Reuploading My gallery v1

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07-04-2010, 06:47 AM
Anson

Reuploading My gallery v1

https://habbox.com/assets/images/97Ansonv1gallery.png
(sorry for big image)

Oh Lol ! stay tune for v2
07-04-2010, 08:47 AM
-Shakira:.

Don't like manga's espescially on Habbos
07-04-2010, 09:50 AM
Anson

erm can i ask why?
10-04-2010, 02:29 PM
Con

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Originally Posted by Anson

erm can i ask why?

It removes the "habbo quality". :) Putting manga faces on Habbos completely loses the habbo design for the face, in my opinion. A few nice things there :)
10-04-2010, 04:22 PM
dbgtz

What's the point in posting things you posted like 2 weeks ago, seriously? Especially when you don't bother to improve on them as the ones I commented on look exactly the same like no shading in the hair on the bottom right person. I've drawn a diagram to deal with some errors:
http://i42.tinypic.com/vhs20z.png
What you should do in future is set a pretend light source to help with shading, it made alot of my alts better when I was good.

Oh by the way, there are alot more but they're either minor or I cba to address them. Also I didn't bother with the emotics.
10-04-2010, 05:38 PM
Anson

well sorry for crapping your cornflake ._.
10-04-2010, 10:15 PM
dbgtz

Dude I'm trying to freaking help you. Why do people see real constructive criticism as them being flamed. Oh wait I know, because no one does real constructive criticism anymore because they're too freaking lazy. I only put it in a diagram so it was easy to understand. And I just realised the huge white blob bits I left on the right and bottom. I'd also like to add you should make the bottom ones iso and the metal styled ones looks nothing like habbo and the metal looks dull as I said on the previous threads.
10-04-2010, 10:20 PM
myke

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Originally Posted by mrselenagomez

What's the point in posting things you posted like 2 weeks ago, seriously? Especially when you don't bother to improve on them as the ones I commented on look exactly the same like no shading in the hair on the bottom right person. I've drawn a diagram to deal with some errors:
http://i42.tinypic.com/vhs20z.png
What you should do in future is set a pretend light source to help with shading, it made alot of my alts better when I was good.

Oh by the way, there are alot more but they're either minor or I cba to address them. Also I didn't bother with the emotics.

Where in this post have you mentioned anything positive about his work?
I see nothing positive there, so yes, it is likely to be taken as flaming in his eyes; you've got to remember that people put time and effort into the things they do (as I am sure you know because I know you used to make alts yourself), but when somebody finds nothing hood to say about their alterations it's disheartening. So to make your 'constructive criticism' more constructive, mention the positives of his work too, not just the negatives. :)

Anson, some good concepts there. The yellows you are using for the "gold statue" aren't right, try and make them less yellow and a bit more to the orange side. As Selena said, some of it lacks shading so try adding a bit more (but not too much), and a few of the perspectives are wrong, take Selena's advice with a pinch of salt. Keep up the good work.
10-04-2010, 11:04 PM
dbgtz

I said in previous threads of the same thing what I like, what's the point repeating them when he doesn't take proper criticism in to heart if you do. You have to be cruel to be kind, and that's a fact. I mean look at Simon Cowell. And my English teacher is horrid in class but it really helps.
10-04-2010, 11:19 PM
Cheryl

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Originally Posted by mrselenagomez

I said in previous threads of the same thing what I like, what's the point repeating them when he doesn't take proper criticism in to heart if you do. You have to be cruel to be kind, and that's a fact. I mean look at Simon Cowell. And my English teacher is horrid in class but it really helps.

exactly, if Simon Cowell just said everyone was good but he can only let a few through wth is the point?? They need to know what they are doing wrong surely
11-04-2010, 09:42 AM
myke

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Originally Posted by mrselenagomez

I said in previous threads of the same thing what I like, what's the point repeating them when he doesn't take proper criticism in to heart if you do. You have to be cruel to be kind, and that's a fact. I mean look at Simon Cowell. And my English teacher is horrid in class but it really helps.

Yeah but you're not Simon Cowell... and this is on a different level totally, I see no industry and I believe that he is in the younger range of the forum, constructive criticism is positive too, not just negative.
11-04-2010, 07:30 PM
lRhyss

Tbh I think there really quite good :P yes lacking in shading but good but I cant really talk anymore xD
11-04-2010, 08:05 PM
AppleChapstick.

Quote:

Originally Posted by mrselenagomez

What's the point in posting things you posted like 2 weeks ago, seriously? Especially when you don't bother to improve on them as the ones I commented on look exactly the same like no shading in the hair on the bottom right person. I've drawn a diagram to deal with some errors:
http://i42.tinypic.com/vhs20z.png
What you should do in future is set a pretend light source to help with shading, it made alot of my alts better when I was good.

Oh by the way, there are alot more but they're either minor or I cba to address them. Also I didn't bother with the emotics.

That actually looks really helpful, i can see why he would take it badly but he shouldn't. If nobody ever said anything critically then nothing would ever get better. I would be more than happy to receive constructive criticism from you. :)