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Thread: American Dream

  1. 02-05-2008, 08:45 PM #1
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    American dream
    All the glamours and gleam
    Faked and hidden
    But none considern

    How many crimes done?
    Shuffle the gun
    Pass it on to the next guy
    Before he can even reply

    American dream
    A simple meme
    Promises of wealth
    The land of health

    American dream
    A dream nontheless...
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    Considern isn't a word...
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    Quote Originally Posted by ScreamingRage01 View Post
    Considern isn't a word...
    It's like a word which isn't in the dictionary, but makes sense.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Joshuae View Post
    It's like a word which isn't in the dictionary, but makes sense.
    It's still not classed as a word lol

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    It's alright but i think you have tried to hard to make it rhyme with words like "meme" and "considern". Poetry doesnt have the rhyme.
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    "There is not a liberal America and a conservative America - there is the United States of America. There is not a black America and a white America and latino America and asian America - there's the United States of America."
    - Barack Obama

    "Minds are like parachutes - they only function when open."
    - Thomas Dewar
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