feedback? :)

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Originally Posted by ..:BAMItsNick:.

The spray cans should come out more not just instaly be cut of and the guys shoes near the door needs work on and so does the guy doing some blackflip with the beanie. The wheel on the car cant move because its been cut :P

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think i'm just gunna leave it at that.. but thanks though haha

Love it! The second version is looking much better than the first,

Alex

Its not the best I have seen... but I like the thought gone into it(:

i think it looks a complete mess

no offense

There are a lot of errors, as pointed out. Just try and fix them first before entering. :)

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Originally Posted by Infectious

There are a lot of errors, as pointed out. Just try and fix them first before entering. :)

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it's been edited and most of the errors are fixed :)
reason for it having to be edited so much is because i rushed it

http://i52.tinypic.com/apjywx.jpg

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Originally Posted by Boot

it's been edited and most of the errors are fixed :)
reason for it having to be edited so much is because i rushed it

http://i52.tinypic.com/apjywx.jpg

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It's not good, and not completely bad.

- You need to make the graffiti look like they're on the actual wall, not sticking out. Maybe follow Kasabian's tutorial about posters in the graphics forum somewhere.
- The ramps are all cut out, I'm assuming because you've ripped them from Kasbian's entry here?
- Why are the guys on skateboards just randomly placed on the alteration? You need to make it more realistic as if they're on the ramp not falling from the sky.
- You're using harsh colours for the graffiti, use some more realistic and dark colours, and also lower the opacity.
- The bin in the corner next to the yellow lady is raised up a bit, what is it supposed to be balancing on?
- You need to improve the shading on the cans too

Just my little bit of feedback. :)

Second version looks alot better but still some simple modifications could be made!

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Originally Posted by Calvin

It's not good, and not completely bad.

- You need to make the graffiti look like they're on the actual wall, not sticking out. Maybe follow Kasabian's tutorial about posters in the graphics forum somewhere.
- The ramps are all cut out, I'm assuming because you've ripped them from Kasbian's entry here?
- Why are the guys on skateboards just randomly placed on the alteration? You need to make it more realistic as if they're on the ramp not falling from the sky.
- You're using harsh colours for the graffiti, use some more realistic and dark colours, and also lower the opacity.
- The bin in the corner next to the yellow lady is raised up a bit, what is it supposed to be balancing on?
- You need to improve the shading on the cans too

Just my little bit of feedback. :)

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nah i never ripped the ramps from his work, but i see what you mean, thanks for the feedback

i'll tell ya what it actually looks like... know them sticker books where they give you a background and then the backpage there's loads of stickers that you can stick anywhere on the background

like that