Habbox's New Route

[Mrs.McCall]

I've decided to start posting articles that are aimed at non-Habbo playing 14+ teens.

My work is alot "older" now so I do warn anyone who reads it that there may been some explicit description or scenes which they may find offensive.

Take a look at my latest invention. "Teenage Lives"

A story about a group of former friends who are ripped apart when one of them sleeps with the other's boyfriend. The twist? He's a guy. Follow the trials and tribulations of the group.

You might say it's Habbox's version of Hollyoaks.

Enjoy and leave a comment.



TEENAGE LIVES: SEASON 1 - 4

Series One

Episode One (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3537-teenage-lives-the-scripts-episode-1)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3543-teenage-lives-the-scripts-episode-2)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3546-teenage-lives-the-scripts-episode-3)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3551-teenage-lives-the-scripts-episode-4)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3571-teenage-lives-the-scripts-episode-5)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3574-teenage-lives-the-scripts-episode-6)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3580-teenage-lives-the-scripts-episode-7)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3583-teenage-lives-the-scripts-episode-8)

Series (Joint Ep.) Finale: Episode Nine & Ten (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3592-teenage-lives-the-scripts-the-finale-episodes-9-and-10)

Seasonal Episode: The Christmas Special (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3594-teenage-lives-the-scripts-the-christmas-special)

Series Two

Episode One (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3606-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-2-episode-1)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3609-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-2-episode-2)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3615-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-2-episode-3)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3616-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-2-episode-4)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3641-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-2-episode-5)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3642-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-2-episode-6)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3653-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-2-episode-7)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3655-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-2-episode-8)

Series (Joint Ep.) Finale: Episode Nine & Ten (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3661-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-2-the-finale-episodes-9-a-10)

Series Three

Episode One, Part one (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3690-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-one-part-one)
Episode One, Part two (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3692-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-one-part-two)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3699-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-two)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3716-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-three)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3729-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-four)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3733-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-five)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3741-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-six)
Episode Seven (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3787-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-seven)
Episode Eight (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3796-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-eight)
Episode Nine (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3871-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-nine)
Episode Ten (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3894-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-ten)
Episode Eleven (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3915-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-eleven)
Episode Twelve (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3932-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-twelve)
Episode Thirteen (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3942-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-thirteen)
Episode Fourteen (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3963-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-fourteen)

Series Finale: Episode Fifthteen (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/3965-teenage-lives-the-scripts-series-3-episode-fifthteen)

Series Four

Episode One (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/4048-tl4-episode-one)
Episode Two (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/4075-tl4-episode-two)
Episode Three (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/4120-tl4-episode-three)
Episode Four (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/4129-tl4-episode-four)
Episode Five (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/4226-tl4-episode-five)
Episode Six (http://www.habbox.com/site/index.php/articles/articles/43/4382-tl4-episode-six)

Episode Seven (To be posted Thursday 31st July)
Episode Eight (To be posted Thursday 7th August)
Episode Nine (To be posted Thursday 14th August)
Episode Ten (To be posted Thursday 21st August)
Episode Eleven (To be posted Thursday 21st August)
Episode Twelve (To be posted Thursday 28th August)
Episode Thirteen (To be posted Thursday 4th September)
Episode Forteen (To be posted Thursday 11th September)
Episode Fifteen (To be posted Thursday 18th September)
Episode Sixteen (To be posted Thursday 25th September)
Episode Seventeen (To be posted Thursday 2nd October)
Episode Eighteen (To be posted Thursday 9th October)
Episode Nineteen (To be posted Thursday 16th October)
Episode Twenty (To be posted Thursday 23rd October)
Episode Twenty-One (To be posted Thursay 30th October)

Season Finale: Episode Twenty-Two
(To be posted Thursday 6th November)

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Thread stuck by jesus (Forum Super Moderator).
List of episodes added by request by Professor-Alex (Forum Super Moderator). Credit for list goes to Pyroka
Episodes updated by Slowpoke (Forum Moderator). Credit to Pyroka.

[Slowpoke]

That's fantastic! poor danny :(!

[Blue]

Poor little Danny, I actually can't wait for the next installment!

[Mrs.McCall]

Thank you :)

Next one posted tomorrow :D

[Blue]

Yay! :) <3

[Pyroka]

Jesus... that was touching. I mean it, I'm sort of lost for words. You should really be a script writer... but wow, just... yeah.

[Misawa]

Nice. You should format them properly for next time if you know how. +Rep.

[Muniflex]

Yeah it was good.

A bit like the story line from hollyoaks but oh well, will be good to see the next one:)

[Mrs.McCall]

Nice. You should format them properly for next time if you know how. +Rep.

I was going to do that, I have a formatted and extended copy of episode 1 but I decided (as it was 10 pages) not to post and just keep it minimal.

Thank you all for your feedback. The second episode is up now :D

[Misawa]

I was going to do that, I have a formatted and extended copy of episode 1 but I decided (as it was 10 pages) not to post and just keep it minimal.

Thank you all for your feedback. The second episode is up now :D

Ah. Please send if you can. :)

[Slowpoke]

Part two is just as good, Danny must be feeling awful! Well done Mrs.McCall :)! +rep

[Mrs.McCall]

Ah. Please send if you can. :)

It's on my external somewhere, i'll mooch around for it.. It better still be there.. took me ages :(

I could never find the right software.. i downloaded this thing from BBC that was like a macro for word. Now i have a mac I can't use it :(

[Pyroka]

OMG.

THE IMMENSITY OF THIS SERIES IS GETTING TOO MUCH. I WANT IT TO BE A PROGRAM, NOW. PLZ? WOWOWOOWOWOW.

[Mrs.McCall]

OMG.

THE IMMENSITY OF THIS SERIES IS GETTING TOO MUCH. I WANT IT TO BE A PROGRAM, NOW. PLZ? WOWOWOOWOWOW.

Haha, thank you.

Another one tomorrow :)

[Pyroka]

OOOO I really like these, so just get it out ASAP. :D:D:D

[Mrs.McCall]

Tell your friends ;)

[Pyroka]

I might just. :P You should make a blog yknow, for all this sort of stuff. You see webcomics and that, but this is something different. Webscripts would be interesting at most.

[Mrs.McCall]

Well, it isn't the usual article to have at Habbox but Professor-Alex told me to try it out :D

[GhostFace-]

poor danny.

[Pyroka]

Mhmm, it's different and it's really good. You are a great writer, and you're exploiting your creativity in ways which most people couldn't imagine. If you could make a website on this, that'd be awesome, seriously.

[Mrs.McCall]

Haha, i'll keep it exclusive to Habbox for now. I plan a 10 part series in total.

I'll move onto something else then and return for a second series :)

[Slowpoke]

Oh yeah. We were discussing this sort of thing in school as we have GCSE mocs next week and I told the class about this one and miss read it out to the class haha.

[Muniflex]

How i read second one? :O

It good, i have it :)


w0w it really not going good for him :l

More great writing, more +rep if it lets me..

[Pyroka]

Go onto the articles section of the Habbox webpage. tis there, and I want moar than just 10 ploz.

[FlyingJesus]

It's nicely written all that, so good from a literary point of view, but a little unrealistic for my liking. Cheaters usually get stick for a while, and the person they cheated with too, but I can't see a whole school turning on someone just for a night of passion :P

On a note more critical of the writing rather than realism of it, I think you've done well to do it in a script style - it gets the point of what's happening across bluntly and eliminates the usual prattle that most stories have and (unfortunately) that more still do badly.

[Grig]

That was great + rep :)

[Muniflex]

It's nicely written all that, so good from a literary point of view, but a little unrealistic for my liking. Cheaters usually get stick for a while, and the person they cheated with too, but I can't see a whole school turning on someone just for a night of passion :P

On a note more critical of the writing rather than realism of it, I think you've done well to do it in a script style - it gets the point of what's happening across bluntly and eliminates the usual prattle that most stories have and (unfortunately) that more still do badly.

