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Thread: Lady Gaga WIP

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    Default Lady Gaga WIP

    This is my first time posting on habbox, so please tell me anything you think could be improved. I am new to making alts and I see a lot of people are doing Lady Gaga, so I wanted to give it a try.
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    That's really good!

    if I had to give some criticism though, it would be work on the eyes a little, they seem a bit dark

    other than that, great! 10/10

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    it looks awesome but the eye is a little wierd o_o

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    Sorry but this isn't that great, the hair isn't shaded like hair, the dress isn't shaded it just looks like it has random pink and purple bits and the eyes look weird.

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    It looks pretty good
    the only thing i would say is work on the eyes, and improve the shading on the hair
    But apart from that looks good well done x

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    Quote Originally Posted by mrselenagomez View Post
    Sorry but this isn't that great, the hair isn't shaded like hair, the dress isn't shaded it just looks like it has random pink and purple bits and the eyes look weird.
    I have noticed that you have a problem. You NEVER have anything GOOD to say about anyones alts. You have no room to speak your alts look like poo. K THANKS!

    Edited by Garion (Forum Manager): Please do not be rude about other people's alterations - if you wish to criticise, please do so constructively.
    Last edited by Nixt; 05-04-2010 at 06:18 PM.

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    A) Before Selena I havn't done alts in months, even so it's 10 times better then yours and yes it is a piece of crap. B) Simon Cowell can't sing yet he still judges it. C) It's called constructive criticism, it's better then posting without properly looking saying "OMG THATZ AWSUM ++REPPP" because no, it is not awesome.

    I am actually sick of people calling the crappest of alts (not really reffering to you here) amazing as they're not, as they michaels guy alts got moved to the elites, ok they weren't bad but they weren't exactly special. It amazes me how then better alts then these get completely ripped apart and there are only a few people who will actually go properly in to detail when they reply. *REMOVED*

    Edited by Nicola (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not be rude to other members
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    Sorry but mrselenagomez is right, the shading on the dress & hair is quite bad.

    if you shown me the hair without the body i'd be saying mm candy floss, it needs some lines adding to it in the movement of the referral picture. The dress also is just you drawing lines across and filling it in, its to rough add some lighter shading to it and i'd say make it a lighter colour to suit her referral pic, its a velvetty coloured silk in the pic so i'd say make the pink lighter and put it a tiny bit purple to. also try and add some light effect to it.

    Im not trying to put you down im just trying to improve what you can do, as you obviously have good intentions towards alts.

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    Thanks Voiceover.

    Like i said in the description of the picture, I am new to alt making. So I appreciate the constructive feedback.

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    Here is an update. I added some detail to the hair and dress. Tell me what you think. Use constructive criticism please.
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