet exactly who survives but expect a few SHOCKS! :P

im seriously looking forward to this. seriously. :P

Mrs.McCall
27-03-2008, 05:43 PM
im seriously looking forward to this. seriously. :P

No word on when the first episode is going to be released but I am going to have a go at writing it tonight. It'll go back to its Series 1 roots though.

Pyroka
27-03-2008, 05:56 PM
Ah good. I did like series 2, but if it carried on with that sort of action then the plot might've gotten quite absurd. :P I loved the old ones, but the first are always the best! I did love the 2nd one though, parts of it are so... witty. xD

Mrs.McCall
27-03-2008, 06:10 PM
Yeah, this 3rd series is going to have some new faces and possibly a completely new setting :O

Just a possibility there.

Yeah, it's going to be a bit more humorous hopefully and just get back to simple drama that is believable i.e. toning down the fires and kidnapping!

:)

Pyroka
27-03-2008, 06:18 PM
:o Blackpool, come on. You know thats the only possible place... I know ittt. xD

More humour would be fun, since I loved the last one. Simple dramas are good, but you want a "WHO SHOT PHIL?" sort of cliffhanger, not "WHO ARSENED THE CHURCH, KIDNAPPED A MOTHER, ALMOST MARRIED/MURDERED HER CHILD & BEAT UP MOST PEOPLES?".

bit of a comparison there lol.

Mrs.McCall
27-03-2008, 08:03 PM
Yeah, 3rd series will improve big style.

:)

Pyroka
27-03-2008, 10:32 PM
you didnt just say 'bigstyle' LOL. i used to say that ages ago... hehe. im looking forward to it. :D

Mrs.McCall
27-03-2008, 10:55 PM
LMAO. Big style is just another one of my "joeyisms"

So:

Episode One is now FULLY written and will be broken up into two parts!

Big twists and suprises :D

Mrs.McCall
28-03-2008, 02:25 PM
OK guys, Series 3 will go as follows [or I'll try to make it like this and then probably change my mind but, hey! ]

Monday - Episode One - Part One

Tuesday - Episode One - Part Two

Wednesday - Episode Two

Thursday - Episode Three

Friday - Episode Four

Monday - Episode Five

Tuesday - Episode Six

Wednesday - Episode Seven

Thursday - Episode Eight

Friday - Episodes Nine & Ten (The Finale)

This could be expanded if I write too long of episodes as I have with Episode One (which is 8 pages lol).

So if I do that again it'll be dragged out even longer :P

As for a potential 4th Series well, we'll see how this one goes!

Pyroka
28-03-2008, 02:33 PM
WOWZA. I'd love a 4th series. I don't see why Habbox management haven't announced htis. it's the most sucessful article in Habbox history. :S They seriously should... I'm looking forward to them all =D Heard anything from BBC yet? you may be wise to send an app to ITV yknow, they need something like that... to beat hollyoaks, since reaper aint amazing.

Mrs.McCall
28-03-2008, 02:41 PM
Well as I said I actually haven't completed a proper script yet. I don't know when I'll get it done.

As for Habbox Management announcing it, I don't think they are allowed to support individual articles.

I'd love it if they did but oh well!

As for a forth series, see how this series goes. I think you'll all be pleasantly suprised with the first episode. It's a *bit* confusing but we'll see how it goes.

Pyroka
28-03-2008, 02:46 PM
Well as I said I actually haven't completed a proper script yet. I don't know when I'll get it done.

As for Habbox Management announcing it, I don't think they are allowed to support individual articles.

I'd love it if they did but oh well!

As for a forth series, see how this series goes. I think you'll all be pleasantly suprised with the first episode. It's a *bit* confusing but we'll see how it goes.

You've never had the circumstances where it could be so awesome, so yeah, support it! :( I wanna seeeeeeeee the first epiisooooooooode. i'm guessing it doesn't carry on straight away from the fire and stuff?

Mrs.McCall
28-03-2008, 02:49 PM
You've never had the circumstances where it could be so awesome, so yeah, support it! :( I wanna seeeeeeeee the first epiisooooooooode. i'm guessing it doesn't carry on straight away from the fire and stuff?

It does and it doesn't. There is no big time jump like there was between series 1 finale and series 2 episode one [which was 3 months].

So we're still in March with it so it's sorta like real time.

-Eyeless-
28-03-2008, 03:16 PM
HOW do you come up with so much material??? You are my idol :D

Mrs.McCall
28-03-2008, 03:17 PM
I take some pills... and then it all comes to me... -rocks back and forth-

Nah, I have a crazy imagination!

Pyroka
28-03-2008, 03:30 PM
It does and it doesn't. There is no big time jump like there was between series 1 finale and series 2 episode one [which was 3 months].

So we're still in March with it so it's sorta like real time.

Mmmm... I see flashbacks coming. =P It's good to see you've taken realtime into account.


I take some pills... and then it all comes to me... -rocks back and forth-

Nah, I have a crazy imagination!

LOL crazy? more like insane. :D

Mrs.McCall
28-03-2008, 03:50 PM
Ok, I'm insane.

I had to be careful with the timeline because if I carried on they'd be 20 and in Sixth Form still xD

Callum.
28-03-2008, 03:51 PM
Well, Rick is in a hospital let us not forget so there are plenty of people around.

I haven't decided just yet exactly who survives but expect a few SHOCKS! :P

Well the nurse is at the party, when i'm in a hospital, I as a visiter don't looks through every room to see if the moniter thing is on.

Mrs.McCall
28-03-2008, 03:56 PM
Well the nurse is at the party, when i'm in a hospital, I as a visiter don't looks through every room to see if the moniter thing is on.

Yeah but he's in ICU... meaning he'll be on doctors observation too.
;)

Mrs.McCall
31-03-2008, 03:12 PM
Here we go.

Episode One Part One! (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3690/102/)

Enjoy :)

Slowpoke
31-03-2008, 03:20 PM
OMG WHAT'S DANNY DOING ? :|:|

Fantastic as ever Joey :)

Mrs.McCall
31-03-2008, 03:27 PM
Thank you!

Feedback of a critical extent is appreciated too :)

Pyroka
31-03-2008, 03:32 PM
*BLINK* That was a seriously good episode, omg....

I can't believe Danny is that stupid, just... what? O_O Is his mother dead too then!? :o:o It's a shame to see both Stacey & Alexis die, but god... They probably dont know about Rick yet either. >_>

Well done <333333

Mrs.McCall
31-03-2008, 03:37 PM
Alexis, Stacy and Danny's Mother all died :(

Thanks for the feedback :P

Pyroka
31-03-2008, 03:41 PM
Does Danny have a father at all? God.. I hope Michaela makes him snap out of it, wth is he doing... Killed his mother, wanted him to die & he hides him. =/

Mrs.McCall
31-03-2008, 03:42 PM
He has a father yes.

