My New Hotel Design - Kinda an Alteration

[iZeal]

I drew the hotel mydelf but put it onto the background of the current one, had to change the background a bit too...

do u like?

its my second ever pixel drawing...

[Samantha.]

Looks cool

[kjhottie2]

awsome

[.:roxyblonde:.]

It looks awesome

[Accipiter]

Its very good for your second alt.

But the blacklines inside the hotel (if you get what i mean) turn them to a shade next to it. The black lines create an effect like it was made in 1980's for me.

Where theirs a big hole you should put a car park in on a loading bay.
and put some sort of landscape on the top ;D.

but for a second try i can see you getting good.

then the only other problem is the size of the flooring on the outside bit.

[ChrisObv]

Its V Nice,
only thing i can say is,
WTH is that massive "hole" on the right part of the hotel?
but overall verry nice.

& you need to put an iconic reature on the top of the hotels,
like every hotel.

+ shading?

[.ZzZzZ]

Things i'm not to keen on:

* Roof
* Windows
* Wood Roof
* Habbo Enterance - No-one can get past so why don't you just build a path to get to it basically ?

[lPinoy]

Its V Nice,
only thing i can say is,
WTH is that massive "hole" on the right part of the hotel?
but overall verry nice.

& you need to put an iconic reature on the top of the hotels,
like every hotel.

+ shading?

a drive through?
tunnel?
car park?

and the actual hotel didn't require much shading so i dnt see why hes does.

its alright overall, i don't particularly like the flat top but its good for a first.

[Dusty-09]

Good attempt, I like the helicopter, maybe rearrange the entrance and what Voiceover. has said to do

8/10

[Juelz]

lookin good, i like. 8/10