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If anyones gonna steal it its gonna be me... lol Im doing the same coursework as him lol. Lol James in about a week I need to do one of those xD. Oh and erm... its not very detailed, and you skipped the movie parts to hastily. Sorry... hope you can edit in time for Mondaii or whatever.Quote:
Originally Posted by PaulMacC
you know they google the first few lines or w/e so you could get done for plagarism by posting it here tbh but idk.
Googled the first few lines and found this:
http://boardreader.com/tp/Plane+One.html
hmmm...
decent :) better so far than any of my corse work :l
wow, very good.
I like it :)
"One grabbed me and through me." should be threw :P.
Erm, "steering sticks", change it to throttle, or sterring wheel or something. :)
very good though (Y)
lol i didnt actually have enough time to change it at all before i had to hand it in (tuesday) and i am very happy to announce i got a B for it :) by my enlighs teacher so thats 2 pieces of coursework out of 5 and two B's YAY :)
We did that a couple of weeks ago, I got a B. Anyway, yours is awesome!
Good story.
I think it's a good peice of writing, however I don't think the vocabulary was great.
And yeah, I'd say a B is about right.
Well Done. :)
I liked it.
Well done.
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I thought it was good, maybe a little more description... to add a bit more panic would really liven it up and make the reader feel like they're there, but besides from that, it's a good piece of work!
well done :D