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feel free to give advice and good rep! rate out of ten!click here!

:eusa_shif Rather Simple... 5/10 Though

thanks! but can you say whats wrong with it please? :D

Hmhm...very simple. You need to make the features of it stand out + the screen just looks like a box. Add a little stand for it at the bottom maybe. So far, 5/10 :)

yeah a little big,u need to define the puters features a little, add some shading. try looking around at other alts for some ideas

Ive added stand and changed screen colour what bout this?

That's better. Now maybe concentrate on the details on the actual comp [not the screen for the mo'] - have a go and lets see what you come up with! :D

needs betta shadin, umm, not all of it isometric :s, dont look habboish, pixel errors, bout a mil more otha fings :p 5/10 tho :p

Its shaded now what bout this?

It's ok, you have the right idea, needs shading, different colours obviously lol, different chape, try putting it on a desk. It's ok from scratch though. 2/10

Edit: Oh, I didnt see the new version, you should put it into the original thread. The new one is much better :). You should add buttons onto the tower and make it more curved or something, more modern. 5/10 on improved one :D

There are buttons on the tower! lol and by the way I have a screenie of u as a bunny on mi other comp