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    I like the news letter, but I think there is FAR too much content, I mean I think it will be hell to update.

    But yeah very pleased it, good luck.

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    there's way too much. i read the title of each section and was bored soon after. sorry


    BUTTT... i found the five differences
    Last edited by myke; 10-11-2009 at 08:34 PM.

    drink up this bottle of yeah
    and P A I N T your body on me


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    I just found the 5 differences in about 2 mins, should have looked sooner!!! I wouldn't say there's too much content but perhaps a different layout could improve it. Rather than a long narrow content area, why not use up the whole width of the page and maybe use panels to space different sections around, (sort of like a comic strip/newspaper). I think this would look really attractive .

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    Quote Originally Posted by FlyingJesus View Post
    Summary and essay don't rhyme -rep Sammeth for the poem :@

    Otherwise it's pretty good, covers a lot and it's nice too see comps having gotten up on their feet nice work everyone (except Sam obv)
    thut up summary and essay rhyme like tom and ya mom.

    Yeah I think it's a tad too long myself too. Maybe thats something to build on for next time, but very good effort put in. Nice job guys.
    Sammeth.

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    So for next time, less content and potentially a new format!
    Any other suggestions?

    cake


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    are the article/content staff-submitted or user submitted? i'm just curious about it..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sammeth. View Post
    thut up summary and essay rhyme like tom and ya mom.

    Yeah I think it's a tad too long myself too. Maybe thats something to build on for next time, but very good effort put in. Nice job guys.
    From the brummies I've spoken to I believe they do rhyme in brummie so we might have to forgive you

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    Quote Originally Posted by emily965 View Post
    are the article/content staff-submitted or user submitted? i'm just curious about it..
    all of the ones in this issue were done by myself, managers and a few by alkaz and obviously sammeth did his poetry corner
    next issue hopefully some will be user

    cake


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    Alot of it is repeated content from the website (Rare Watch etc) as far as I can make out (I'll admit to getting bored less than halfway, it's too long and feels like i'm on the site).

    The album review is good, hopefully we'll see some better albums there. The layout does need some tweaking, to make it seem a little less to take in (example being the competitions where each competition takes up about 7 lines?!). I also think the images for each section are too big, which again makes it look even bigger.

    Other than that, well done, it must have taken an age!

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    maybe do like drop down content box's

    so like if someone knows they have no interest in rare values they won't click to expand the section about rare valuez

    just a suggestion

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