This is a live Preview:
http://primaldesigns.co.uk/117-LIVE%20PREVIEW/
This means its an image on the background.
I just put the text on there as if it was Primal Designs, although its for a completly different site.
Opinions and Critques
Thanks
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This is a live Preview:
http://primaldesigns.co.uk/117-LIVE%20PREVIEW/
This means its an image on the background.
I just put the text on there as if it was Primal Designs, although its for a completly different site.
Opinions and Critques
Thanks
I really love that i don't have any improvements well maybe change font in the banner thing!
That is a very good design Joe.
Just one point.
I don't like the copyright at the bottom due to the colour and how it looks cluttered with the links underneath it
Apart from that it is a very nice design and it is also very acesssible.
Thanks - The Primal Designs font is awful, but the text I wanted to use is around £25 and I can't find a similar one.
I was trying to fill the space with the logo and the image - And everything else. I had no other text to put there :S
Maybe try a nice clean 1 like amerika sans it's a nice font =]Quote:
Originally Posted by JoeComins
Hey.
I really like that. Like the colours and design of it all. Can't think of anything wrong with it. But i really like it.
I think banner slightly bigger.
And align the " about us, bit with " PRimal>About>designers> "
EDITED - Changed the font, and dropped the Content Header down 2px
Great but copyright sucks. Take it off.
I know you liked Constructive Criticism Joe so here is sone.
The header is awesome as it is just a logo and not cluttered but I think it could intergrate within the layout a bit instead of just transparency within the background.
You have gone for that mainstream navigation it seems where it is set as 100% width and I just don't like it, and the 100% width with that gradient makes it look awful on that background but thats just my opinion the a:hover on onMouseOver whichever you will use looks nice for the rollover.
The content section looks out of place and I just don't know why, perhaps because there is a lack of text followed by a large image with a somewhat obtrusive border for that setting but some some re-designing and adding some design principles it could look brilliant, try some filter text before re-designing though.
Everyone seems to have an issue with the copyright I think it's ok as it gives out the relevent information and intergrates within the layout very nicely, but you are missing a sitemap which isn't the best for SEO practices.
Hope you improve it some more.
A Sitestamp? This is just a layout that I made for the sake of it :)
Thanks Dan - Always love your critism
A Sitemap.. Like Google sitemaps =]]Quote:
Originally Posted by JoeComins
Ah Sorry - Im not reading - Its only an image anyway - Did it for practise, so it doesnt matter too much!
It's really great, Joe.
Keep it up.
+ rep. :)
It doesn't work for me:s
It loads for me ''/
It dont work for me either...
Did earlier
Tried it in firefox and it worked.
That is a NICE layout Joe.
great layout like usual. 9/10. Keep up the good work.
don't particularly like the colours, but never the less good design. may i ask who you made this for?
Ermmm banner gives it away?Quote:
Originally Posted by Always-Think
don't act smart
get your facts right. :rolleyes:Quote:
I just put the text on there as if it was Primal Designs, although its for a completly different site.
Don't act smart your a noob?Quote:
Originally Posted by Always-Think
oh great come back, i don't want to get any more infractions so meh.
(on topic: would you recommend any tutorials or tutorials site etc?)
Your right - It sucks
Im making a one right now for DanServ which I shal put up later
not so sure about the logo in the bottom corner "/
:o Love it!
love it however the bottom is too..different might be the word. I think you should make it look the same as the top :).
Not your best by any means.
I agree :).Quote:
Originally Posted by Adzat