ICT Homework

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22-03-2009, 02:42 PM
Swinkid

ICT Homework

Literly, in ict were doing Text and Graphics and we had to design a magazine cover of our choice.

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Thoughts?
22-03-2009, 02:44 PM
kk.

text is horrible. good general idea though. Big image then smaller ones fro smaller stories. Too black though,
22-03-2009, 02:45 PM
RichardKnox

It's alright I guess, but it seems like the text is just a bit randomly placed and looks as if no thought was given to the actual placement of it nor alignment of it.
22-03-2009, 02:50 PM
Swinkid

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Originally Posted by RichardKnox

It's alright I guess, but it seems like the text is just a bit randomly placed and looks as if no thought was given to the actual placement of it nor alignment of it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by kk.

text is horrible. good general idea though. Big image then smaller ones fro smaller stories. Too black though,

Any ideas how i can improve my font and where to place it?
23-03-2009, 09:12 AM
ReviewDude

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Originally Posted by Swinkid

Any ideas how i can improve my font and where to place it?

Have a look at lots of magazines with a similar target market to the design of yours - the design has to be attractive, and eye-catching which, at the moment, it isn't - due to excessive amounts of black.

The text should be in a logical place (with a decent font), and should probably at least align to something, so stop it looking like the words were just thrown at the page at random. Space the words out a bit - you have all that room, and you're clumping text together on the one side...