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  1. 15-06-2005, 05:58 PM #1
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    Default {Poem} {insert name here}

    I don't know a name yet
    But here it is:


    I was happy with her...
    I felt she was mine...
    She was mine forever...
    It was fine...
    To hear what they said after she died...
    Now i lost her forever...
    I need her...
    For ever and ever and ever...
    I wish someone could bring her alive...
    And wake her up!


    Now you think... it's about a friend, don't ya? now actually... it's about my hamster...
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  2. 15-06-2005, 06:00 PM #2
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    Awe nice poem, name it 'For a friend' ;']
    jesus christ, that's a pretty face.
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    Aww =']
    That's so sweet.. great poem =']
    Sorry about your hamster ='[
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    Nice poem, but I don't like the last line 7/10
    PS: Sorry to hear about your hamster
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    Thanks
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    It should be called, 'Dedicated to Hammy'.

    Pretty good, although a bit simple.




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    Aww, Nice poem 9.5/10
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    Thank you
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