Medieval Set (w.i.p)

Hey, This Is My Medieval Set, Hope You Like It! It Is w.i.p So They Is More To Be Added!
Please Can YOu Rate Outa /10 and give c+c thank you much.

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l2...edievalSet.png

to be honest i dont like it, it just looks like steel give it more of a gravel stoney earthy look

The 4 grey squares look like they were took from the Urban furniture one, & you just drew lines on it. Sorry if they aren't, just saying thats all.

But, its pretty good, maybe dull the green colours a bit, as they seem to bright, and add shading (or more if you have shaded)

The vines are refloodippedid. They dont bend round to the left side and hit the wall to come out of, and theres no shading on anything. 3/10

If you don't add shading to your alts, they won't be bold enough. 5/10

Oh Well, Im Not Concentrating Enough Recently! Some Of You Guys Can Add/Alter Things Into/Onto It!

Good start, only 2-3 things i can complain about realy:
1:The Squares need to be made 3d, add a side to them to raise them from the normal floor.
2:Bookcase shelfs are deeper than the actual bookcase, most people do that wrong.
3:Maybe dull the vines and carry them on round the side.

As people said, shading, but that can be done later, the main shape of the furni needs to be done before shading.

so far: 6/10
fix the errors and i'd say: 7½/10

Here it is with the edited stuff:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y19...edievilset.png

Two Words
Crap soz >;[

Mr v0dor = QUEER

Hmm. The bookcase looks slightly too thin to be stone, & make the tiles more interesting...

There arent any cracks on the inside of the bookshelf... which there should be concidering there are some on the outside.

And Im not very fond of the fluorescent green cracks... Hmm.

On the other hand, I like the Idea.

3/10 .. Looks like a 30 min job..
Try making a Set without the Room..
Show us set but dont show us the room..
Wud be kool

looks terrible.
the vines should not have black lines but a dark green.
floor thing is flat more like 4 squares of carpet.
bookshelf needs shading and wud look better agaisnt wall
thing on wall isnt very gd
5/10