Club I think. *WIP?*

[ItsDave]

Hi,
Ive been doing this alt for no reason. And erm, well I want your opinion on it. If theres anything I should add or take out or improve, please tell me, so rate /10 and c&c.

[Wayne]

I think it looks amazing. Great work, 10/10

Also, maybe add some cars parked up outside and some people getting out, or walking on the street outside the club.

[ItsDave]

Those people would be really hard to do, with all the pixels they'll be to big for it lol. But i will try and thanks for the comment.

[Wayne]

Those people would be really hard to do, with all the pixels they'll be to big for it lol. But i will try and thanks for the comment.

No problem. Whilst I was replying, I thought it would be hard to create some people so I was going to stop typing, but I suppose it will be a challenge.

[ItsDave]

Ok, doing the mini guys is really too hard as they'll look like stick men, so ive just added more cars, and as you can see theres a sports car getting impatient with the people's parking.

[OMGitsaROSS]

That one is uber


Maybe add a few lights pumping out

[Wayne]

Ok, doing the mini guys is really too hard as they'll look like stick men, so ive just added more cars, and as you can see theres a sports car getting impatient with the people's parking.

Lol at the skid mark.
The cars make it busier, so well done.

When you have time you should add disco lights on the outside of the club.

[ItsDave]

Headlights on the cars? Im on it!

[OMGitsaROSS]

lol and disco lights as said above


Headlights wood look good. Maybe the limo indicating to go in parking lot?

[Tristan]

Why is there something that looks like a car coming out the side of the club? Lols... The water looks to... 2d. Maybe adding some wave lines? But make them detailed not tacky Add a shark or something aswell

9/10