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We want to know what you think of our all new newsletter! Not seen it yet? Check it out right here!
Anything you think we should change? Anything we should add or remove? Something missing? Something in the wrong place? What do you think of the format?
Whatever it is, we want to know so we can improve it for you in the future!
This is only the first issue but in the future it can only improve!
is there definately 5 differences??????
yep:eusa_danc
ones slightly harder to find than the others though
i found 4 including the one in the gradient but can't find the last one :\\
I can assure you there's 5 differences. I've treble checked now!!
Damn I wish I checked earlier.
Found all 5 :)
Well I sent mine off... idk when, about 10-15 mins ago but yeah, that was a sod for spot the diff.
Haha well you won then :) Well done.Quote:
Originally Posted by Pyroka
And I know! I was like ARGHH WHERE IS IT.
Yeah the last one was it? Cuz there was like 4 that were pretty obvious, then last one was like I MUST ZOOM IN ON THIS SCREENIE LOL. ******* hard though, I bet someone got it in before me though haha.
I thought i made it quite easy!
But enough of talking about spot the diff, feedback on newsletter please!!!
I was thinkin of a PDF version of the newsletter?
Summary and essay don't rhyme -rep Sammeth for the poem :@
Otherwise it's pretty good, covers a lot and it's nice too see comps having gotten up on their feet :P nice work everyone (except Sam obv)
Looks good =]
I do think it'd be better in a Habbohut style format loyk, yknow how theyve done their magazine, cuz a little website doesnt look like a newsletter, just looks like... a little website really.
LOL @ Sam's poem. I think it's looking pretty good. Quite large for a newsletter and as Pyroka pointed out, bit like a website but it's pretty darn good on the whole. Nice work :)!
I managed to find all 5 but I think the one everyone is finding the hardest was the one I found second.
someone tell the me the last one lol
:( :( :(Quote:
Originally Posted by FlyingJesus
We do exist... we just don't want to intimidate anyone by showing off how good we are :eusa_whis (waits for roxy and her 'events ftw' speech).
I think it's too long. Honestly; I'd only be prepared to read about half the content.
Oh well, each to their own.
I have to agree with that, it's enormous. I can't actually knock the content though, infrequent and the others have clearly put a lot of time into this and it's paid off (Well done btw). I know loads of stuff can entertain more people but I'm definite there is a bit too much, it'd take a good 30 minutes to read it all. I'd think about 10 articles max.Quote:
Originally Posted by BlueTango
I like the news letter, but I think there is FAR too much content, I mean I think it will be hell to update.
But yeah very pleased it, good luck.
there's way too much. i read the title of each section and was bored soon after. sorry :(
BUTTT... i found the five differences
I just found the 5 differences in about 2 mins, should have looked sooner!!! :P I wouldn't say there's too much content but perhaps a different layout could improve it. Rather than a long narrow content area, why not use up the whole width of the page and maybe use panels to space different sections around, (sort of like a comic strip/newspaper). I think this would look really attractive :).
thut up summary and essay rhyme like tom and ya mom.Quote:
Originally Posted by FlyingJesus
Yeah I think it's a tad too long myself too. Maybe thats something to build on for next time, but very good effort put in. Nice job guys.
So for next time, less content and potentially a new format!
Any other suggestions?
are the article/content staff-submitted or user submitted? i'm just curious about it.. :)
From the brummies I've spoken to I believe they do rhyme in brummie so we might have to forgive you :PQuote:
Originally Posted by Sammeth.
all of the ones in this issue were done by myself, managers and a few by alkaz and obviously sammeth did his poetry cornerQuote:
Originally Posted by emily965
next issue hopefully some will be user
Alot of it is repeated content from the website (Rare Watch etc) as far as I can make out (I'll admit to getting bored less than halfway, it's too long and feels like i'm on the site).
The album review is good, hopefully we'll see some better albums there. The layout does need some tweaking, to make it seem a little less to take in (example being the competitions where each competition takes up about 7 lines?!). I also think the images for each section are too big, which again makes it look even bigger.
Other than that, well done, it must have taken an age!
maybe do like drop down content box's
so like if someone knows they have no interest in rare values they won't click to expand the section about rare valuez
just a suggestion