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[HabboGraphics]

Habbo Banner

http://i53.tinypic.com/sxbyv9.png

Hello, Im HabboGraphics i make banner such as this, Im willing to make banners like this for people Just Message Me Thank You

[Nick]

The text looks nice with the ballons and all but the people are just out of place :P Maybe put them down at the bottom of the banner so it looks like there standing up and a white stroke maybe (Well the boom box dude)

9/10 ;)

[HabboGraphics]

Thanks Mate, I'll Make A New Onee And Get pictures from habbo itself

[Nick]

Thanks Mate, I'll Make A New Onee And Get pictures from habbo itself

Ok :) Im looking forward to see it :)

[HabboGraphics]

Hey How did you do that Banner underneath your text ?

[Nick]

you mean signature :P lol

[HabboGraphics]

Yes Yes

[Nick]

Well i made it , its in 4 parts though :) PM me if you would like one made , what bg color and your avatar and pics you want on them :)

*Staying on topic before a mod warns us ;) *

[RandomManJay]

Improvements:

- The lines which travel long the left and bottom edges could be removed or continued along the other edges.
- The tops on some of the letters (the "b"s and the "p") are thinner than the rest of the score, they need to be corrected.
- As I said in your other thread, the flower doesn't look like it belongs there.
- As Nick said, you could add a stroke around the habbos to make them seem less out of place.

Nice work though, keep it up!

[lRhyss]

The free text gen you used for the text is too spaced out, Made them conjoined, Take a look at the HXL banner for example

6/10 :P

[Sloths]

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Edited by Catzsy (Forum Super Moderator): Please don't make pointless posts

[Nick]

The banner will look much better without these errors :)

[Janet Snakehole]

The text on the banner is spaced out a little too much, other than that I really like it! :)

[Nick]

Also seeing that the words are spaced out from the generator try generating each word itself and then move it closer together.