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  1. #1
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    Default Notepad Style Layout

    Ok, so ive made this notepad style layout.
    If people like it, i may use it for my portfolio/blog.

    Because its a large layout, ill link instead.
    http://www.uploadz.co.uk/720264template.png

    Please tell me your HONEST opinion, even if its brutal .


    Any cc is welcome, and if you wish to, rate it.

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    Not bad.. Lil simple but not bad..
    +rep.

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    Quite Honestly I dont like it much but + rep for trying

    I'm All Over Baby
    USA -//- Focht.
    UK-//- AudioBook


    Check out AudioBook's Home page, It will knock you're Socks On/Off.


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    A few things wrong with it.

    The style of it seems to be too perfect. Paper never turns out like that with no creases etc. Make a border around the edge that seems to be torn and have random writing scrawled on the paper.

    Also remove the bit in the middle as with paper you never have a big white, plain patch in the middle do you?

    The design has potential but it is nowhere near ready to be used on a site. Try to make it feel more used and visited (if you get what I mean).

    Its a good attempt for trying but you haven't pulled it off. Unlucky.

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    Richard Knox


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    Any CC?
    What can i improve on etc?

    Edit:
    Thanks Rich.
    Last edited by Swastika; 27-10-2006 at 07:45 PM.

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    I like it , 7/10.

    +rep.

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    Err.

    Read my post as I have areas to improve on in that.


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    Quote Originally Posted by RichardKnox View Post
    A few things wrong with it.

    The style of it seems to be too perfect. Paper never turns out like that with no creases etc. Make a border around the edge that seems to be torn and have random writing scrawled on the paper.

    Also remove the bit in the middle as with paper you never have a big white, plain patch in the middle do you?

    The design has potential but it is nowhere near ready to be used on a site. Try to make it feel more used and visited (if you get what I mean).

    Its a good attempt for trying but you haven't pulled it off. Unlucky.

    Regards,
    Richard Knox
    Detailed or what :p
    Nice C&C +rep..

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    Ryan. Guest

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    Yeah..
    Make the middle a lil more transparent.. Also the links on the side aren't that noticable

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