I actually can't remember if he died or not lol.. it was mentioned in series 1.. but I forgot haha!

Danny is crazy. Love is blind yeah but only to a certain extent!

Pyroka
31-03-2008, 03:49 PM
Oooooooooooooooooo god, I'm lookin forward to seeing how this turns out. :D

Mrs.McCall
31-03-2008, 03:51 PM
Haha. Part 2 tomorrow then you all have to rate and slate so I know what to include when I write Episode two :)

Slowpoke
01-04-2008, 12:04 AM
Oh wow? You're writing them as you go along now? How on earth do you do that!? :O

Pyroka
01-04-2008, 12:32 AM
I think I'm loving these things too much xD

Mrs.McCall
01-04-2008, 01:07 AM
Oh wow? You're writing them as you go along now? How on earth do you do that!? :O

Well I decided that I am writing these things for you guys so might as well get your input :)

Mrs.McCall
01-04-2008, 01:40 PM
Part two is out now (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3692/102/).

Enjoy!

Slowpoke
01-04-2008, 02:08 PM
Going to read now, will leave feedback afterwards :D!

EDIT: Fantastic, glad he came to his senses!!

Pyroka
01-04-2008, 04:11 PM
OOoo :o

that's great. I think these are getting too great. xD wd!

Mrs.McCall
01-04-2008, 11:26 PM
Anything you'd like to see? Anything you'd like removed?

Slowpoke
01-04-2008, 11:34 PM
I want Danny's dad to turn up. Maybe he faked his own death or something to get out of a sticky situation? Danny needs a shoulder to cry on and his own father would be perfect! :)

Mrs.McCall
01-04-2008, 11:45 PM
I'm writing episode 2 soon so watch out for that... ;)

Slowpoke
01-04-2008, 11:47 PM
Oh my, my ideas implimented? Haha it will probably come to ruin now! :D

Mrs.McCall
01-04-2008, 11:51 PM
Haha, it might happen but it might now :P

Mrs.McCall
02-04-2008, 07:09 PM
Episode 2 (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3699/102/) is up now.

Enjoy :)

Slowpoke
02-04-2008, 07:26 PM
LOOOL I knew it was coming. Fantastic! :D

Pyroka
02-04-2008, 09:13 PM
I know only one way which won't make this sound absolutely absurd on him just HAPPENING to turn up on hte doorstep, which would be social services afink. :P

Y'know, I feel sorry for Danny because it's obvious he can't do anything baout himself, change himself or anything like that... yet, *sigh* poor lad. Ano what everyones saying, but srsly... =[ WD on the article though. =P

Mrs.McCall
02-04-2008, 10:28 PM
Well I am not going to reveal to much but basically, he saw Danny's Mother's obituary in a local newspaper.

:)

Mrs.McCall
03-04-2008, 05:20 PM
Late with this ep so will post it tonight some time!

Pyroka
03-04-2008, 05:33 PM
No worries dude. :] I wont be back till 9 anyway!

Mrs.McCall
03-04-2008, 10:43 PM
Here we are!

Enjoy Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3716/102/)with a twist that will just make you go OOOOH :O

benjamin
03-04-2008, 10:49 PM
LOL, RICK IS DANNYS HALF BROTHER AND THEY HAD INCEST LOL

Mrs.McCall
03-04-2008, 10:51 PM
LOL, RICK IS DANNYS HALF BROTHER AND THEY HAD INCEST LOL

;)

Maybe, maybe...

Pyroka
03-04-2008, 11:05 PM
OIHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MY GOD. THAT WAS THE BGIGEST ITWIST EIHFIHFIURHFI HRGIHIERKGH SPEECHLESS AGAIN WANT ANOTHER EPISODE, I JSUT GOT EVEN MORE ADDICTED OMGOGMGOGMGOGMGOGMGOGMOGMGO0GMGO MEDNFJEUWWWWWWWWWW

Mrs.McCall
03-04-2008, 11:15 PM
LMAO.

I couldn't just bring Danny's Father back with no big shock!

Pyroka
03-04-2008, 11:16 PM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK.

Mrs.McCall
03-04-2008, 11:22 PM
Haha. Any pointers for Episode 4.

Lol @ ure sig btw.. i clicked :(

Slowpoke
03-04-2008, 11:29 PM
Unbelievable!! Love it! :D

Mrs.McCall
03-04-2008, 11:30 PM
Haha.

Thanks guys :D

Slowpoke
03-04-2008, 11:37 PM
You're welcome. I can't believe you're writing them all in one day!

Mrs.McCall
03-04-2008, 11:57 PM
It's easy once i have an idea planned I just roll with it.

I basically have the entire series planned but that can change depending on reader feedback.

Mrs.McCall
04-04-2008, 03:32 PM
Tonight's episode will be up tomorrow instead as I haven't written it and I'm a bit busy atm!

Mrs.McCall
05-04-2008, 09:40 PM
Episode 4 (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3729/102/)

For you enjoyment!

Sorry it's late. :)

Pyroka
05-04-2008, 11:27 PM
Oh.... my, god. O_O

Mrs.McCall
06-04-2008, 09:09 AM
Is that a good oh my god or a "this is now rubbish" oh my god?

Pyroka
06-04-2008, 08:01 PM
a good omg. :P

Mrs.McCall
06-04-2008, 08:11 PM
Woo!

The series *might* be extended for 13 episodes instead of 10, not decided but there are a few more storylines I want to play out yet.

Pyroka
06-04-2008, 08:14 PM
OH MY GOD. <33333333333333333 =DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

kerplunkwozere
06-04-2008, 08:16 PM
it's getting a bit predictable lol

Mrs.McCall
06-04-2008, 08:27 PM
it's getting a bit predictable lol

OK well, I've wrote what happens next so go on, what do you think happens?

Pyroka
06-04-2008, 08:53 PM
theyll be ripped at, and all this crap. then ricks father will be like OMG and they'll have a huge brawl (being danny's father & ricks father).

i think you gotta think the expected, and then do the unexpected, but then change your mind and do something even less expected. :P

Mrs.McCall
06-04-2008, 09:50 PM
Rick's Father (not his biological father) does play a role in the next episode I can reveal that.

But I don't think you'll predict what happens. I am trying to add as many twists as I can without it become ridiculous (which almost happened by end of Series 2) :)

Pyroka
06-04-2008, 09:53 PM
mmm... It is still good, but I gotta admit it takes alot to top the first series. :P it's always hard to top! xD

Mrs.McCall
06-04-2008, 09:57 PM
First Series is my favourite as well really. That's because there was a lot more evil with Stacy and it was more light hearted because I could balance it with the Nate/Danny love stuff. It will progress to a bit more fun later on I think but for the next 3 episode it's going to be a bit :(:(:(

I know what happens in the Series 3 finale which will be by favourite finale I think... doesn't involve fire this time!

