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Fez
02-05-2008, 08:45 PM
American dream
All the glamours and gleam
Faked and hidden
But none considern

How many crimes done?
Shuffle the gun
Pass it on to the next guy
Before he can even reply

American dream
A simple meme
Promises of wealth
The land of health

American dream
A dream nontheless...

ScreamingRage01
03-05-2008, 11:17 PM
Considern isn't a word...

Joshuae
04-05-2008, 09:20 AM
Considern isn't a word...

It's like a word which isn't in the dictionary, but makes sense. :)

le harry
05-05-2008, 10:20 AM
It's like a word which isn't in the dictionary, but makes sense. :)
It's still not classed as a word lol

kooldude23
05-05-2008, 10:21 PM
It's alright but i think you have tried to hard to make it rhyme with words like "meme" and "considern". Poetry doesnt have the rhyme.

ToxicPaddy
05-05-2008, 10:25 PM
I think its good :)

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