Club I think. *WIP?*

Hi,
Ive been doing this alt for no reason. And erm, well I want your opinion on it. If theres anything I should add or take out or improve, please tell me, so rate /10 and c&c.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6...zoidwip1ta.png

I think it looks amazing. Great work, 10/10

Also, maybe add some cars parked up outside and some people getting out, or walking on the street outside the club.

Those people would be really hard to do, with all the pixels they'll be to big for it lol. But i will try and thanks for the comment.

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Originally Posted by Xzoid

Those people would be really hard to do, with all the pixels they'll be to big for it lol. But i will try and thanks for the comment.

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No problem. Whilst I was replying, I thought it would be hard to create some people so I was going to stop typing, but I suppose it will be a challenge. :)

Ok, doing the mini guys is really too hard as they'll look like stick men, so ive just added more cars, and as you can see theres a sports car getting impatient with the people's parking. :D
http://img272.imageshack.us/img272/4...zoidwip5bq.png

That one is uber xD


Maybe add a few lights pumping out :D

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Originally Posted by Xzoid

Ok, doing the mini guys is really too hard as they'll look like stick men, so ive just added more cars, and as you can see theres a sports car getting impatient with the people's parking. :D
http://img272.imageshack.us/img272/4...zoidwip5bq.png

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Lol at the skid mark. ;)
The cars make it busier, so well done.

When you have time you should add disco lights on the outside of the club. ;)

Headlights on the cars? Im on it! :D

lol and disco lights as said above xD


Headlights wood look good. Maybe the limo indicating to go in parking lot?

Why is there something that looks like a car coming out the side of the club? Lols... The water looks to... 2d. Maybe adding some wave lines? But make them detailed not tacky :P Add a shark or something aswell :P

9/10

Also, just thought, you could add musical notes coming out of the club building, to show the music is blaring out.

Ok, I like the way to lights come out onto the building, I like the way I inverted the colours, anywho here's an update, and I got that wierd shark who ever requested that.http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5...zoidwip7fo.png

Nice, if you really want to spice it up, you could add (on the right hand side wall) a bilboard perhaps animated?

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Originally Posted by RobJd

Nice, if you really want to spice it up, you could add (on the right hand side wall) a bilboard perhaps animated?

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:o Great idea. It could be a billboard or the name of the club. ;)

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Originally Posted by Wayne.

:o Great idea. It could be a billboard or the name of the club. ;)

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Exoughtly

Ill get that done soon, but my sisters coming on. So yeah... soon.

make the water busier possibly?

People can be 2-3 pixels tall with a different coloured head to body, I find that usually works well. Or was it 5-6... Experiment!
I also think you should make the pavement look raised from the road by adding a grey line underneath the black and perhaps make the black line between the water and land look like, like froth or swell or whatever the white stuff is called.

No, I expermented with the people, it doesn't work. Lol, rating? Oh and ocngrats Wayne. on becoming a Forum Moderator.

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Originally Posted by Xzoid

No, I expermented with the people, it doesn't work. Lol, rating? Oh and ocngrats Wayne. on becoming a Forum Moderator.

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Slightly off topic, (;)) but oh well, thank-you :)

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Originally Posted by Xzoid

No, I expermented with the people, it doesn't work. Lol, rating? Oh and ocngrats Wayne. on becoming a Forum Moderator.

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Nuhuh, i've made people work on that scale before, I just can't remember the pixels. It might of been 6x2 or 10x2 or something *shrugs*
Erm, the boat is on the wrong scale, it's far too small.

>:O thats very nice xD do mini men walking by xD lol

Ok, I owe Revis an opoligy. I can do small people.
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/7...zoidwip3rl.png
Own comment:Ok first off I love the way the Helicopter shadow come out, and the people, I really dont like the billboard shadow. Its messed up which Ill fix soon.

Great additions, especially the billboard, and the people. Well done. :)

Thank you. :)

Awesome. BUT. Yes but :(. Ugh billboard shadow shouldnt be on sky :s and uh... helicopter ... spin things... should be like in a moving motion, at the moment it looks like its about to plumet into the ocean.

I think its good, but i meant for the billboard to be on the right hand side wall? Anyway its your chioce where you put it. Nice Men/Women Btw!

well done 10/10

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Originally Posted by Flipton

Awesome. BUT. Yes but :(. Ugh billboard shadow shouldnt be on sky :s and uh... helicopter ... spin things... should be like in a moving motion, at the moment it looks like its about to plumet into the ocean.