Pyroka
06-04-2008, 10:02 PM
LOL I didnt actually notice that! God, you're such a pyromaniac... coming from the guy called Pyroka ahaha. Whens the next epsiode up by the way? :]

Mrs.McCall
06-04-2008, 10:10 PM
Haha yeah.

Tomorrow hopefully. I think the whole "write as you go along thing" was a bad idea... lmao xD

Pyroka
06-04-2008, 10:14 PM
Ahaha. xD You should do what this guy is doing on a webcomic. He's basically drawing his comics, but he has votes in between 3-4 as to what the viewers want the main man to do. it's quite interesting actually... it's like a choice of what happens next.

i'd try it once, yknow, as a trial...

Mrs.McCall
06-04-2008, 10:16 PM
Was thinking of doing something like that but not sure how many people would participate...

Pyroka
06-04-2008, 10:27 PM
yeah thats a worry that, seeing as no-one really looks in here... hmm. theyd have to do an announcement on it, and well, yknow what they have on that policy!

John!
07-04-2008, 07:17 AM
I forgot about the insest lol.

I think episode 4 was a bit too short though.

Mrs.McCall
07-04-2008, 12:34 PM
I forgot about the insest lol.

I think episode 4 was a bit too short though.

Yeah it really was!

Like I said, no more writing day by day... takes too much time :)

Mrs.McCall
07-04-2008, 01:11 PM
Episode 5 (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3733/102/) now up!

Enjoy :)

Pyroka
07-04-2008, 04:27 PM
HOLY CRAP. I R STUNNED NOW. *CRY*

Mrs.McCall
07-04-2008, 04:29 PM
Hopefully it wasn't too predictable :rolleyes:;):P

I will post episode 6 tomorrow but then Teenage Lives will take a short break whilst I write more episodes and get them done in advance.

Pyroka
07-04-2008, 04:44 PM
it actually wasn't... i didnt expect him to crash at all. i expected him to be in hospital cuz ricks dad did something.. i was expecting some sort of high speed chase where one gets killed. O_o but... nothing. :S

Mrs.McCall
07-04-2008, 04:48 PM
it actually wasn't... i didnt expect him to crash at all. i expected him to be in hospital cuz ricks dad did something.. i was expecting some sort of high speed chase where one gets killed. O_o but... nothing. :S

Well I thought that'd be the obvious way to go so I took the opposite angle.

Glad you were shocked though :P

le harry
08-04-2008, 12:56 PM
Been reading them since the start and finally thought i'd post, excellent work. :)

Mrs.McCall
08-04-2008, 03:42 PM
Thanks, means a lot :)

Mrs.McCall
08-04-2008, 07:08 PM
Episode Six
(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3741/102/)
Last one for a bit whilst I catch up on my writing.

Enjoy :)

John!
12-04-2008, 07:24 PM
Episode Six
(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3741/102/)
Last one for a bit whilst I catch up on my writing.

Enjoy :)

:O That was good.

The only thing is I'm not wondering what's gonna happen to Danny, because he's obviously gonna be saved by some interesting plot. Here's my guess at it:

Michaela stays behind at the funeral and suddenly Danny's dad jumps out of the coffin and is still alive. Then for some reason they decide to go for a ride down the canal in a long boat. Michaela finds some ice skates on the boat and goes skating on the frozen canal. She see's Danny and starts trying to help him. The long boat then comes speeding up the canal in a wonky line because Danny's dad is drunk. The long boat heads straight for Danny. Michaela is struggling to pick up Danny and get him out the way. Just as the boat is about to hit them she jumps out of the way with him in her arms and the boat slices one of Danny's hairs off his head. The boat then crashes into the side and Danny's dad goes flying off and crashes through the ice.

Mrs.McCall
12-04-2008, 08:37 PM
:O That was good.

The only thing is I'm not wondering what's gonna happen to Danny, because he's obviously gonna be saved by some interesting plot. Here's my guess at it:

Michaela stays behind at the funeral and suddenly Danny's dad jumps out of the coffin and is still alive. Then for some reason they decide to go for a ride down the canal in a long boat. Michaela finds some ice skates on the boat and goes skating on the frozen canal. She see's Danny and starts trying to help him. The long boat then comes speeding up the canal in a wonky line because Danny's dad is drunk. The long boat heads straight for Danny. Michaela is struggling to pick up Danny and get him out the way. Just as the boat is about to hit them she jumps out of the way with him in her arms and the boat slices one of Danny's hairs off his head. The boat then crashes into the side and Danny's dad goes flying off and crashes through the ice.

:O:O

That's better than the idea I thought of!

Haha. Teenage Lives will/should return on Tuesday :D

Mrs.McCall
15-04-2008, 03:59 PM
Here we are.

A bit of comic relief with episode seven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3787/101/).

Enjoy :)

Pyroka
15-04-2008, 06:32 PM
That made me giggle alot. Quite cute :P Well done dude<3

Mrs.McCall
15-04-2008, 07:46 PM
Not a good episode really but I wanted to have some comedy before it went dramatic again.

It's like Superman Returns with Brandon Routh.. I just wanted to re-introduce the main characters.

Mrs.McCall
17-04-2008, 07:51 PM
Ok.

Episode Eight.
(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3796/101/)
Enjoy :)

Pyroka
18-04-2008, 12:07 AM
OH JESUS CHRIST NO EW EW EW EW INCEST SURELY?!?!??!?! AGHHHHH LOL.

Mrs.McCall
18-04-2008, 04:00 PM
Welcome to the latest storyline.

Will they get caught? How far will they take it?

Don't forget, incest is still illegal ;)

Also, why is it "ew" now that they know they are brothers? It was OK before, they loved each other before... they don't see each other as brothers but does that make it OK?

Adam$
21-04-2008, 07:56 AM
Written well, well put together. +rep.

Finkelstien
21-04-2008, 03:21 PM
Fantastic work :)

Mrs.McCall
21-04-2008, 03:26 PM
Thanks.

New one soon :)

Pyroka
23-04-2008, 10:59 AM
Want a new one!!! :(

Nuxty
26-04-2008, 09:27 PM
Please say the new one is ready!

You shpuld have done this on HabboxTV :(

Mrs.McCall
28-04-2008, 06:35 PM
Sorry there's been nothing for a while. I've taken a week off until Wednesday due to coursework and some other problems but I have a fabulous episode for you all when I get back :)

Pyroka
28-04-2008, 06:48 PM
AYAYAYYAYA :D;D;D;D

Mrs.McCall
28-04-2008, 08:49 PM
Sorry for the long wait. It's like the Writer's Strike lol... well worth the wait :)

Mrs.McCall
02-05-2008, 08:43 PM
Right.

