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Oh Lol ! stay tune for v2

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Oh Lol ! stay tune for v2
Don't like manga's espescially on Habbos
erm can i ask why?
What's the point in posting things you posted like 2 weeks ago, seriously? Especially when you don't bother to improve on them as the ones I commented on look exactly the same like no shading in the hair on the bottom right person. I've drawn a diagram to deal with some errors:
What you should do in future is set a pretend light source to help with shading, it made alot of my alts better when I was good.
Oh by the way, there are alot more but they're either minor or I cba to address them. Also I didn't bother with the emotics.
well sorry for crapping your cornflake ._.
Dude I'm trying to freaking help you. Why do people see real constructive criticism as them being flamed. Oh wait I know, because no one does real constructive criticism anymore because they're too freaking lazy. I only put it in a diagram so it was easy to understand. And I just realised the huge white blob bits I left on the right and bottom. I'd also like to add you should make the bottom ones iso and the metal styled ones looks nothing like habbo and the metal looks dull as I said on the previous threads.
Where in this post have you mentioned anything positive about his work?What's the point in posting things you posted like 2 weeks ago, seriously? Especially when you don't bother to improve on them as the ones I commented on look exactly the same like no shading in the hair on the bottom right person. I've drawn a diagram to deal with some errors:
What you should do in future is set a pretend light source to help with shading, it made alot of my alts better when I was good.
Oh by the way, there are alot more but they're either minor or I cba to address them. Also I didn't bother with the emotics.
I see nothing positive there, so yes, it is likely to be taken as flaming in his eyes; you've got to remember that people put time and effort into the things they do (as I am sure you know because I know you used to make alts yourself), but when somebody finds nothing hood to say about their alterations it's disheartening. So to make your 'constructive criticism' more constructive, mention the positives of his work too, not just the negatives.![]()
Anson, some good concepts there. The yellows you are using for the "gold statue" aren't right, try and make them less yellow and a bit more to the orange side. As Selena said, some of it lacks shading so try adding a bit more (but not too much), and a few of the perspectives are wrong, take Selena's advice with a pinch of salt. Keep up the good work.
drink up this bottle of yeah
and P A I N T your body on me
I said in previous threads of the same thing what I like, what's the point repeating them when he doesn't take proper criticism in to heart if you do. You have to be cruel to be kind, and that's a fact. I mean look at Simon Cowell. And my English teacher is horrid in class but it really helps.
Last edited by dbgtz; 10-04-2010 at 11:06 PM.
exactly, if Simon Cowell just said everyone was good but he can only let a few through wth is the point?? They need to know what they are doing wrong surelyI said in previous threads of the same thing what I like, what's the point repeating them when he doesn't take proper criticism in to heart if you do. You have to be cruel to be kind, and that's a fact. I mean look at Simon Cowell. And my English teacher is horrid in class but it really helps.
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