Yeah but the thing is that plays and programmes are alowed to be unrealistic, it's makes it more fun...


EDIT: 1300 posts

[Pyroka]

TOo unrealistic make them rubbish tbh. Lost is a good example of that.

[Muniflex]

TOo unrealistic make them rubbish tbh. Lost is a good example of that.

I don't watxh Lost.

And obviosuly if you have an unrealistic story line just make sure the whole programme is unrealistic and is obviously meant to be...

[Pyroka]

Lost was just silly, it was good at the start and then they wrecked it by making it too unrealistic. These sorts of real-life situations are really good though, and I guess you learn how to deal with them in a sense. Mrs.McCall is guidance yesyes?

[Mrs.McCall]

Oh yeah. We were discussing this sort of thing in school as we have GCSE mocs next week and I told the class about this one and miss read it out to the class haha.

Wow! Really? What did they say?


How i read second one? :O

It good, i have it :)


w0w it really not going good for him :l

More great writing, more +rep if it lets me..

Thank you :)


It's nicely written all that, so good from a literary point of view, but a little unrealistic for my liking. Cheaters usually get stick for a while, and the person they cheated with too, but I can't see a whole school turning on someone just for a night of passion :P

On a note more critical of the writing rather than realism of it, I think you've done well to do it in a script style - it gets the point of what's happening across bluntly and eliminates the usual prattle that most stories have and (unfortunately) that more still do badly.

I think it is quite unrealistic in parts but that's the magic of it I guess. As for cheating, Stacy was very popular and people are scared of her so they're mean to him because she makes them


That was great + rep :)

Thanks


Yeah but the thing is that plays and programmes are alowed to be unrealistic, it's makes it more fun...


EDIT: 1300 posts

Congrats on the posts!

New One Up Now!

[Pyroka]

omg poor danny. :'( i could see it coming to that... gah.. i wanna see what stacey thinks of this now, i bet she'll give him loads of crap because she's such a *****.

[Mrs.McCall]

omg poor danny. :'( i could see it coming to that... gah.. i wanna see what stacey thinks of this now, i bet she'll give him loads of crap because she's such a *****.

Haha, you'll have to wait and see.

New one tomorrow.. last one until Monday!

[Misawa]

Lost was just silly, it was good at the start and then they wrecked it by making it too unrealistic. These sorts of real-life situations are really good though, and I guess you learn how to deal with them in a sense. Mrs.McCall is guidance yesyes?

Lost is an example of the unrealistic gone way too far. That show is beyond rediculous. They don't need to write a good show, because the screenwriter's can throw any old crock in the script.

[luce]

Yeah i wont be reading it but go for it personallt i would like habbo more :P

[Pyroka]

Grahhh, I want the new edition. :(

McCall, you should really do a WebScript on this, like CADCOMIC has going. It'd be a mint idea... I don't think its ever been done either, but the story is just so enticing. Lost is just silly. They've LOST the plot! LOLOLOLOOOOLOL.

[Muniflex]

w0w i thought that was great!
I'm really getting into them.

Is there are main reason why they are short? Because i think they should be longer.

[Pyroka]

Nah the way they're short is good. leaves you on the edge of your seat. ;D

[Mrs.McCall]

They're short because I originally intended for them to be sent to the people who film things like Kate Modern (as a web short maybe). So I didn't want them too long, also, long scripts run the risk of lacking in quality so I chose quality over quantity!

New One Up Now! http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3551/102/

[Pyroka]

Wait a minute, I'm confused here.


Rick’s Mother: I’d just lost my son

Wasn't it Rick who almost died? Or did die? I thought Rick died in Ep.3 and Danny tried to top himself because of it... Is Rick related to Nate, as brothers? Because I thought it was both Rick & Danny who were caught in bed with eachother? It got me a little confused thats all. Is Nate the one who got caught in bed with Danny, yet was cheating with Stacey who 'didnt provide' what Nate wanted?

I think Stacey's the next one to go off the rails you know, with time she'll realise that she was the one to blame, and I think she could well do something to either herself, or she'll take it to the point of where she takes someone else... Eek. Rick & Danny are gonna be mates through this it seems. As for the twist at the end, which TOTALLY came unexpectedly, is Nate the same Nate who cheated on Stacey & bedded danny? Because I thought Nate died, not moved away...

AGH ALL THE QUESTIONS.

[Mrs.McCall]

You'll learn more in later episodes but basically Nate ran away after the whole school found out about his and Danny's affair. For someone like Nate who, along with Stacy, was part of the most popular couple, it became hard to deal with.

Nate didn't tell anyone so, instead of making it obvious he ran away, I thought i'd put a sting in the tail by making it seem he had died. When Rick's Mother (Also Nate's Mother) says "I've lost my son" she means he's actually lost!

Nate + Danny had the affair.
Rick = Nate's brother who was very close to him and blamed Danny for Nate running away.

Rick's suicide was part of delusions that Danny was having down to the guilt he felt. He had dreams which made him think Rick was actually dead and that lead Danny to his own suicide attempt.. for real.

[-Xiangu-]

The articles you have written this past week are really well written and the whole plot is gripping and tense. Well Done!

Artemidorus

[Mrs.McCall]

Thank you.

I am currently working on another script based on my "Socialite" stories... it'll be similar to the American TV show Dirt.

[-Xiangu-]

Marvelous, I look forward to reading it!

[Blue]

Still amazing as ever, I really want this to go on :)

[Mrs.McCall]

Still amazing as ever, I really want this to go on :)

Thank you.

I'll run the series now as follows

Monday - Episode 5
Tuesday - Episode 6
Wednesday - Episode 7
Thursday - Episode 8
Friday - Episodes 9 & 10 (Double Finale)

The following Monday, i'll post the "Christmas Special" I wrote. There will then be a short break before I release the Second Series.

:)

[Muniflex]

Another great piece of writing, and yea nice twist;)


Just 1 thing, Christmas Special? That time already?:P

[Blue]

Thank you.

I'll run the series now as follows

Monday - Episode 5
Tuesday - Episode 6
Wednesday - Episode 7
Thursday - Episode 8
Friday - Episodes 9 & 10 (Double Finale)

The following Monday, i'll post the "Christmas Special" I wrote. There will then be a short break before I release the Second Series.

:)

LOL! christmas special! A bit late, but I'm sure it'll be great <3

[Pyroka]

You'll learn more in later episodes but basically Nate ran away after the whole school found out about his and Danny's affair. For someone like Nate who, along with Stacy, was part of the most popular couple, it became hard to deal with.

Nate didn't tell anyone so, instead of making it obvious he ran away, I thought i'd put a sting in the tail by making it seem he had died. When Rick's Mother (Also Nate's Mother) says "I've lost my son" she means he's actually lost!

Nate + Danny had the affair.
Rick = Nate's brother who was very close to him and blamed Danny for Nate running away.

Rick's suicide was part of delusions that Danny was having down to the guilt he felt. He had dreams which made him think Rick was actually dead and that lead Danny to his own suicide attempt.. for real.

Thanks for the explanations! :P Yeah, that makes sense really... Ooo it's really tense, and I don't know why Nate would do such a thing in the first place? Maybe he didnt want to admit he was gay, and instead it just 'happened'? Unless he's bisexual, which would make much more sense but still, the pressure on him is immense if he's they're the 'popular couple' within the school. Bloody hell, I didn't know Rick's suicide was a illusion... Daaaaamn.

That's really sad for Danny, all this just because he slept with a guy. >_> It's weird how there's such a chain reaction in things like these. Stacey is so out of order though, she really needs a slap. I would love Nate to do that. :P


Thank you.