After the long wait and annoying illness I had.

Here is episode nine!

Clickedy Click! (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3871/101/)

Pyroka
02-05-2008, 10:05 PM
NOT AGAIIIIN AHGGHHGG

THAT WAS WELL WORTH THE WAIT BUT EEEK. WD <3 EEEK.

Mrs.McCall
03-05-2008, 01:04 PM
Haha, I am glad you liked :)

New one on Monday, possibly Sunday :)

woo.

Nuxty
03-05-2008, 02:38 PM
-Scream- Chad is there! I bet he goes to the same uni as danny and trys to kill him or something or like theyre on the plane and he has a bomb lol.

COULD THIS BE THE END OF TEENAGE LIVES? With Danny going to Uni :( It well could be.
I hope you don't end it.

Mrs.McCall
03-05-2008, 04:46 PM
That's something you'll have to find out soon ;)

Woah @ the bomb thing... I don't think Chad is THAT bad... or is he??

Glad you liked.

:)

Mrs.McCall
06-05-2008, 08:40 PM
Enjoy...

Episode 10 (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3894/101/)

Pyroka
07-05-2008, 10:31 PM
GRAH I KNEW HE HAD PLANS, HE''S SUCH A BASTATRD HERHERHGBERHGBUJGFYUSRGYHERSGRUYGFYUGFUYDFBH HATE HIM. GRUHGFYURGVYSRHGJFBUSRGF

LOL sorry xD I love them still McCall :D

Mrs.McCall
08-05-2008, 05:40 PM
New one tomorrow...

Sorry they aren't daily any more but I want to space them out as much as possible :P

But yeah, the thing with Chad takes a very interesting turn!

Pyroka
08-05-2008, 08:17 PM
It's fine lol, I find it hard to get the time to read the articles so it's all a good mix. You'd best carry on with them though :]

Mrs.McCall
09-05-2008, 01:48 PM
As of now this will be the last series.

I could be tempted to carry it on though so I don't know... I might do a skins style dumping of the entire cast and bring in all new characters.

The finale is the only episode not written because I can't decide where I want to go with it :(

Mrs.McCall
09-05-2008, 03:38 PM
It's here!

Episode Eleven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3915/101/) of this extended series.

It runs on for quite a few episodes yet.

Also, the decision on whether there should be a forth series is to be decided, if I think of a cool idea then I'll go for it but I am worried that the format is becoming boring.

FlyingJesus
09-05-2008, 03:42 PM
Spoiler: Snape kills Dumbledore

Edited by --ss-- (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not post off-topic ;).

Fehm
09-05-2008, 03:47 PM
Awesome dude:) Welldone:P

Mrs.McCall
09-05-2008, 03:50 PM
Thanks.

Let me know your thoughts on a 4th Series.

Pyroka
09-05-2008, 06:31 PM
OMG...

didn't see that one coming! no really, i didnt O_o tbh I love the characters and everything however it is getting a bit predictable. I think you should go with the same sort of vibe and feel, but using a different storyline & cast altogether, like a revam pof the whole thing.

same title, just completely different characters (and maybe an appearance from one or two old ones, youll find a way to get it in :P)

Mrs.McCall
09-05-2008, 10:00 PM
OMG...

didn't see that one coming! no really, i didnt O_o tbh I love the characters and everything however it is getting a bit predictable. I think you should go with the same sort of vibe and feel, but using a different storyline & cast altogether, like a revam pof the whole thing.

same title, just completely different characters (and maybe an appearance from one or two old ones, youll find a way to get it in :P)

What you think is predictable? I was beginning to think that myself and it gets harder to introduce twists without it becoming too bizarre but the next couple of episodes are certainly wild and not so predictable.

Chad will be around for a little while ;)

Pyroka
09-05-2008, 10:08 PM
i meant the characters being predictable, sorry.

Mrs.McCall
09-05-2008, 10:15 PM
i meant the characters being predictable, sorry.

Ohh

See, I do admit I regret getting rid of Alexis and Nate. I was glad to get rid of Stacy because I felt her story wasn't going anywhere and I really wanted Michaela at the forefront of things because I think I have given her some great one-liners BUT I think poor Danny has had a bit too much of a rough time!

Pyroka
09-05-2008, 10:38 PM
yeah, i think its time danny got given some sort of a break maybe. i think a new series which puts danny in some better and worse light but still using whats happened to him as life lessons and helping people yknow, it'd be a good story line.

sorry if im not making sense, nothing is atm.

Mrs.McCall
09-05-2008, 10:40 PM
No, I get what you mean.

At the moment, a 4th series doesn't look very likely. I'm due to do a different series of articles which isn't a script but I have a different script idea too.

So may end it this series.

Pyroka
09-05-2008, 10:51 PM
i think you should keep the script idea, but change the setting and keep a few characters which are the same. not many though, you need new characters... these articles will have to be spot on, but then i have faith in you mr mccall :P

Mrs.McCall
10-05-2008, 11:33 AM
If Series 4 happens it'll take place somewhere else I think.

I don't know. Because with different characters and a new setting is it not a new show?

Pyroka
12-05-2008, 01:09 AM
Well look at Skins, same show, different characters with entries from random previous ones from time to time. Something like that would be alright in this case... Idk, maybe Danny in america? :P

Mrs.McCall
12-05-2008, 05:12 PM
Enjoy

Episode Twelve (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3932/101/)

:D

There are 15 episodes in total this series and the finale has now been written!

Pyroka
12-05-2008, 07:07 PM
HOLY CRAP. I did not see that one coming in a million years, I mean seriously, whoa. Where the hell did that come from O____O magod, good episode but im shocked rly!

Mrs.McCall
12-05-2008, 07:45 PM
HOLY CRAP. I did not see that one coming in a million years, I mean seriously, whoa. Where the hell did that come from O____O magod, good episode but im shocked rly!

I told you I thought the characters were getting predictable.

The next episode is a flashback to how Rick and Chad got involved with each other :P

Pyroka
12-05-2008, 08:24 PM
Eek... I don't want the series to end? It seems to be different everytime :P

Mrs.McCall
12-05-2008, 08:59 PM
Eek... I don't want the series to end? It seems to be different everytime :P

I like to suprise you.

