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It is a slight improvement.
But you still need to get rid of that ghastly blank space in the middle.
You should also attempt making the paper looked torn at the edges but I do like the drawings. If your going to say this is too hard give this design up now as unless you make it look a bit worn it won't look good.
Also don't spend too long on the layout unless your gonna use it or sell it..
coz otherwise it's time going to waste as i've done it many times before :(
Make it more scribbly :) and the white box in the middle it would look better if that wasnt there :)
Id say the first one is the nicest !
As Richard said, the big white box NO NO ;]
Nice try ;] I like the second one.
I like the secound one but its not too Catchy,
Titles very good, navs a bit crap though, maybe go a simlar doodly style to the title with it?
Latest Version:
http://www.jamiemiddleton.net/template.png
Hope you all like it.
Rate this etc?
<3 I Like It
Thank You.
Any CC?