My first website..

[TotalShambles]

Hello,

This is the first time i have created a layout could you please give constructive critisisum only..

http://www.uploadpicz.com/images/65layout_copy_tn.jpg (http://www.uploadpicz.com/view-65layout_copy.gif) (http://www.uploadpicz.com/images/65layout_copy.gif)

[GoldenMerc]

You didnt make that DJ at the bottom :s

[Alkaz]

Its ok, not really a layout, the writing could be more swishy to go with the image. Also, the ronded corners arent very good.

Its ok so far, needs alto more work though.

[TotalShambles]

no i used it from google

EDIT:

Thank you Alkaz, yeah i will work on it more..

[Fehm]

Its a bit.... ermm... its a tad on the old, and not very nice to look at side? Sorry but your grasping the idea :P good luck

[Excellent2]

You want to search these forums for inspiration as thats terrible.

[Sam]

Agree with above. If you'd have spent a little more time planning it out, thinking about colours and checking for inspiration, it'd probably be a lot better. Right now its just two awful colours, and some ugly text.

Try to spend a bit more time planning, thinking about little details you could add to make it stand out. Also think about trying to use gradients. Just using any old plain colour also makes it look a little odd imo.

[Blinger1]

You didnt make that DJ at the bottom :s
where did he say that he did?