September 11th Poem

[-x-Kerrianne-x-]

This was a poem that I have made up special for this occassion. Please read and tell me what you think. Thankyou. <3


On this day,
Many people lost their lives,
Their friends and family,
Their children and wifes.

The terrified eyewitnesses,
The children on the street,
The poor trade center workers,
Who were sitting on their seats.

Watching the pictures on television,
The pictures just do scare,
But most of all I weep,
For the people who are actually there.

The world was watching shocked,
The brave fire-fighting men,
Oh lord, look after them all,
Please dont let this happen again.

[Jinxxed]

Cool that's really good, Kerri :o:)
10/10 :)

[Addie]

Well done! 10/10 R.I.P Twin Towers.

[Rosie]

Really That was Brill :p ! Buh Makes you Think Y'ano More about it And Everything

[-x-Kerrianne-x-]

Thankyou for your heart-warming comments ^_^
They are noted :)

[ashLOVESMatt!]

That was lovely, very emotive.

[Adam$]

Aww, that's really caring, and a great poem. I don't get emotional, but that touched me. +rep. ;')

[-x-Kerrianne-x-]

Thankyou very much for your suppot :)