This was a poem that I have made up special for this occassion. Please read and tell me what you think. Thankyou.
On this day,
Many people lost their lives,
Their friends and family,
Their children and wifes.
The terrified eyewitnesses,
The children on the street,
The poor trade center workers,
Who were sitting on their seats.
Watching the pictures on television,
The pictures just do scare,
But most of all I weep,
For the people who are actually there.
The world was watching shocked,
The brave fire-fighting men,
Oh lord, look after them all,
Please dont let this happen again.
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Thread: September 11th Poem
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September 11th Poem
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Cool that's really good, Kerri
10/10
Now that it's raining more than ever
Know that we'll still have each other
You can stand under my umbrella
You can stand under my umbrella (8)
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Well done! 10/10 R.I.P Twin Towers.
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Really That was Brill :p ! Buh Makes you Think Y'ano More about it And Everything
+**++*FANNIE FART+*+*+*
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Thankyou for your heart-warming comments ^_^
They are noted
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That was lovely, very emotive.
can't remember pass to other accounts =/
- ash
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Aww, that's really caring, and a great poem. I don't get emotional, but that touched me. +rep. ;')
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Thankyou very much for your suppot
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