View Full Version : [Alteration] Lady Gaga WIP
Steals
04-04-2010, 03:38 PM
This is my first time posting on habbox, so please tell me anything you think could be improved. I am new to making alts and I see a lot of people are doing Lady Gaga, so I wanted to give it a try.
Special
04-04-2010, 03:46 PM
That's really good!
if I had to give some criticism though, it would be work on the eyes a little, they seem a bit dark
other than that, great! 10/10
Anson
04-04-2010, 04:17 PM
it looks awesome but the eye is a little wierd o_o
dbgtz
04-04-2010, 06:22 PM
Sorry but this isn't that great, the hair isn't shaded like hair, the dress isn't shaded it just looks like it has random pink and purple bits and the eyes look weird.
Amberr
04-04-2010, 10:05 PM
It looks pretty good
the only thing i would say is work on the eyes, and improve the shading on the hair
But apart from that looks good :) well done x
Steals
05-04-2010, 12:39 AM
Sorry but this isn't that great, the hair isn't shaded like hair, the dress isn't shaded it just looks like it has random pink and purple bits and the eyes look weird.
I have noticed that you have a problem. You NEVER have anything GOOD to say about anyones alts. You have no room to speak your alts look like poo. K THANKS!
Edited by Garion (Forum Manager): Please do not be rude about other people's alterations - if you wish to criticise, please do so constructively.
dbgtz
05-04-2010, 08:56 AM
A) Before Selena I havn't done alts in months, even so it's 10 times better then yours and yes it is a piece of crap. B) Simon Cowell can't sing yet he still judges it. C) It's called constructive criticism, it's better then posting without properly looking saying "OMG THATZ AWSUM ++REPPP" because no, it is not awesome.
I am actually sick of people calling the crappest of alts (not really reffering to you here) amazing as they're not, as they michaels guy alts got moved to the elites, ok they weren't bad but they weren't exactly special. It amazes me how then better alts then these get completely ripped apart and there are only a few people who will actually go properly in to detail when they reply. *REMOVED*
Edited by Nicola (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not be rude to other members
Accipiter
05-04-2010, 10:33 AM
Sorry but mrselenagomez is right, the shading on the dress & hair is quite bad.
if you shown me the hair without the body i'd be saying mm candy floss, it needs some lines adding to it in the movement of the referral picture. The dress also is just you drawing lines across and filling it in, its to rough add some lighter shading to it and i'd say make it a lighter colour to suit her referral pic, its a velvetty coloured silk in the pic so i'd say make the pink lighter and put it a tiny bit purple to. also try and add some light effect to it.
Im not trying to put you down im just trying to improve what you can do, as you obviously have good intentions towards alts.
Steals
05-04-2010, 01:53 PM
Thanks Voiceover.
Like i said in the description of the picture, I am new to alt making. So I appreciate the constructive feedback. :)
Steals
05-04-2010, 02:18 PM
Here is an update. I added some detail to the hair and dress. Tell me what you think. Use constructive criticism please. :)
dbgtz
05-04-2010, 02:24 PM
Thanks Voiceover.
Like i said in the description of the picture, I am new to alt making. So I appreciate the constructive feedback. :)
He's basically agreeing with what I said yet you're thanking him? L-O-L! You need to blend colours more on the dress and the hair go to www.habbo.co.uk/groups/pixel-art (http://www.habbo.co.uk/groups/pixel-art) and go on the forum to find a hair tutorial. Also the glasses aren't isometric completely.
I like it! Much better than I could ever do anyway.
+rep
-Undiscovered
13-04-2010, 10:52 AM
I like it :)
Steals
16-04-2010, 07:14 AM
Thanks eveyone! :)
Shadowchild
16-04-2010, 04:13 PM
it isn't the best but with some work it could be pretty good :D
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