There are 3 episodes left of this current series and I am still undecided as to whether or not to bring it back. The finale i've written could mean it goes either way ;)

The next ep is a flashback and the last two (which will not be put as one as in previous finales) will be spread across a couple of days. This has definatly been the longest series length spanning across 4 weeks :O

Pyroka
12-05-2008, 09:06 PM
Hmm yeah, but thats only cuz you're so delayed sometimes LOL. I think theyre great though and as much as I'm finding it hard to get time to read them, I still like them as much as I used to when they first started. Please make a 4th series but with a different setting, I think that'd be so much better.

Mrs.McCall
13-05-2008, 04:14 PM
Hmm yeah, but thats only cuz you're so delayed sometimes LOL. I think theyre great though and as much as I'm finding it hard to get time to read them, I still like them as much as I used to when they first started. Please make a 4th series but with a different setting, I think that'd be so much better.

Yeah, I prefer dragging it out tho, gives me more time for other stuff haha.

But yeah, jury is still out on the 4th series idea.

New ep up tomorrow :)

-Xiangu-
13-05-2008, 09:42 PM
I LOVE YOU AND YOUR MAGIC HANDS JOEY!

Mrs.McCall
14-05-2008, 07:29 PM
Episode Thirteen
(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3942/101/)
As promised.

Bit of a filler but provides a good back story.

Mrs.McCall
15-05-2008, 07:06 PM
The finale has been edited and a decision has been made.

Will Teenage Lives return?

You'll all have to wait and see ;)

Pyroka
15-05-2008, 08:07 PM
GRAH I hate you McCall, you'd best not have ended it. :(

Mrs.McCall
16-05-2008, 04:05 PM
You'll find out soon.

Nuxty
16-05-2008, 07:04 PM
Right so Micheala Gets hit by a train and then shes back in Episode 13. Surely she didnt servive that.

Mrs.McCall
16-05-2008, 07:24 PM
Right so Micheala Gets hit by a train and then shes back in Episode 13. Surely she didnt servive that.

Sorry, Episode 13 is a flashback.

It is mentioned in the episode.

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 01:24 PM
Here is the penultimate episode.

Warning: Contains scenes of violence which some may find upsetting or disturbing.

Episode 14
(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3963/101/)

:)

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 05:36 PM
Episode 15 (the final) will be up tomorrow and then I will reveal if there will or will not be a forth series. :)

Pyroka
17-05-2008, 06:33 PM
holy crap.. :o

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 06:53 PM
Trust me it gets better... or should I say worse.

Chad is a very unhinged man but will Rick's conscience make him stop now his mum is dead?

All revealed tomorrow... or maybe... tonight ;)

Pyroka
17-05-2008, 06:56 PM
OMGZ PLEASE DO IT TONIGHT. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. yeah, i think rick will become unhinged and remember who he really was. omgz, and i can see michaela coming back to life yknow! LOLS.

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 07:01 PM
Well, don't forget Danny doesn't know that Michaela is dead yet.

But yes,

She is definitely dead. Sorry!

;)

Pyroka
17-05-2008, 07:07 PM
*cry* whyy, whyyy. lol, then again it musta been a fast train.

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 07:10 PM
*cry* whyy, whyyy. lol, then again it musta been a fast train.

Yeah, it kinda was LMAO

Omg. I am actually laughing in real life at that.

She kinda got dragged by it aswell, poor thing. Thank god she's imaginary!

I mean guns and police helicopters are a stretch but her surviving that would be a bit much.

Pyroka
17-05-2008, 07:14 PM
Well nothings a stretch when it comes to Chad... I'm surprised he got past passport control cuz he'd be on the wanted list wouldn't he? Wait, he did come overseas?

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 07:21 PM
Well nothings a stretch when it comes to Chad... I'm surprised he got past passport control cuz he'd be on the wanted list wouldn't he? Wait, he did come overseas?

If you remember, there was no evidence to prosecute just the testimonies of the people he effected. He was a very smart criminal. And also Danny said he didn't want to press charges.

Then they were going to start a new life in America then Danny pulled out but then he came back and got an alliance with Rick. After going back to tie a few loose ends he and Rick executed their plan but now it's not going so well which brings us to the finale.

:)

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 09:21 PM
The series finale.

Episode 15 (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3965/101/)

Also, please DO NOT read this spoiler until you've read the episode

There WILL be a Series 4. It will begin after a short break. It will be LONGER and BETTER and will include a new setting and characters.

http://www.justupload.net/uploads/40051708banner.jpg Banner courtesy of PureGamer.

Pyroka
17-05-2008, 09:27 PM
Eek I'm actually crying :'( my god, i cant believe it... no no no no :( im happy that theres gonna be another but... *cry*&

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 09:29 PM
Yeah, bit at the end is sad.

Did you think the ending was epic enough?

Pyroka
17-05-2008, 09:30 PM
it was kindergarten cop epic.

my lips were shaking uncontrollably, gah thats never made me cry LOL.

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 09:33 PM
Aww.

I wanted to make it action packed but also close off some stories ready for a new era.

Was very fun to write even though it took me ages deciding what will happen.

Pyroka
17-05-2008, 09:35 PM
LOL I think Kindergarten Cop was amazingly epic though!

lmao, oh dear. I think killing everyone off was a little mean but yknow...

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 09:39 PM
Wanted to get rid of the temptation of bringing anyone back as it may ruin the newer series ;)

infatuation
17-05-2008, 09:40 PM
I read like four of them, but I'm lost in which order the episodes go so I find it pointless
to read something that could be from episode four, then to like.. 11.

Mrs.McCall
17-05-2008, 09:50 PM
The episodes are all in order...

There are 3 series so far each in number order per episode.

Series 3

Episode One, Part one (http://http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3690/101/)
Episode One, Part two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3692/101/)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3699/101/)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3716/101/)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3729/101/)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3733/101/)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3741/101/)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3787/101/)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3796/101/)
Episode Nine (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3871/101/)
Episode Ten (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3894/101/)
Episode Eleven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3915/101/)
Episode Twelve (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3932/101/)
Episode Thirteen (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3942/101/)
Episode Fourteen (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3963/101/)
Episode Fifthteen (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3965/101/)

Pyroka
17-05-2008, 11:44 PM
Here ya go:

Series One

Episode One (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3537/102/)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3543/102/)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3546/102/)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3551/102/)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3571/102/)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3574/102/)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3580/102/)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3583/102/)
Episode Nine & Ten - Joint Finale (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3592/102/)

The Christmas Special - Seasonal Episode (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3594/102/)

Series Two

Episode One (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3606/102/)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3609/102/)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3615/102/)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3616/102/)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3641/102/)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3642/102/)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3653/102/)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3655/102/)
Episode Nine & Ten - Joint Finale
(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3661/102/)
Series Three

Episode One, Part one (http://http//www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3690/101/)
Episode One, Part two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3692/101/)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3699/101/)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3716/101/)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3729/101/)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3733/101/)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3741/101/)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3787/101/)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3796/101/)
Episode Nine (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3871/101/)
Episode Ten (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3894/101/)
Episode Eleven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3915/101/)
Episode Twelve (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3932/101/)
Episode Thirteen (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3942/101/)
Episode Fourteen (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3963/101/)
Episode Fifthteen - Series Finale

(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3965/101/)All made by the fabulous Mrs.McCall. :)

You know you love me babes

Mrs.McCall
18-05-2008, 07:41 AM
OMG.