I'll run the series now as follows

Monday - Episode 5
Tuesday - Episode 6
Wednesday - Episode 7
Thursday - Episode 8
Friday - Episodes 9 & 10 (Double Finale)

The following Monday, i'll post the "Christmas Special" I wrote. There will then be a short break before I release the Second Series.

:)

EEEEEEEEEEE NOT FRIDAY, DREADING FRIDAY </3

I don't want these to endddd.

[Mrs.McCall]

Just 1 thing, Christmas Special? That time already?:P


LOL! christmas special! A bit late, but I'm sure it'll be great <3

Lmao, don't forget I wrote these in like November/December time!





EEEEEEEEEEE NOT FRIDAY, DREADING FRIDAY </3

I don't want these to endddd.

After a short break it'll return, don't worry :)

[Pyroka]

Is the Monday edition up later on? :P

[Mrs.McCall]

Episode 5 - UP NOW :D

[shizzle]

Lol cool, haven't seen it yet.

[Mrs.McCall]

Lol cool, haven't seen it yet.

Then take a look! :D

[Pyroka]

OMG Was Stacey seriously going to stab Danny? :o Jesus christ, she's got serious issues with herself... Well, now Nate is in the equation, this should get interesting. I'm gutted there's only 10-11 episodes to this, it's just getting REALLY interesting. xD

Well done McCall, you're a legend. <3

EDIT: I'm looking forward to a conversation with Rick & Nate. Their father won't be too expressed either... God, it feels so much like it's just Danny & Nate in this equation, but you look at the bigger picture and it's all of them! Who is this Michaela girl by the way, and is she going to get further involved within the plotline?

I'm so interested by whats going on, it's so cool. :P

[cunning]

Those are good, I liked it.

[Mrs.McCall]

Michaela is part of the group... a lesser part... she's Stacy's right hand girl!

Part 6 out now!

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3574/102/

[The Professor]

I have to give a huge thumbs up to Joey for publicity and writing, seems you have quite a following!

[Mrs.McCall]

Thanks Alex!

If it wasn't for you telling me to give it a go, I wouldn't of posted them so THANKS TO YOU! :D

[Pyroka]

AAAGH I hate stacey now. Seriously, that was one epic one. I think Stacey's got some issues and just doesn't want to be the one alone, because she wants Nate all to herself so she can twist him into something she likes. It's seriously... Gah. What she did was so evil though, and I can only see her sleeping with someone to make it look like she's pregnant with Nate's baby.

It's so cute with Danny & Nate though, it reminds me of something I once knew... I love you McCall, I really do.

[Mrs.McCall]

Yeah, it is twisted haha. Luckily, these are based on real life stories!

New one is up now!

ENJOY :D

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3580/102/

[Pyroka]

Oh jesus christ, thats tense. "Me or the baby", how could Danny do something like that to Nate? Why can't they just handle it together, rather than going against eachother?! Gahh, I really hope they find out what Stacy is actually doing here. I'm not sure if the Men were actual muggers or not, or if they were just part of Stacy's sadistic plan to ruin Nate & Danny's relationship.

I can't blame Danny for being so dramatic, since he's so happy and just wants to shout it out to the world. Nate obviously reacted wrongly, but cuz it's on his mind so much about the baby. I think they'll get through it, but I really don't know if Stacy is pregnant or not. Why would she just suddenly bring that up, and say it's Nates out of nowhere? I bet it's someone elses baby tbh (if there is a baby). Whose Alexis by the way?

I doubt he stills loves Stacy, but I think because of the baby, he feels like he's betraying the baby and would rather be with the baby... Ooo jesus. Real life stories btw? Jesus christ, I feel sorry for the person who had this.

Yet again McCall, bloody amazing.

[benjamin]

i wanna read the next one!!
why is the boy danny bashed not getting any bashing from the school gyals?

[Mrs.McCall]

Alexis is Danny's best friend (she has been in a couple of episodes)... she's the calming influence.

I meant to say that these AREN'T based on real life stories!

As for the issue of 'is Stacy pregnant' well... you'll have to wait and see ;)

:8

[Mrs.McCall]

i wanna read the next one!!
why is the boy danny bashed not getting any bashing from the school gyals?

You mean why isn't Nate being bullied?

Before Nate left, he was the "top dog" of the school along with Stacy so people are still scared of him!

[Pyroka]

i wanna read the next one!!
why is the boy danny bashed not getting any bashing from the school gyals?

Which boy danny bashed? Nate? OHHH you mean *******, yeah I think it's cuz he's so popular in the school and he used to go out with Stacy, as the 'popular couple' so no-one has the nerve to...

LOL sorry McCall, sametime reply xD God, I'm so involved in this storyline though, it's rly good.

[Mrs.McCall]

Also, I wouldn't feel too sorry for Danny either..

He saw Stacy being attacked and did nothing and he's also taunting her.

So you have to wonder who the real bad guy is!

[Pyroka]

Danny gives as good as he gets?

Did Stacey get attacked by actual strangers, or was it arranged to fuel a evil plan? I think she honestly had the demented mind to do something like that. As for him taunting her, she given it him for months on end, so you sort of give a little back. I would...

[Mrs.McCall]

Danny gives as good as he gets?

Did Stacey get attacked by actual strangers, or was it arranged to fuel a evil plan? I think she honestly had the demented mind to do something like that. As for him taunting her, she given it him for months on end, so you sort of give a little back. I would...

The attack was not planned but is she really pregnant?

Don't forget Danny, Stacy, Nate, Alexis and Michaela were all extremely close friends and then Danny broke it all up. Stacy is hurting. But yeah, she is evil and trust me, it gets worse!

[benjamin]

just read em all

STACY ENT PREGNANT IT'S OBV.

[Mrs.McCall]

just read em all

STACY ENT PREGNANT IT'S OBV.

All will be revealed in the next episode!

;)

[benjamin]

make it now plz

[Pyroka]

The attack was not planned but is she really pregnant?

Don't forget Danny, Stacy, Nate, Alexis and Michaela were all extremely close friends and then Danny broke it all up. Stacy is hurting. But yeah, she is evil and trust me, it gets worse!

I seriously think she'll go to the point that she'll TRY to get pregnant, not with Nate but with somebody else, just to make it look like Stacy is pregnant with Nate's baby. I can seriously see her doing that... Stacy is hurting but it doesn't give her the right to do all this. I wouldn't say Danny broke it up really, I'd say Nate & Danny broke it up but Nate left Danny to pick up the pieces.


just read em all

STACY ENT PREGNANT IT'S OBV.

Idk rly... I want the next episode, tbh.

[Mrs.McCall]

make it now plz

The remaining episodes have already been written but I am keeping to my posting schedule!

Sorry hehe. :P

[Pyroka]

EVIL MAN, EVIL. Can't you just give us a little teaser as to whats going to be featured tommorow? :P

[benjamin]

oh well that sucks

[Mrs.McCall]

EVIL MAN, EVIL. Can't you just give us a little teaser as to whats going to be featured tommorow? :P


oh well that sucks

Here's a little something to keep you going!

Somebody's life hangs in the balance... but was it accidental or deliberate? ;)

[Pyroka]

NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRRRRRRRRRRRRRWWQQEQWEHWEHHWRHWEHRHWEHRHWEHRHWETHE RHTHH

I WISH I NEVER ASKED.

[benjamin]

omg, scandal :O

[Mrs.McCall]

Hahaha.

Check back tomorrow for the episode.

Please let your mates know (obviously not real life ones.. well you can if you want but i meant more on your Habbo console!)

:)

[Pyroka]

How about if we wait till midnight, and then it suddenly appears? SOUNDS GOOD YEYE?

