computer (scratch)

[anacanican]

feel free to give advice and good rep! rate out of ten!click here!

[.Amberz.]

:eusa_shif Rather Simple... 5/10 Though

[anacanican]

thanks! but can you say whats wrong with it please?

[OxfordScholar]

Hmhm...very simple. You need to make the features of it stand out + the screen just looks like a box. Add a little stand for it at the bottom maybe. So far, 5/10

[Yayse]

yeah a little big,u need to define the puters features a little, add some shading. try looking around at other alts for some ideas

[anacanican]

Ive added stand and changed screen colour what bout this?

[OxfordScholar]

That's better. Now maybe concentrate on the details on the actual comp [not the screen for the mo'] - have a go and lets see what you come up with!

[Cheeseboy76]

needs betta shadin, umm, not all of it isometric :s, dont look habboish, pixel errors, bout a mil more otha fings :p 5/10 tho :p

[anacanican]

Its shaded now what bout this?

[Roboevil]

It's ok, you have the right idea, needs shading, different colours obviously lol, different chape, try putting it on a desk. It's ok from scratch though. 2/10

Edit: Oh, I didnt see the new version, you should put it into the original thread. The new one is much better . You should add buttons onto the tower and make it more curved or something, more modern. 5/10 on improved one