ICT Homework

[Swinkid]

Literly, in ict were doing Text and Graphics and we had to design a magazine cover of our choice.

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Thoughts?

[kk.]

text is horrible. good general idea though. Big image then smaller ones fro smaller stories. Too black though,

[RichardKnox]

It's alright I guess, but it seems like the text is just a bit randomly placed and looks as if no thought was given to the actual placement of it nor alignment of it.

[Swinkid]

It's alright I guess, but it seems like the text is just a bit randomly placed and looks as if no thought was given to the actual placement of it nor alignment of it.


text is horrible. good general idea though. Big image then smaller ones fro smaller stories. Too black though,

Any ideas how i can improve my font and where to place it?

[ReviewDude]

Any ideas how i can improve my font and where to place it?

Have a look at lots of magazines with a similar target market to the design of yours - the design has to be attractive, and eye-catching which, at the moment, it isn't - due to excessive amounts of black.

The text should be in a logical place (with a decent font), and should probably at least align to something, so stop it looking like the words were just thrown at the page at random. Space the words out a bit - you have all that room, and you're clumping text together on the one side...