[Mrs.McCall]

Haha, it'd be a good plan but I like to get my beauty sleep!

We'll see how tired I am come midnight and if I am awake, i'll post!

HOWEVER, if I post the next one you'll want the next one after that because the next ep is a big cliffhanger too!

But if I post at Midnight, you'll have to wait an entire 24 HOURS for the next installment which is even longer!

Your choice!

[Pyroka]

AGH, that's evil... but a good idea... but evil.. but... *scream* im not sure, since if you do that i'm going to be thinking all day "OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG".

eeeeeeeeee... god.

[benjamin]

post at midnight yez

[Mrs.McCall]

-evil laugh-

HAHAHA.

hehe. I am soo pleased you like it though!

[Pyroka]

It's got a great storyline! I seriously think Habbox should be promoting this alot more. It's the first article I've ever been PROPERLY involved with, when it comes to the Articles Department. I'd sure as hell support you, and with all this stuff about teenage YOUR STORIES, it'd go pretty well. <3

[Mrs.McCall]

Well, I always felt that many of the articles appeal to a more younger audience so I thought i'd bring a little bit of maturity to the department.

I'm just really pleased at its reception.. and suprised. It's made my week!

[Pyroka]

Yeah, they do... There's so many people who will like this, but they can't see it since it's not publicised enough. Get someone to post an announcement on it! :(

[Mrs.McCall]

Haha, unfortuantly Professor-Alex isn't allowed to post forum announcements on a particular article.

Maybe it'll make the next "Habbox Today" announcement?

[Pyroka]

What Habbox Today announcement? Are they posted on the forum? If so, yay. This series of articles is probably the best thing I've ever heard from the articles department, so I dont see why they cant. :(

So, midnight yeah?

[Mrs.McCall]

What Habbox Today announcement? Are they posted on the forum? If so, yay. This series of articles is probably the best thing I've ever heard from the articles department, so I dont see why they cant. :(

So, midnight yeah?

We'll see. Depends if i'm up haha :)

[Pyroka]

Rargh, well... You'd best be. I'll probably be up anyway.

[Mrs.McCall]

I'm not in college tomorrow so I might stay up.

No promises though :)

I can't wait to post the ending! It's my favourite episode(s). They're two eps merged into one so its a bumper edition :D

[Pyroka]

Oooo you do tease Mrs.McCall, you do tease. xD I bet the ending will have Arnold Schwartzneggar turning up and saying "COME WITH ME IF YOU WANT TO LIVE" or something...

[Mrs.McCall]

Oooo you do tease Mrs.McCall, you do tease. xD I bet the ending will have Arnold Schwartzneggar turning up and saying "COME WITH ME IF YOU WANT TO LIVE" or something...

OMG.

WHY SPOIL IT :(

:(:(:(

Haha, I joke. It's certainly explosive though... very fun to write.. i kept picturing it on TV!

[Immenseman]

I've been reading these since the start and I do actually love them. Very well written, I take my hat off to you Joey.

[Pyroka]

He also takes his trousers off!

I couldnt help that lol.

[Mrs.McCall]

I've been reading these since the start and I do actually love them. Very well written, I take my hat off to you Joey.

Thank you Jake :) It means alot!


He also takes his trousers off!

I couldnt help that lol.

LMAO! Too true.

So. What are people's favourite moments / characters / lines?

[Pyroka]

My favourite moment: Probs when Danny & nate get all lovey dubby, and then when stacy says she's pregnant. made me do a wee.
My favourite characters: Definetly would be Danny & Nate, because they're just so cute and ideal together. =P
My favourite line:

Danny: Hmm, guess this is the life of a Social Pariah.. (LOL)
Stacy: Hello? Nate? I just thought you’d like to know something… I’m pregnant. (evil)

[Mrs.McCall]

My favourite moment: I dunno really, it's all pretty good. xD
My favourite characters: Definetly would be Danny & Nate, because they're just so cute and ideal together. =P
My favourite line: I'll find one which makes me lol. I can honestly not remember every little bit of it.

Yeah Danny & Nate are sweet.

I don't expect you to remember every line! Haha, don't worry! Even I don't and I wrote it!

[Pyroka]

Updated that post... Is there gonna be a guest starring from Tony blair!?

[Mrs.McCall]

I tried to see if he'd give permission and he said no :(

[Pyroka]

Aww, thats a shame. What about Gordy Lordy Brown?

[Mrs.McCall]

Said no too :'(

Oh well, will make do with the characters i've got.

I've started writing series 2 :)

[Pyroka]

ORLY? I want series 2 now. LOL. How many series do you plan on doing?

[Mrs.McCall]

ORLY? I want series 2 now. LOL. How many series do you plan on doing?

Depends... as many as I want or as many that keeps it interesting!

[Pyroka]

Ooo, good answer! :P If you ever run out of ideas, I really suggest you make a series which is actually filmed! :P

[e5]

Very nice there mrs.! The characters all sounded very posh though but I understand you had to use pefect grammar in it :P - Very nice though. I'd like to see a second chapter to this :D

[Mrs.McCall]

Very nice there mrs.! The characters all sounded very posh though but I understand you had to use pefect grammar in it :P - Very nice though. I'd like to see a second chapter to this :D

I've tried to use some colloquialisms but as you said I have had to use perfect grammar haha.

Best thing to do is imagine more rougher people in your head xD

[Pyroka]

I stayed up last night for no article. :'(

[Mrs.McCall]

I stayed up last night for no article. :'(

Sorry! I did say no promises!

Anyway, if its any conciliation...

Episode 8 is up now!

[Pyroka]

Just watched. *sex wee* i'll comment later.

[Mrs.McCall]

Just watched. *sex wee* i'll comment later.

Haha! Ok.

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3583/102/

For anybody who can't be bothered finding it on Habbox.com XD

[Pyroka]

I seen you online so I ran to check, and god... It was amazing. I didn't expect that to twist so much. I dont think Michaela should've told Danny yet, but I guess it's teenagers for you: Can never keep their mouths shut. :P

I shown it to a mate of my in College, he really liked them.

[Immenseman]

I love these so much Joey, they're so well written and quite gripping however sad that is.

[benjamin]

OMG SHE PUSHED HIM.

[Pyroka]

dya seriosuly think she pushed him? idk...

[Mrs.McCall]

OMG SHE PUSHED HIM.


I love these so much Joey, they're so well written and quite gripping however sad that is.


dya seriosuly think she pushed him? idk...

Thanks guys.

As for the question of if she pushed him or not well you'll have to make your own minds up for now ;)

Finale tomorrow... it's going to be explosive so BE WARNED!

[Pyroka]

AGH not the finale tommorow :'(

[Mrs.McCall]

Aww.

There will be a 2 week break maximum!

:)

[benjamin]

finale? it's episode 8!!
tomorrow is 9, then 10.

[Mrs.McCall]

finale? it's episode 8!!
tomorrow is 9, then 10.

I merged 9 & 10 to create a bumper episode. :P

[Mrs.McCall]

A little spoiler for the finale.

Death strikes but who dies is isn't evident... it'll be revealed in the "christmas special"!!

Also, who wants to read the pilot for my new series which is currently untitled.

[Pyroka]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHH.

See, thats got me thinking now that Danny isn't going to die. *Frown* God knows who'll die now I come to think about it. God, wouldn't it be a turn if Rick & Nate's dad had a heart failure because of all his alcohol & everything? Ack!

I wanna reeeead. :P

[Mrs.McCall]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHH.

See, thats got me thinking now that Danny isn't going to die. *Frown* God knows who'll die now I come to think about it. God, wouldn't it be a turn if Rick & Nate's dad had a heart failure because of all his alcohol & everything? Ack!

