My New Hotel Design - Kinda an Alteration

[iZeal]

I drew the hotel mydelf but put it onto the background of the current one, had to change the background a bit too...

do u like?

its my second ever pixel drawing...

http://i41.tinypic.com/5ufw51.jpg

[Samantha.]

Looks cool

[kjhottie2]

awsome :D

[.:roxyblonde:.]

It looks awesome

[Accipiter]

Its very good for your second alt.

But the blacklines inside the hotel (if you get what i mean) turn them to a shade next to it. The black lines create an effect like it was made in 1980's for me.

Where theirs a big hole you should put a car park in on a loading bay.
and put some sort of landscape on the top ;D.

but for a second try i can see you getting good.

then the only other problem is the size of the flooring on the outside bit.

[ChrisObv]

Its V Nice,
only thing i can say is,
WTH is that massive "hole" on the right part of the hotel?
but overall verry nice.

& you need to put an iconic reature on the top of the hotels,
like every hotel.

+ shading?

[.ZzZzZ]

Things i'm not to keen on:

* Roof
* Windows
* Wood Roof
* Habbo Enterance - No-one can get past so why don't you just build a path to get to it basically ?

[lPinoy]

Its V Nice,
only thing i can say is,
WTH is that massive "hole" on the right part of the hotel?
but overall verry nice.

& you need to put an iconic reature on the top of the hotels,
like every hotel.

+ shading?

a drive through?
tunnel?
car park?

and the actual hotel didn't require much shading so i dnt see why hes does.

its alright overall, i don't particularly like the flat top but its good for a first.

[Dusty-09]

Good attempt, I like the helicopter, maybe rearrange the entrance and what Voiceover. has said to do :P

8/10

[Juelz]

lookin good, i like. 8/10

[iZeal]

Thanks for ur feedback, as i said, i've never really done much pixel art, just photoshop and web graphics, thought i would try a bit to see how it works

Lol, and as for the big hole in the middle, thats where ppl go for sex xD

[ItsDave]

Nice floorboards but quite large considering the scale. They are quite a few shadow problems, but overall it looks nice. 7.5/10

[Ardemax]

not being funny but the hotel would topple over

[flatface]

I like the Helipad and helicopter, looking good :)

[ExtraKen]

I drew the hotel mydelf but put it onto the background of the current one, had to change the background a bit too...

do u like?

its my second ever pixel drawing...

http://i41.tinypic.com/5ufw51.jpg


Theres a few pixel errors but other than that its a nice design althou I miss like shading under the part where the building goes bigger than the bellow thing. And I would make the street on the enterance bigger

[Kipp]

Good attempted 7/10

[Rombix]

nice second alt :) very good i like it :)

[IanBRAP]

urm not sure on the helipad no affenece, 8/10

[Cryptoo]

its quite good, although i'd suggest you not to put verhicles into it, the helicopter's very disproportioned.
8/10

[concretespoon]

It's interesting for sure, and great for a second alt, but I don't like how the upper part of the hotel is just floating like that. Some support beams might make it look more realistic, but that might just be my opinion.

And doing something with that big empty space would be nice. A levelled car park might be cool.