You angel!

Thanks, saved me a job :)

Squishys
18-05-2008, 10:19 AM
OMGG!
Ive read all your episodes from the beginning you posted
and i've finally decided to comment

But wow
I cant belive the ending
Such a sad and violent end :(
At least Chad is dead!
you have an amazing imagination :D

Mrs.McCall
18-05-2008, 11:02 AM
Aww thank you, it means a lot.

You pleased there is a forth series or do you think i'm dragging it out?

Squishys
18-05-2008, 02:21 PM
There should definatley be a forth series :D
I love your stories!

Mrs.McCall
18-05-2008, 02:26 PM
Wow! Thanks, it is always so nice to hear people like my writing :)

Pyroka
18-05-2008, 05:56 PM
You should so have this thread pinned. :P

Mrs.McCall
18-05-2008, 07:16 PM
I might pm elkaa asking :)

-Eyeless-
18-05-2008, 07:23 PM
I have to things to say:

1. I love you, I am in awe of you... I am falling for you... :O lol
2. I am green with envy, how do you do it and the band of followers who admire you too, ITS AMAZING....

4th series.... BRING IT ON :)

Mrs.McCall
18-05-2008, 07:29 PM
Wow thanks. I might start a cult :o

-Eyeless-
18-05-2008, 07:35 PM
lol Don't that would be the bane of your life... I tried once, it failed and I got done for genocide :S lol.... (that was a joke for those of you who don't get humour) OH

Pyroka
18-05-2008, 07:45 PM
It really is overshadowed because Habbox haven't ever sponsored the Article department. Frankly, I think they should start because it has got a cult following already and would only grow more.

Mrs.McCall
18-05-2008, 08:30 PM
I may be getting a Habbox Today announcement on the site at some point but, yes I'd like to see more interest in articles in general.

-Eyeless-
18-05-2008, 08:35 PM
TBH there is no way near enough desire for our articles... And habbox has not promoted us at all, every other department that does something that habbox users can see and read are promoted in some way... WHY NOT US?

Mrs.McCall
18-05-2008, 08:40 PM
Well we'll get our glory when the new Habbox layout comes out apparently. Rumour has it articles play a major part!

Hopefully it'll be out in time.

I am thinking of doing a competition where people can create a character for the show and then I'll include it. What you think?

-Eyeless-
18-05-2008, 08:41 PM
Great Idea :) that would have loadsa people involved...

Mrs.McCall
18-05-2008, 08:44 PM
And at the same time promote the series, promote Habbox and promote Articles!

Pyroka
18-05-2008, 09:48 PM
Go for it I say, whats the harm in adding a little usr activity? :P

Mrs.McCall
18-05-2008, 11:11 PM
Maybe as an extra prize, they themselves can be a "guest star" on the show. i.e. name, personality etc

Pyroka
19-05-2008, 10:08 AM
LOL Ok I'm not sure about that :P I think maybe for one episode would be ok but thats about it.

Mrs.McCall
19-05-2008, 03:21 PM
Perhaps a bit too far, yes. Anyway, i'm in the middle of writing it. Don't know how long it'll take so can't give you an ETA on the new series.

Pyroka
19-05-2008, 05:32 PM
Just write as much as you can, and make sure the writing is the best to your ability. I'd rather wait if it makes your articles better. :)

Mrs.McCall
19-05-2008, 07:37 PM
Yeah, as soon as I get my Mac fixed [I broke the charger] I will get it sorted.

Possible storylines for new series.

- A Terrorist Attack
- An Illicit Affair
- A Shock From The Past
- A Secret Child

;)

Just to get you excited.

Mrs.McCall
19-05-2008, 08:56 PM
Just wrote the first episode. You're all in for some shocks.

There will, hopefully, be 21 episodes this series.

There will be one main storyline which will appear in Episode 5/6. The first few episodes are a meet the new characters, what Danny's been up to and getting a bit of back story.

I can reveal the names of the new main Characters are:
- Danny [You know that]
- Ed
- Serena
- Sarah

Then, there will be episode "arcs" which are basically events/storylines that happen over 4 or more episodes to add a twist in the tail of the overall piece. It's very Americanised and it is more a season than a series. I want to write Half of it before I release it :)

I can also reveal that a part of Danny's past will play a MAJOR part in this new series.

Who could it be?

Your time to speculate people :)

infatuation
19-05-2008, 08:59 PM
Here ya go:

Series One

Episode One (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3537/102/)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3543/102/)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3546/102/)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3551/102/)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3571/102/)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3574/102/)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3580/102/)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3583/102/)
Episode Nine & Ten - Joint Finale (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3592/102/)

The Christmas Special - Seasonal Episode (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3594/102/)

Series Two

Episode One (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3606/102/)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3609/102/)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3615/102/)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3616/102/)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3641/102/)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3642/102/)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3653/102/)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3655/102/)
Episode Nine & Ten - Joint Finale
(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3661/102/)
Series Three

Episode One, Part one (http://http//www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3690/101/)
Episode One, Part two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3692/101/)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3699/101/)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3716/101/)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3729/101/)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3733/101/)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3741/101/)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3787/101/)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3796/101/)
Episode Nine (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3871/101/)
Episode Ten (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3894/101/)
Episode Eleven (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3915/101/)
Episode Twelve (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3932/101/)
Episode Thirteen (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3942/101/)
Episode Fourteen (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3963/101/)
Episode Fifthteen - Series Finale

(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3965/101/)All made by the fabulous Mrs.McCall. :)

You know you love me babes

thankyou!
I will read them as soon as I can.

Mrs.McCall
19-05-2008, 09:24 PM
Enjoy.

Oh and if anyone fancies making more banners or making avatars for Teenage Lives feel free :D:D

Pyroka
19-05-2008, 09:53 PM
Yeah, as soon as I get my Mac fixed [I broke the charger] I will get it sorted.

Possible storylines for new series.

- A Terrorist Attack
- An Illicit Affair
- A Shock From The Past
- A Secret Child

;)

Just to get you excited.

You have a mac?! I just felt a imbalance in the force. :( Definetly cross out Terrorist Attack, even though it is America. I think that'd be good for a second series but for now lets get to know the characters before you kill them off? An affair seems a bit inappropriate, a shock from the past has happened before so introducing that now would be silly but a secret child? That was only tapped upon in the first series (I think? Coulda been 2nd) so that's something to explore in. Dont rush into thooough!