I wanna reeeead. :P

Danny might die yet ;) The person or persons who die are part of the main cast.

Will post the pilot as soon as Professor-Alex has checked it. It's a bit 'adult'.

[Pyroka]

AGH, dont do this to me... D: I dunno whose gonna die now.. im thinking michaela, then Nate, then Stacey.. idk about Alexis, she aint really been involved much but.. ugh, it's like... AGHHGHGGHHGHGH.L LOL.;l

[Mrs.McCall]

You'll have to wait and see. I may be biased but I think its a great 2 episodes!

Haha.

Series 2 looks set to be fun!

[Pyroka]

MMMMMMMMMMM I want them, now. Why don't you post the 9th episode on the strike of midnight, and then at 12PM tommorow you can post the next? :D

[Mrs.McCall]

Haha. I need my sleep!

You'll get the episodes tomorrow ;)

[Pyroka]

Aww.. I waited for Episode 8 last night! *frown* I'll be waiting for you to post them, I hope you know that. :P

[Mrs.McCall]

Good!
:D

[Pyroka]

I will actually monitor when you're next on you know. I seriously think you should make this into a actual filmed series of shorts though. It'd be great.

[Mrs.McCall]

I'm re-doing the first episode as a proper script and sending it to the BBC.

[Pyroka]

You serious? Owow, that'd be immense. I'd write up some background to it first, because I know the first script wasn't at all explanatory. Course, it wasn't meant to but you should explain the story fully. :P

[Mrs.McCall]

Yeah you have to do that anyway.

[Pyroka]

Ohh.. EEE that'd be immense. I know BBC are lacking for something like that too, something to compete with Hollyoaks & Skins yeye? Well, then again so are ITV but they have Reaper I guess. Would you actually entitle it "Teenage Lives", or are you going to change the name?

[Mrs.McCall]

Same name but there will be more storylines than the nate-danny-stacy triangle.

[Pyroka]

Same name but there will be more storylines than the nate-danny-stacy triangle.

WOW. Y'know, if the BBC considered it so much that they offered something for it, would you? I'm not sure if I'd publish it somewhere or not... wowowow.

[Misawa]

Same name but there will be more storylines than the nate-danny-stacy triangle.

BBC will throw it away without reading! Sorry, screenwriting isn't that easy to get into! I wish it were!

[benjamin]

if danny died then there isn't really much to go on for a second series

[Pyroka]

well then again... who said the second series would be about danny-nate-stacey? I think McCall has other storylines, from what I've heard.

[Slowpoke]

Just caught up and I'm loving it - well done :D!

[Pyroka]

Want moar artikuls...

[Mrs.McCall]

The FINALE is up now.

ENJOY!

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3592/102/

@ Misawa - the BBC do a project for untrained writers with unsolicited material. It's on their website somewhere.

[benjamin]

oh
ma
god

get the next series up now plz

[Mrs.McCall]

oh
ma
god

get the next series up now plz

Haha. I'll search out that Xmas episode for tomorrow.

You'll find out who dies and who survives there!

[Misawa]

The FINALE is up now.

ENJOY!

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3592/102/

@ Misawa - the BBC do a project for untrained writers with unsolicited material. It's on their website somewhere.

Oh right.

How long is your show meant to be, 45 minutes? (60 minutes TV).

[Pyroka]

I'ma gonna read it now.

OH.

EM

GEE.

I KNEW MICHAELA WOULD COME INTO THIS, BUT BLOODY HELL, I DIDNT EXPECT STACEY TO GO THAT MENTAL! SUPERB MCCAL,, FREAKIN SUPERBRBRBRBBRBR. I WNANTOR MOARRRRRR.

[Mrs.McCall]

Oh right.

How long is your show meant to be, 45 minutes? (60 minutes TV).

The guideline basically is that if it isn't 10 pages or more, they won't read it. I can't find the page for it atm but i'll mooch around!


I'ma gonna read it now.

OH.

EM

GEE.

I KNEW MICHAELA WOULD COME INTO THIS, BUT BLOODY HELL, I DIDNT EXPECT STACEY TO GO THAT MENTAL! SUPERB MCCAL,, FREAKIN SUPERBRBRBRBBRBR. I WNANTOR MOARRRRRR.

Thanks!

OK The Christmas Special and last episode for a while is now up. Enjoy :) Thank you to everyone for all your support with Teenage Lives, it truly has been an amazing success for myself and, hopefully, Habbox!

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3594/102/

[Slowpoke]

the christmas one made my chest hurt...

[Mrs.McCall]

the christmas one made my chest hurt...

:O

I don't know if you mean that it was so rubbish you had a heart attack or it was so sad it broke your heart!

[Mrs.McCall]

Also, this probably won't be my new project anymore but hey, here is the pilot episode anyway :)

We open in a big office. It’s decorated with fine silk curtains and sat in a huge leather chair underneath a huge TV is Jessica Miller, there are photographs on the desk and a young girl with platinum blonde hair is sat opposite her. She is dressed from head to toe in pink ]

Jessica: So, do I make myself understood?

Brooklyn Ritz: And what if I don’t do what you say? I’m Brooklyn Ritz... Heiress and hottie!

Jessica: I publish the photos we have, you know, the ones where you have your tongue down the throat of someone who isn’t your fiancee

Brooklyn Ritz: That’s blackmail!

Jessica: Oh it is? Darn... you’re right, i’ll drop it

Brooklyn Ritz: Really?!

Jessica: No! Now you either tell me everything you have on Danni Wernham or i’ll publish those photos quicker than you can say “sponsorship drop out”

Brooklyn Ritz: Fine, i’ll give you what you want...

Jessica: See, it’s that loyalty that makes this city great. I’ll hook you up with a reporter and a photographer and if I find out you’ve been making stuff up, i’ll release the sex tapes too

[ Brooklyn screeches ]

Brooklyn Ritz: You’re such a, like, meanie

Jessica: I know but life’s a b**ch and so are you. Goodbye, Brooklyn

[ Brooklyn stares at her ]

Jessica: LEAVE!

[ Brooklyn runs off screaming and Jessica sits back smiling as a man walks in ]

Jessica: John, hi, how did it go?

John: I got the photographs

Jessica: Anyone else follow you?

John: No

Jessica: Good job. How are you doing?

John: Ok thank you

Jessica: You taking your medicine?

John: Yes... i’ve not had an episode today

Jessica: Good. Now get those pictures down to art, looks like we’ve got our cover

[ Jessica grabs one of the pictures and walks out of her office into an even bigger one. It is full of computers with around 30 people sat at them ]

Jessica: Ok everyone, we have our cover

[ Jessica throws the photograph on a projector. The image is a young girl with a needle in her arm. Her head is shaven and she is crying. The entire room gasps ]

Jessica: Oh please. It’s Whitney Blears... it was obvious she was going to go off the rails fast

Worker: She’s 15
Jessica: What is your name again

Worker: I told you, Peter

Jessica: Do you have kids, Peter?

Peter: Yes

Jessica: Do they like eating?

Peter: Yes..

Jessica: Well if you don’t shut the hell up they won’t be because I’ll fire your a*s! Now does anyone else have a problem?

[ The room is silent ]

Jessica: Good. I want background... her parents, what are they like? Any convictions? I was info on any siblings. I want photographers following around her agents, parents, brothers, sisters, cousins, cleaners. Anyone with any connection to her! McClusky; talk to her maid see what you can get. Davies: there’s rumours going around about a sex tape. Find out who it was with and how it was leaked. Anderson

Claire Anderson: Yes?

Jessica: Try and get a one to one interview with the girl herself. I want real dirt, an exclusive. I do not want anyone cracking on to what we’re doing. If this story gets out, we lose the exclusive. Understood?

