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!star--girl!
15-06-2005, 05:58 PM
I don't know a name yet :P
But here it is:


I was happy with her...
I felt she was mine...
She was mine forever...
It was fine...
To hear what they said after she died...
Now i lost her forever...
I need her...
For ever and ever and ever...
I wish someone could bring her alive...
And wake her up!


Now you think... it's about a friend, don't ya? now actually... it's about my hamster... :(

Steven
15-06-2005, 06:00 PM
Awe nice poem, name it 'For a friend' ;']

Janumz
15-06-2005, 06:54 PM
Aww =']
That's so sweet.. great poem =']
Sorry about your hamster ='[
+Rep if I can =]

Surname
15-06-2005, 07:25 PM
Nice poem, but I don't like the last line :) 7/10
PS: Sorry to hear about your hamster

!star--girl!
16-06-2005, 04:38 PM
Thanks :)

Pulchritudinous
16-06-2005, 04:40 PM
It should be called, 'Dedicated to Hammy'.

Pretty good, although a bit simple.

Krypsis
16-06-2005, 06:51 PM
Aww, :( Nice poem 9.5/10

!star--girl!
16-06-2005, 07:23 PM
Thank you :)

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