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Its a still picture.
When you do an object and have its 3 face edges why are they black? Make them a lighter colour than all the main colour of the object.
When you have an object and have its 3 face edges why is there shading around the black lines? There is no reason for that at all
You put a shadow around everything
A darker line around every single thing in the alt - they are also completeley uneccessary.
The shading on the grass through the pillars holding up the bilbaord - Why is it like that? It should be on the ground around where the pillar stands not through it.
Nothing in the world would make the bilboard shadow go to the left and in the air. That needs to be fixed.
There is a green shadow around the orange boat that should be blue.
That is all from me now. There are still many more things to fix.
You put shading in too many places, in the wrong places and in unneccessary places.
And also one thing I noticed - Your light coming from things should be more like the light from lamps on habbo.
I wont rate it. Ill just give you one word.
poor

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Originally Posted by Cptn.kewl

Its a still picture.
When you do an object and have its 3 face edges why are they black? Make them a lighter colour than all the main colour of the object.
When you have an object and have its 3 face edges why is there shading around the black lines? There is no reason for that at all
You put a shadow around everything
A darker line around every single thing in the alt - they are also completeley uneccessary.
The shading on the grass through the pillars holding up the bilbaord - Why is it like that? It should be on the ground around where the pillar stands not through it.
Nothing in the world would make the bilboard shadow go to the left and in the air. That needs to be fixed.
There is a green shadow around the orange boat that should be blue.
That is all from me now. There are still many more things to fix.
You put shading in too many places, in the wrong places and in unneccessary places.
And also one thing I noticed - Your light coming from things should be more like the light from lamps on habbo.
I wont rate it. Ill just give you one word.
poor

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Poor? This piece of pixel art is actually very good. There are a few minor glitches, but still, poor? I think that's a bit harsh.

9.9/10

- Nick

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Originally Posted by Nick.

Poor? This piece of pixel art is actually very good. There are a few minor glitches, but still, poor? I think that's a bit harsh.

9.9/10

- Nick

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There are many errors and things that are just plane..
Unneccessary.
it needs some work on it.

I like it... Good job. + rep. =)

I THINK ITS GR8 :D 10/10 :D well done

Looks a little like the HardRock™ Cafe' in orlando with the car coming out of the wall. Anyway its cool, I like it alot.

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Originally Posted by Cptn.kewl

Its a still picture.
When you do an object and have its 3 face edges why are they black? Make them a lighter colour than all the main colour of the object.
When you have an object and have its 3 face edges why is there shading around the black lines? There is no reason for that at all
You put a shadow around everything
A darker line around every single thing in the alt - they are also completeley uneccessary.
The shading on the grass through the pillars holding up the bilbaord - Why is it like that? It should be on the ground around where the pillar stands not through it.
Nothing in the world would make the bilboard shadow go to the left and in the air. That needs to be fixed.
There is a green shadow around the orange boat that should be blue.
That is all from me now. There are still many more things to fix.
You put shading in too many places, in the wrong places and in unneccessary places.
And also one thing I noticed - Your light coming from things should be more like the light from lamps on habbo.
I wont rate it. Ill just give you one word.
poor

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A bit harsh there, it's very good, I don't think I could do something like that. 8/10.

Rob

9/10 so far, keep it up.

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Originally Posted by Cptn.kewl

Its a still picture.
When you do an object and have its 3 face edges why are they black? Make them a lighter colour than all the main colour of the object.
When you have an object and have its 3 face edges why is there shading around the black lines? There is no reason for that at all
You put a shadow around everything
A darker line around every single thing in the alt - they are also completeley uneccessary.
The shading on the grass through the pillars holding up the bilbaord - Why is it like that? It should be on the ground around where the pillar stands not through it.
Nothing in the world would make the bilboard shadow go to the left and in the air. That needs to be fixed.
There is a green shadow around the orange boat that should be blue.
That is all from me now. There are still many more things to fix.
You put shading in too many places, in the wrong places and in unneccessary places.
And also one thing I noticed - Your light coming from things should be more like the light from lamps on habbo.
I wont rate it. Ill just give you one word.
poor

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Its brilliant you idiot, everytime someone does an alt nearly as good as you, you call it rubbish, when people critisise your alts you give them warnings, whats your problem, this is a good alt and i think it deserves
10/10
Oh and one word for your moderator skills, poor

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Originally Posted by .:Subarusti:.

Its brilliant you idiot, everytime someone does an alt nearly as good as you, you call it rubbish, when people critisise your alts you give them warnings, whats your problem, this is a good alt and i think it deserves
10/10
Oh and one word for your moderator skills, poor

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I gave one person a warning because they broke the rules.
I spotted many errors in this piece and if you look at it you will see them.

8 out of 10...