[ There is a quiet murmur ]

Jessica: Good

[ A man strides in ]

Jessica: Clive! Nice to see you, a pleasure etc etc

Clive: Jessica! I thought vampires weren’t able to survive in daylight

Jessica: Can I help you or are you just here to be a pain in the ass?

Clive: Help me?! That’d be the day. Your cover is a 15 year old pop starlet injecting heroin

Jessica: Great isn’t it?

Clive: No, it isn’t. We’ll be hated

Jessica: We’ll sell out

Clive: I’m not comfortable...

Jessica: Then maybe you should stop wearing panties

[ Jessica walks away into her office, Clive follows ]

Clive: Did you run this by legal?

Jessica: Yes, they OK’d it. She won’t sue!

Clive: Her entourage might consider you’re practically stalking them

Jessica: They won’t be too upset with the thousands of dollars we’re giving them

Clive: Thousands of dollars?! This magazine isn’t made of money

Jessica: We’ll be fine. This issue is going to be our biggest yet

Clive: You said that about the last issue!

Jessica: That issue bombed because some jacka*s leaked the story

Clive: By the way, that jacka*s has sued us for unfair dismissal

Jessica: Here

[ Jessica throws him a tape ]

Clive: What’s this?

Jessica: It’s the winning factor in the case. Show Jameson’s lawyer’s this tape and they’ll drop the suit. Now is that all?

Clive: Rupert is worried

Jessica: Tell Rupert that if this issue doesn’t sell, he can take away my damn bonus! It’s time that some people at this magazine took a chance

Clive: I’m not too sure

Jessica: Oh for gods sake, grow a pair and get the hell out of my office, I have work to do

Clive: You’re going to be a very lonely woman

Jessica: Well some of us don’t rely on banging an intern to get us through the day... how is Helena these days?

Clive: We broke up

Jessica: Shocking (!) 4 weeks this time though, it’s a record

Clive: Bite me!

Jessica: I might catch something

[ Clive exits. Jessica sits back and sighs. She opens her drawer and takes out a pill bottle, she takes a couple and rubs her head. Her secretary answers ]

Mike: Whitney Blears on the phone

Jessica: Take a message, I am not in the mood for PR bullcrap

Mike: No, Whitney Blears is on the phone... THE Whitney Blears...

Jessica: OK. You can leave now

[ He leaves, Jessica picks it up ]

Jessica: Whitney, hi

Whitney: Is that Jessica Miller?

Jessica: Yes it is

Whitney: I want to speak to you

Jessica: Is that not what you’re doing now?

Whitney: Face to face, like an interview

Jessica: Come to the office

Whitney: When?

Jessica: No time like the present!

[ Jessica hangs up, Mike re-enters ]

Mike: Tracy McDowell on the phone

Jessica: Tracy, this better be good

Tracy: Oh it is! Brooklyn Ritz just told me that Danni Wernham has been spending alot of time with Whitney Blears and, well, it turns out that the photo on the cover was at Danni’s penthouse!

Jessica: The has been and the new age superstar... I love it. Ok, well, get some pictures and try and get more out of Brooklyn. The girl is stupid so tell her you like her shoes or something and she’ll spill.

[ Jessica hangs up, Mike enters once more but this time he is shoved out the way by a girl in big sunglasses and a hat ]

Jessica: Whitney Blears. You look prettier in our photo

Whitney: What is it you want? That picture was just a joke... messing around. I’m not a drug addict

Jessica: You see now your friend Danni Wernham says different, infact she says you were with her that night. And didn’t your brother JUST get off charges for drug dealing?

Whitney: Leave Billy-Rae out of this, he’s a good boy

Jessica: So good he helped his 14 year old underage girlfriend kill her self via an Ecstasy OD

Whitney: Porsche-Mercedes’ death was very sad but my brother had not intended her any harm

Jessica: Do you even believe that? I mean, do you really just say what your publicist says? Have you seen the photographs of you off your head... you’re BALD.. does it not make you worry that maybe something isn’t going wrong. I tell you what, i’ll make you a deal, how about you start telling the truth and I don’t ensure you never get a record deal again

Whitney: Fine! I took the drugs so what? It’s no big deal. Everyone in Hollywood does them. Honestly... what I do with my life is my business

Jessica: What about your fans?

Whitney: Screw my fans! Who gives a crap about them? This is about me!

Jessica: Oh Whitney, you just got me my headline

Whitney: You have no proof

[ Jessica smiles and takes out a tape recorder from under her desk and plays back what Whitney said ]

Whitney: You bi**h!

[ Whitney lunges forward ]

Jessica: Security!

[ Security runs in, as does a photographer who begins taking photographs of Whitney as she is taken away. Jessica adjusts her jacket and goes into the main office ]

Jessica: New cover everyone...

[ The scene fades out back into Jessica’s office where John comes in ]

John: I heard all the newsstands sold out, congratulations

Jessica: Thank you

John: How are you holding up

Jessica: Fine...
John: Still not sleeping?

Jessica: I’m fine John

John: I worry about you. You remember in school when I used to follow you around and if anyone started on you i’d go crazy?

Jessica: That wasn’t your fault, it was your disease

John: It had nothing to do with the psycosis, I cared about you and I still do. You worry me, you’re so obsessed with this magazine it’s like you have nothing else... I mean, you don’t have a husband, no children, you don’t even have pets... what keeps you warm at night?

Jessica: Money

John: Money doesn’t fill an empty house, Jessica

[ The scene fades to Jessica’s house. She enters to it being empty. She walks into her kitchen and pours a large glass of red wine and sits down on the sofa. She picks up a photograph off her table and begins crying. Her phone rings, she composes herself and answers ]

Jessica: Hello?

John: Jessica, are you OK?

Jessica: Yeah.. shouldn’t I be?

John: Have you not seen the news?

Jessica: No

John: Turn it on

[ Jessica turns it on, a huge headline reads “Whitney in Suicide Bid”. Jessica sits numb ]

John: Jessica? Hello? Jessica? Are you there?

[ Jessica drops the phone and mutters slightly ]

Jessica: I did this...

[Slowpoke]

:O

I don't know if you mean that it was so rubbish you had a heart attack or it was so sad it broke your heart!

door number 2!

i loved it though!

[Mrs.McCall]

door number 2!

i loved it though!

Haha. Thanks :D

Someone mentioned it was like the opening to "Ugly Betty" series 2 and yes it was my inspiration for it but it wasn't like a carbon copy!

[Misawa]

Haha. Thanks :D

Someone mentioned it was like the opening to "Ugly Betty" series 2 and yes it was my inspiration for it but it wasn't like a carbon copy!

Can you send one of your complete scripts then please?

[Mrs.McCall]

Can you send one of your complete scripts then please?

Lost the original so re-writing it as we speak with more storylines :)

Why you want it anyway? :P

[Pyroka]

I'm not kidding when I say I started crying when I found out Nate well... yeah... >_< god. theyre so beautiful, and so sad... poor danny, god it just shows how fast life can be taken away... :'(

[Mrs.McCall]

I'm not kidding when I say I started crying when I found out Nate well... yeah... >_< god. theyre so beautiful, and so sad... poor danny, god it just shows how fast life can be taken away... :'(

I've just scrapped my entire Series 2 i've wrote so i'm re-writing it. The original idea was to go 1 year on but it mucks up my timescale too much :(

[Misawa]

I've just scrapped my entire Series 2 i've wrote so i'm re-writing it. The original idea was to go 1 year on but it mucks up my timescale too much :(

Just interested in reading.

[Mrs.McCall]

Just interested in reading.

I was joking :P My focus at the moment is writing Series 2 and of course college work. Probably won't have it done for a while :(

[Mrs.McCall]

Woo. This thread is the most viewed thread in the Articles & Stories forum.. EVER!