Just wrote the first episode. You're all in for some shocks.

There will, hopefully, be 21 episodes this series.

There will be one main storyline which will appear in Episode 5/6. The first few episodes are a meet the new characters, what Danny's been up to and getting a bit of back story.

I can reveal the names of the new main Characters are:
- Danny [You know that]
- Ed
- Serena
- Sarah

Then, there will be episode "arcs" which are basically events/storylines that happen over 4 or more episodes to add a twist in the tail of the overall piece. It's very Americanised and it is more a season than a series. I want to write Half of it before I release it :)

I can also reveal that a part of Danny's past will play a MAJOR part in this new series.

Who could it be?

Your time to speculate people :)

I love this soooo much. :D I'm trying to think of something which could be in Danny's past, uhh... It can't be Nate or Rick or anyone like that so who the hell could it be? Hmm, I honestly can't think of anyone because all the names that were in the first four series got killed off by you, you big murdering sod! I really like the sound of this, although I think you should limit the arc's and just do them from time to time but not too many. It all sounds quite er... Soapish! Ahaha.

I'm really looking forward to this 4th series now, I hope you make it amazing.<3

Mrs.McCall
19-05-2008, 10:31 PM
Yeah, those first set were preliminary ideas but i've sat down now and thought it through.

Yeah the arcs will be every 8/9 episodes and some won't last long for example if I did a wedding that would be a 2-episode Arc or a Funeral. Because usually I just skim past it.

I believe that this next series could be the best because I am actually taking my time.

This thread is getting stickied btw [according to Elkaa], and I will keep this thread as updated as possible with info until the series is released.

As for the blast from the past, maybe the dead could rise again??

My mouth is closed for now :).

Pyroka
20-05-2008, 08:30 AM
MICHAELAS ALIVE MICHAELAS ALIVE MICHAELAS ALIIIIIIIVE! :D

Good to hear it, I loved the first series through to the last one, even though I think it was the 2nd one which was a bit barmy at times. If you've found the best balance, this should be amazing.

Mrs.McCall
20-05-2008, 03:35 PM
I've found the balance between what is too bizarre but what is just about believable which is really explored this series.

:)

Pyroka
20-05-2008, 05:15 PM
Yayayay I'm realllly looking forward to this next series you know, I mean REALLY looking forward.

Mrs.McCall
20-05-2008, 05:35 PM
I am glad to hear.

I'm getting ALOT more support from Habbox now. They've stuck the thread now :D

Plus, the new layout will mean greater exposure and Professor-Alex has been amazing.

So yeah, thanks to Elkaa and Jesus for getting this thread stuck :D

Pyroka
20-05-2008, 08:18 PM
Yay! Why don't you ask a SMOD if they can include that list of episodes I made for you, it'd probably be easier for the users who wanna get straight into it.

Ooo oyaya, great to hear that you're getting the support you deserve. Without it, you could've gone into a state of mental illness (yes, that was a bad joke wern't it lol).

Mrs.McCall
20-05-2008, 09:59 PM
That's a good idea.

I'll PM a Smod.

Redacted
20-05-2008, 10:09 PM
very nice!

Pyroka
20-05-2008, 10:29 PM
Yayayayayay!

Ohhhh what episode are you producing at the moment? :P

The Professor
21-05-2008, 02:33 PM
Yay! Why don't you ask a SMOD if they can include that list of episodes I made for you, it'd probably be easier for the users who wanna get straight into it.

Ooo oyaya, great to hear that you're getting the support you deserve. Without it, you could've gone into a state of mental illness (yes, that was a bad joke wern't it lol).

I suppose it helps having an FSM and the articles manager rolled up into one person eh? ;)

List of episodes added to the first post :)

Mrs.McCall
21-05-2008, 03:19 PM
Thank you.

Also, check out Habbox Today all.

Teenage Lives is about to get bigger.

And ryan, i'm on Episode 3.

Pyroka
21-05-2008, 03:22 PM
:o

SWEET. Kk, well you're taking your time which is good. :P

LOL The link on Habbox Today doesn't work! Just post a link to the forum post which the episodes in.

Mrs.McCall
21-05-2008, 05:53 PM
LMAO.

Oh well, it's a start anyway...

Pyroka
21-05-2008, 05:57 PM
LOL Bit of a false start but still, it's getting there. :P

Mrs.McCall
21-05-2008, 07:04 PM
I may write some Teenage Lives "shorts" to keep you all going. Set them back before Danny became gay and got with Nate up to the point they got caught and the summer after... which is start of Series 1.

What you think?

Pyroka
21-05-2008, 07:09 PM
It'd be nice, but I think you should write the 4th series first then write something like that for the gap between the 4th & 5th series? :) Delay the 4th series once completing it and write it all out ready y'know?

That's what I'd do.

Mrs.McCall
21-05-2008, 07:40 PM
I guess but like, it used to take me 15 minutes to write an episode at the last 3 series standard [the standard i'd use for the look-back episodes]. But the new one is taking me 1/2 hour.

Either way, I got to write something for the department or i'll get fired!

Pyroka
21-05-2008, 07:43 PM
You'll never get fired babes, you're just too awesome to be fired. If I were in the News Department still, I would've so joined you. I'm sure Professor Alex asked me to be an Articles Writer once too, shame I didn't accept! :P Ah well, good luck to you Mrs.McCall and really, do take your time on these.

I'd rather have something so amazing than have something which you put together in 15 minutes. <3 Don't waste your time on the other bits you suggested earlier unti lyou've finished this series. We might just give you a well-deserved break if you make this amazing lol.

Mrs.McCall
21-05-2008, 07:45 PM
I guess so yeah. Thank you so much for your support lately.

I might post some old poems of mine :)

Pyroka
21-05-2008, 07:46 PM
:o I remember the poems! =D

Mrs.McCall
21-05-2008, 07:50 PM
Yeah, I stopped posting them after I got 3 complaints saying I was making them feel depressed :(

My do a fashion blog-y type thing.

Nuxty
21-05-2008, 08:38 PM
You really should have done this for HabboxTV if it was still around!

The series so far have been class.

Its a great thing to write and for myself as a Habbox Staff member I am sure I can say you Have EVERY Staff Members report.

I'd like to see a Grand Theft Auto type of story. For the more older users.

Keep on going Joey. Your doing well and always will do!

Mrs.McCall
21-05-2008, 10:44 PM
Thanks alot.

The HxTV angle would've been very interesting! I think I would have to re-develop it if I did it for a Habbo-Based TV show because it'd have to be much more condensed hehe.