Also, Series 2 will begin very very very soon...

Infact the first episode will be released...

On Good Friday!

[Pyroka]

Wow, sweet. :D:D:D I'm working then though, but still, sweet. Will it contain the same characters as last time, continuing on from the aftermath of Nate?

[Mrs.McCall]

Wow, sweet. :D:D:D I'm working then though, but still, sweet. Will it contain the same characters as last time, continuing on from the aftermath of Nate?

There will be same characters as last time and there will be one addition to the cast.

[Pyroka]

Ooo, does the new character have any family relation to current cast?

[Mrs.McCall]

Ooo, does the new character have any family relation to current cast?

Not a "family" relation but they are part of one of the character's pasts ;)

[Pyroka]

Oh they always are LOL. I look forward to the next series, especially if it's just as good as the last one, if not better! :P

[Mrs.McCall]

Oh they always are LOL. I look forward to the next series, especially if it's just as good as the last one, if not better! :P

I hope you like it too!

It takes a very very dark path...

[benjamin]

I have a feeling drugs will play a part in Series 2.

[Pyroka]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... I can't wait. :P any news on the bbc btw?

[Mrs.McCall]

I have a feeling drugs will play a part in Series 2.

There isn't a storyline involving them but there are certainly some links to them ;)


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... I can't wait. :P any news on the bbc btw?

I've got to complete the script first! Haha.

[Mrs.McCall]

The entire second series of Teenage Lives is completed!

So I might post it sooner than planned.

;)

[Pyroka]

OH EM GEE. :D

[Mrs.McCall]

The first episode will be up...

Tonight by 10pm!

Then the schedule will go as follows:

Tonight - Episode one
Tomorrow - Episode Two
Friday - Episode Three
Monday - Episode Four
Tuesday - Episode Five
Wednesday - Episode Six
Thursday - Episode Seven
Friday - Episode Eight
Monday - Episodes Nine and Ten (Finale)

A Third Series will be announced after episode six is posted depending on if Series Two is popular!

[Pyroka]

OH EM GEE. WOW.WOW.WOWOW.WOW.WOWW.OWWOWW.OWW.WOW

I NEED TO CALL BEN

BENNN HUNNNNNYYY, GET YOUR FIST OUT MY *** AND COME LOOK AT DISSS.

[Mrs.McCall]

The episode is now up as promised.

Enjoy Series TWO of Teenage Lives ;)

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3606/102/

[Pyroka]

LOL I'm psychic, I had a feeling you'd post it up at 5 to 10... Freakyyy.

I feel ashamed, I've got tears down my cheeks and I've only read the first paragraph...

and on the last bit, i think my jaw just dropped. i dont think it's coming up either. how the hell did stacy survive though? O_O god sake, she deserves to die for what she did. nate & danny were perfect together. now im just worried that rick and danny are the new nate & danny, and danny might just be... 'taking' rick because he looks like nate. >_> god. there must be some sort of family attraction. poor danny though, god i feel so sorry for him.

[Mrs.McCall]

Hehe. The Rick + Danny thing develops beautifully. Don't forget that, now Nate is dead, Rick has nobody else. He doesn't love his parents and he has no real friends so he's also very vulnerable.

I am glad you liked the episode. :D

[Pyroka]

Cute. I feel sorry for Stacey A BIT since she was going insane... but 3 months seems a bit soon for her to be suddenly 'ok'.

[Immenseman]

love it love it love it.

[benjamin]

Omg. I didn't see that coming :|

[Pyroka]

i got pretty damn upset in that paragraph... so emotional. :( well done mccall, youre al egend.

[Mrs.McCall]

Aww thanks.

Yeah, the whole "Stacy's Sanity" thing is kind of a debate in Series 2 although she is alot better after her stint in a psychiatric hospital.

[Pyroka]

well it seems like she is a BIT better, but as you say, a stint in a psychiatric hospital may not have contained her sanity. I haven't seen much of Staceys 'seduction skills' yet either. Eeek.

[Mrs.McCall]

Episode Two now up!

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3609/102/

Enjoy :D

[Pyroka]

oh my god. stacey go die right now. she best not, oh she best not. i didnt see rick coming onto danny in a mile tbh... quite shocked, but im even more shocked danny laid him in the first place. as beautiful as it is and how theyre getting so close... eek.

parents hearing bout this could be amusing though. good work mccall :)

[Mrs.McCall]

Haha thanks.

More to come tomorrow :D

[Mrs.McCall]

Episode 3 is up!

Enjoy!

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3615/102/

Thanks again for your continued support :)

[Pyroka]

right then, about to read (:

i. want. to. murder. stacy. now.

chad, rick and danny is the new love triangle eh? that could be interesting... what is it with all the guys being gay. :P ben would have a field day.

[Slowpoke]

Just caught up, you never fail to amaze me Joey!

[Mrs.McCall]

Haha!

Yeah, it's a very gay town! Lmao.

You'll get to know Chad ALOT more over the series ;)

Will put the next episode up at midnight! :D

[Pyroka]

LOL a gay town. ben's fav. where is the love hunk anyway, he's missing out on all the juicy teen goodness.<3

i wanna know chad alot more, he seems downtoearth & a bit like nate actually. i just think with rick in the equation, and then chad... it's all going to be a fight over danny which ends up in a catastrophic boom.

[Mrs.McCall]

Yeah, Chad seems nice on the surface.

[Pyroka]

oh you.. NO WAY. NO WAYYY.

[Mrs.McCall]

Episode 4 as promised:
http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3616/102/

Enjoy ;)

A little riddle before you read:

Remember, looks are almost definitely deceiving

Night :D

[Pyroka]

OMG.

</3 BRB

ooo stacys getting it! omg i didnt expect that one at all actually. i lol'd at danny running away, that was seriously funny xD violin too, lmao it sounds just like my mates. Mccall you're an awesome writer xD god that was pretty damn funny, but what a turn... is chad like an ex or something, of stacys? idk :S AHHH

[Mrs.McCall]

Hahaha.

I have messed up my posting schedual but it's a nice cliffhanger until Monday :P

I can't give any info though but all I can say is "ooooo" haha ;)

I've said it enough times but thanks for your continued support :D

[Slowpoke]

Hahaha.

I have messed up my posting schedual but it's a nice cliffhanger until Monday :P

I can't give any info though but all I can say is "ooooo" haha ;)

I've said it enough times but thanks for your continued support :D

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE post one this weekend, it's Easter, treat us! ;)

[Pyroka]

Hahaha.

I have messed up my posting schedual but it's a nice cliffhanger until Monday :P

I can't give any info though but all I can say is "ooooo" haha ;)

I've said it enough times but thanks for your continued support :D

i hate you. i really do sometimes, i love you but god damnit i hate you LOL.

[Mrs.McCall]

lmao I'm a tease!

Sorry :P

[Mrs.McCall]

Hmm, as it's easter I'm going to play havoc with my schedule and give you not one but two new episodes of Teenage Lives!

Oof!

Hope they eggcite you!

Episode 5: http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3641/102/

Episode 6: http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3642/102/

[Pyroka]

OMG. BRBRBBRBR.

im not shocked about chad being a drug pusher, but stacy? is this why she went so psycho? my god, i feel awful now... :( i didnt know stacy's mind was messed up by drugs, omg.. :(:(:( next episode, but omg :(


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[Mrs.McCall]

See?

You'll see a whole new side to Stacy soon :)

[Pyroka]

IM REELEING AFTER THAT T6JTHT EPISODE OMGGOMGOGMGOGMGOGMGOGMGOMG HELP ME I NEEDC REHAB.

[Mrs.McCall]

LMAO!

Aww.

[Pyroka]

hashahahahaheeeeekkkkk im warning vben srslyl he cant read this abomination, i need an peisode nownwownwownownwownoiwnwow bnwow.

[Mrs.McCall]

Will have to wait until tomorrow now :)

Glad you liked again though!

It keeps getting darker btw...

[benjamin]

I think it's gone a little too farfetched now.

[Mrs.McCall]

I think it's gone a little too farfetched now.

Haha, yeah I thought i'd go wild a little...

it's gets more crazy :D

[hoopsx]

Pyroka you are one sad boy.

[Pyroka]

Pyroka you are one sad boy.

sorry for enjoying reading, mr wannabe MOD.

[hoopsx]

Crying because of some article on Habbox and getting all angry cos he won't write em quicker, jesus go buy a book or something.

[Pyroka]

Crying because of some article on Habbox and getting all angry cos he won't write em quicker, jesus go buy a book or something.

uhm, it's called anticipation, eejit. i cried because it was sad, sorry if im not an ardnut like you. now please leave the thread, unless you wanna actually contribute something intelligent to it.

Edited by --ss-- (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not be rude ;).

[hoopsx]

:'( i can't believe stacey did that what a cow!! can't wait for nate to come back though :D:D:D:D:D

he'll soon sort her out but she was nasty.. :'( i had tears coming down my face cos of her.

[Mrs.McCall]

:'( i can't believe stacey did that what a cow!! can't wait for nate to come back though :D:D:D:D:D

he'll soon sort her out but she was nasty.. :'( i had tears coming down my face cos of her.

Nate's dead. I hope you're not being sarcastic because if you're not going to post serious responses or criticism about Teenage Lives then please do not post at all :)

[hoopsx]

Nate's...dea..d? Like..never..coming back? WHAT?!!:?!?! WHY DID YOU SPOIL IT FOR ME. EVER HEARD OF SPOILER TAGS YOU IDIOT

Edited by --ss-- (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not be rude ;).

[Mrs.McCall]

First of all, I wrote it!

Second of all, I presumed you were up to date with it by now. Sorry.

[hoopsx]

I was not up to date, I was only just getting into it.

[Mrs.McCall]

Well, woops!

My apologies there. Doesn't entirely spoil it for you though :)

[Mrs.McCall]

Guys, sorry about this!

As you may or may not know, Immensemen and 088! were hacked and someone accessed the Habbox Staff Panel on Immensemen's account and messed it up. So basically, I can't post Teenage Lives today!

I will, however, post a double bill tomorrow :)

[Pyroka]

Ah alright then McCall, its fine. :) We look forward to your next one though, well... I DO =D

[Mrs.McCall]

Good to know :)

I am also planning to write an article about the hackings too :)

[Pyroka]

Ooo...

Is it entitled "LOLn00bz"?

[Mrs.McCall]

Nope, I'm just going to cover all the interesting "theories" i've heard about it!

[Pyroka]

Oh, that'll be interesting. Lookin forward to it lol.

[Mrs.McCall]

Will be up tomorrow now along with the double bill as I am too tired and cba'd right now haha.

[Pyroka]

Fair enough, I've got day off tommorow (A) woop woop. have a nice sleepies!

[Mrs.McCall]

Ok so episodes 7 & 8 are up. Hope you like. Series Finale is tomorrow :)

Episode 7: http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3653/102/

Episode 8: http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3655/102/

Enjoy!

[Mrs.McCall]

also: I'm scrapping my "Who Hacked Habbox" article. It doesn't have any depth really!

[Pyroka]

oh. my. god.

this is getting seriously unreal WHICH I DONT MIND but hell... thats some imagination. O_O

[Mrs.McCall]

Yeah... I've kind of come away from the typical soap thing. I like drama... though i'd make it a bit crazier.

After tomorrow, I will write one FINAL episode as I don't think I could sustain another series nor do I think people want one!

[Pyroka]

I WANT ANOTHER SERIES?!??!!!?!?!?!??!

[Mrs.McCall]

I'll do a poll at some point and see how it goes!

:)

[Mrs.McCall]

Series finale is up now :)

http://www.habbox.com/site//content/view/3661/102/

Enjoy it :D

[Pyroka]

HOLY ****. THAT IS A FINALE UNLIKE ANY OTHER. I WAS WAITING FOR THE EXPLOSIONS TO OCCUR, BUT BLOODY HELL.

[Mrs.McCall]

Haha. I wanted a lot to happen to get everyone guessing.

If I don't get much of a response or a call to bring it back then I'll write on final episode and then that'll be it.

[John!]

Everyone dies.. How can you bring it back?

If you can then you should as I'm thoroughly enjoying it. :)

[Mrs.McCall]

Everyone dies.. How can you bring it back?

If you can then you should as I'm thoroughly enjoying it. :)

Ah but is everyone dead?

Big changes can happen in minutes :D

Glad to hear you're enjoying it :)

[Inseriousity.]

24 pages of this thread of constant compliments... do you really need a poll to work that out? :P

[Mrs.McCall]

24 pages of this thread of constant compliments... do you really need a poll to work that out? :P

Well until now it was only myself and Pyroka talking haha.

I am very pleased people like it.

Looks like a series 3 IS on the cards after all ;)

[Inseriousity.]

Well until now it was only myself and Pyroka talking haha.

I am very pleased people like it.

Looks like a series 3 IS on the cards after all ;)

Oh lmao!! So it is but tbh, articles have never been so popular before so I'd carry it on without a poll anyway...
Although if you carry it on too much, it's going to be 'Adult Life' then possibly 'OAP Lives' then 'Afterlives' :p

[Mrs.McCall]

Yeah. A third series would carry on directly after the last episode took off that way the time scale makes more sense!

[Slowpoke]

you HAVE to carry this on Joey :(!

[Mrs.McCall]

Haha. I'll tell you all my decision tomorrow :)

See if many others post in here first :P

[Slowpoke]

ITS THE MOST POPULAR ARTICLE EVER !!!!!!!!! :(

[Pyroka]

ITS THE MOST POPULAR ARTICLE EVER !!!!!!!!! :(

AMEN TO THAT!

[Mrs.McCall]

Aww thanks :)

[CALLUMisbanned]

Was good, caught up on series 2, episode 4-10 just now.

I can't really see series 3 being a big hit unless you have an amazing idea. He's lost his old lover, his best friend, his old lovers brother, his mum probably, and looks like he's gunna die, it'll seem like this kid has the worst life ever and everything bad happens to the people around him.

[Pyroka]

who said he lost his old lover, best friend, old lovers brother & his mum?

for all we know... one could survive and the story could go around how they've lost everything, become seperated from the world, and just have a diary to write in... god, that'd be epic just thinking about it. especially with the mind of McCall.

[Mrs.McCall]

LMAO.

I have my ideas for Series 3 ready and I shall be writing it soon :) I've decided to write it as I post that way you can all give me feedback on what you like and dislike and I can write the next episode with that in mind.

Don't worry I am not going to pull a Dallas-style "it was all a dream" haha.

Also, I'm interested to know... who do you think is dead?

- Danny?
- His Mother?
- Alexis?
- Stacy?
- Rick?

Post your thoughts and feel free to say who you HOPE is dead :P

[Pyroka]

I think his mother will die, and Danny will survive once more, where he will be put into orphanage & will be adopted by Rick's parents, who have just gained back Rick, but has suffered severe brain damage due to his lack of oxygen to his brain. Euthanasia has been considered by the parents, but they can't kill his own son. Rick's dad will be objective to the issue, and leave the family to go off with some cow (who will be entered alter on in the series).

alexis will survive, but wont live the normal life she used to (work that out). stacy will be killed, and at her funeral there will be a large outcry. michaela will survive, but she might be so shaken up...

IM JUST TOO GOOD AT THSI NOW LOL MCCALL, YO OUT THE JOB.