I love writing. I did not expect it all to be this great... everyone has been so nice. It's be amazing.

Pyroka
21-05-2008, 10:52 PM
I don't think it should be a habbo tv show AT ALL! D:

It's scripts and the only way you could pull this off is in real life, not in Habbo. I love it.

Mrs.McCall
22-05-2008, 07:01 PM
Yeah, I don't think I would ever do it as a HxTV show as it translates better as a real-life TV show.

:)

Mrs.McCall
28-05-2008, 01:57 PM
Missing your daily dose of drama.

Read my latest article series "The Real Me" where you can read about my own, personal real life dramas.

Click for The Real Me... "Sex and The Sit-In" (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/4002/101/)

Mrs.McCall
02-06-2008, 05:51 PM
Teenage Lives is now complete...

A massive 21 episodes will completely dominate your summer AND winter because this time things will be different. I will now post one episode a week meaning that Teenage Lives Series 4 will span across an amazing 5 months and one week! The show will then return for a Christmas and New Year special and possibly a 5th series.

The first episode will be posted this Thursday June 5th! So not only will Big Brother launch, so will Teenage Lives.

The first episode is action packed and sees a whole new side to Danny but, with lives at risk, will Danny be a main character for long?

As an aside, I would like to thank everyone for staying so patient and loyal. The past 3 series of Teenage Lives have been an amazing experience and I couldn't think of anywhere better to post them than on here.

:)

Pyroka
02-06-2008, 07:53 PM
UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I JUST WET MYSELF.

Mrs.McCall
02-06-2008, 08:34 PM
Haha thought you might be pleased :)

Pyroka
02-06-2008, 08:59 PM
youve made me so pleased i think ive wet myself, no jks.

I love you :D:D::DD

Mrs.McCall
02-06-2008, 09:29 PM
Haha.

With BB aswell will be a very exciting day for me :D

Pyroka
05-06-2008, 11:08 AM
ARTICLE, NOW.

Mrs.McCall
05-06-2008, 02:25 PM
It's baaaaack.

Series 4, Episode 1.
(http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/4048/101/)
Enjoy :D

Pyroka
05-06-2008, 03:00 PM
SAY WHAT. SAY WHAT, SAY FREAKIN WHAT.

Mrs.McCall
05-06-2008, 03:15 PM
Haha.

You find out what Danny has been up to in the past year throughout the series.

Pyroka
05-06-2008, 03:25 PM
Yeah, I'd love to know where HE CHANGED SEXUALITY?

Mrs.McCall
05-06-2008, 03:34 PM
Haha yeah. Big changes.

Lots of drama ;)

Monkwrestler
07-06-2008, 01:31 PM
Sweet that was so kool and sorta *** at the end =/

Mrs.McCall
07-06-2008, 01:49 PM
Thanks :)

risque
07-06-2008, 10:09 PM
I watched every episode before commenting. Why does somebody have to die, nearly every other episode? It's not very realistic.

Mrs.McCall
07-06-2008, 10:11 PM
LMAO.

I try to make it as realistic as possible.

There are very little deaths in Series 4 :)

risque
07-06-2008, 10:24 PM
I respect you for trying but gosh. Thrown in front of a train, shot in the head, huge explosions, knifing someone, shot at a wedding. It's scary.

Mrs.McCall
08-06-2008, 12:34 AM
They are mainly season finales or at least the build up.

Death happens in real life but I like to make it fabulous!

Pyroka
08-06-2008, 08:16 AM
I respect you for trying but gosh. Thrown in front of a train, shot in the head, huge explosions, knifing someone, shot at a wedding. It's scary.

I thought it was inventive! Plus, if Danny lives in North London then I think a few deaths would be appropriate!

risque
08-06-2008, 03:44 PM
Yeah, it's good and all but it becomes predictable. It always happens. Once something good starts happening, you know it's going to go onto a big downer. Doesn't leave much left to the imagination.

Mrs.McCall
08-06-2008, 08:41 PM
This newer series will offer more twists and turns for you :)

Pyroka
10-06-2008, 09:18 AM
NEW POST YET PLZ?

Mrs.McCall
10-06-2008, 09:20 AM
It's weekly now babe.

Thursday is when the next one is posted.

Pyroka
10-06-2008, 09:29 AM
I know its weekly, just I want a new one nowwww :P

Mrs.McCall
10-06-2008, 04:21 PM
Hahaha.

Aww.

The next episode is a weepy one and you find a bit more about Danny's change in preference... does Danny have ulterior motives? ;)

Mrs.McCall
12-06-2008, 04:13 PM
Hey, I'll post tomorrow because my browser won't let me access Habbox and it's loading reaaal slow.

Sorry.

Pyroka
12-06-2008, 04:29 PM
EVIL. Get a new browser LOL.

Mrs.McCall
12-06-2008, 04:38 PM
Aww.

I've had a bad day so I am not in the mood to post anyway...

Mrs.McCall
12-06-2008, 06:01 PM
I changed my mind.

Here is Episode Two! (http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/4075/101/)

-Eyeless-
12-06-2008, 06:06 PM
YAYS! lol How have you been babes?

Mrs.McCall
12-06-2008, 07:07 PM
I've been better.

Some bad real life stuff... not going to discuss it on here but yeah, hope you all like the episode.

-Eyeless-
12-06-2008, 07:14 PM
Ok hope you feel better soon Babes :)

Mrs.McCall
12-06-2008, 07:25 PM
Cheers.

Pyroka
12-06-2008, 08:08 PM
Oh my, this really is different. I'm loving it McCall, and I want more. I think that was fully worth the wait lol. Question: How long has Danny been in the states?

Mrs.McCall
12-06-2008, 08:23 PM
A year. I am glad you've noticed it's different. I wanted to make it more adult but keeping the "Teenage" vibe. It'll adopt the "teenage" part a bit more sooner when somebody's parents turn up and turn someone's life upside down...

Pyroka
12-06-2008, 08:24 PM
Yeah well you know whose parents it'll be, it'll be Serena's and they wont have been told about Ed & Serena breaking up and Danny will make the wrong impression and BOOM! He starts going on about killing the parents and moving to Mexico.

Great plot twist, I know.

Mrs.McCall
12-06-2008, 08:30 PM
You've got the parents right... but not the second part. I'll say this much, there will be TWO shocks for the parents but much more for Serena when her parents divulge some shock information to the wrong person...

Pyroka
12-06-2008, 08:40 PM
LOL THEYRE GONNA TELL ED SOMETHING ABOUT SERENA. LOL. Wait no, they'll tell Sarah because Sarah will try and come off as Serena's best mate to break up Serena and Danny because of the history they have.

How did I know, oh I'm aweeesomeeee.

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